Linguistic Gap Analysis
06 — Linguistic Gap Analysis: 1 Peter (Persian)
Purpose and Method
This analysis extends the Romans baseline Language Package to the 1 Peter curriculum. It builds directly on 08_core_glossary.md and the updated assets/bible_term_registry.json entries already drafted for this letter, and answers four PRD Step 8 questions:
- Per curriculum doctrine, which Persian terms are available, what are their specific weaknesses, and what translation strategy is recommended?
- Where does Persian have no adequate existing vocabulary (requiring new compounds/paraphrase), versus where does it have too much competing vocabulary already loaded with rival meaning (requiring deliberate semantic fencing)?
- Where should the translation transliterate (preserve a foreign/technical form) versus paraphrase (explain in native terms)?
- What are this letter’s highest-risk ambiguities, ranked?
Coverage spans 1 Peter 1–5 in full; every chapter has been reviewed. Chapters/passages contributing no new terminological risk beyond what is already logged are noted explicitly in Section 7.
All renderings below either reuse the Romans baseline exactly (marked [BASELINE]) or extend the provisional 1 Peter glossary already logged in bible_term_registry.json (marked [1PET]). This document does not introduce new canonical renderings; it organizes the existing decisions into gap-analysis form and flags where further Phase 1 steps (doctrine risk registry update, AI requirements update) must act.
Section 1 — Doctrine Vocabulary Matrix
Organized by the eight curriculum doctrines. “Available terms” lists real Persian candidates (not only the chosen one); “weakness” names the specific collision; “strategy” states the enforced decision.
1. The Living Hope of the Resurrection
| Concept | Available Persian terms | Weakness of each | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| Hope | امید (omid) / رجا (raja) | رجا is the direct Quranic-cognate term (Islamic rajā’), denoting hope held in tension with an uncertain final deeds-weighing verdict, not confident assurance | Use امید, qualified as امید زنده (“living hope”) [1PET], and teach explicitly that its ground is an accomplished, past-tense fact (the resurrection), not a hoped-for future outcome |
| Resurrection | قیامت (qiyamat) / رستاخیز (rastakhiz) / تناسخ (tanasokh — rejected) | قیامت is shared Quranic Judgment-Day vocabulary; رستاخیز is a rarer literary-secular alternative with weaker Christian-tradition attestation; تناسخ denotes reincarnation and must never be used | [BASELINE] قیامت retained; must be anchored to Christ’s own singular historical rising (1:3), not the general end-time resurrection of all humanity that قیامت can also denote in Islamic usage |
| Inheritance | میراث (miras) / ارث (ers) | Both are the live, everyday operative terms for Quranic fixed-share inheritance law (Surah 4:11-12) governing actual Iranian family estate division today | [1PET] Retain میراث (already the more theologically established choice) but require an explicit teaching gloss at every occurrence: unapportioned, unforfeitable, secured by union with the risen Christ — not divided by fixed shares among heirs |
| Imperishability | نابودنشدنی / نافانی / باقی | نافانی and باقی carry Sufi/Islamic ontological overtones (survival of the soul, God’s own attribute of Baqi, “the Everlasting,” one of the 99 Names) | [1PET] Use the more neutral, non-devotional-attribute compound نابودنشدنی to avoid implicitly attributing a divine Name-category to the believer’s inheritance |
| Christ’s return | ظهور (zohur) / رجعت (roj’at) / بازگشت (bazgasht) | ظهور is the fixed technical term for the Hidden Twelfth Imam’s awaited reappearance; رجعت carries its own Shia doctrinal loading (the return of certain deceased to witness the Imam’s rule) | [1PET] Retain ظهور (already lexically standard in Persian Bible tradition for ἀποκάλυψις) but mandate a repeated explicit doctrinal corrective at every occurrence distinguishing Christ’s own primary, exclusive return from Mahdi-centered expectation — see Section 5, Rank 2 |
2. Suffering for Righteousness’ Sake / Christ’s Substitutionary Suffering (treated jointly given their shared vocabulary)
| Concept | Available Persian terms | Weakness of each | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| Suffering | رنج (ranj) / درد (dard) / عذاب (azab) | رنج is the standard, least-loaded choice; عذاب carries strong punitive/hellish connotation (Quranic azab, torment) and must be avoided for believers’ innocent suffering; درد is narrower (physical pain only) | [1PET] رنج / رنج کشیدن retained throughout; require doctrine-note discipline (see Section 3) distinguishing Christ’s once-for-all atoning suffering from believers’ ongoing exemplary/participatory suffering |
| Substitutionary bearing of sin | بر خود گرفت (compound) vs. کفاره (kaffareh) | کفاره is the standard Islamic legal-ritual term for expiatory compensation (e.g., missed-fast compensation, oath-breaking atonement) — a repeatable, works-adjacent ritual-payment category | [1PET] Avoid کفاره entirely; retain the descriptive compound گناهان ما را بر خود گرفت, which narrates the action rather than naming it with a pre-loaded ritual-legal term |
| Ransom | فدیه (fidyeh) / فدا (feda) / تاوان (tavan) | فدیه is direct Quranic vocabulary (37:107) and a live, ongoing ritual-legal payment category (Ramadan fidyah); تاوان (penalty/compensation) is more neutral but weaker theologically, lacking sacrificial-substitution force | [1PET] Retain فدا شدید/فدیه per the existing registry entry, but this is the single term in the letter most requiring an explicit “once, not repeatable” doctrinal gloss, given its lexical proximity to a currently-practiced ritual obligation |
| Once-for-all finality | یکبار برای همیشه / یکبار برای ابد | No true one-word Persian equivalent for ἅπαξ’s forensic finality exists; both candidate phrases are compounds, not lexicon gaps | [1PET] Retain the compound یکبار برای همیشه; this is a genuine vocabulary gap requiring paraphrase, not a collision requiring fencing (see Section 2) |
| Participatory suffering | مشارکت در رنج / شریک شدن در رنج | مشارکت shares its ش-ر-ک root with shirk (already flagged in the Romans baseline for “fellowship”); شریک شدن (to become a partner/sharer) intensifies this same root-resonance and additionally suggests co-equal partnership | [1PET] Retain در رنجهای مسیح مشارکت کردن (already established) but this is the single highest-risk phrase in the entire letter — see Section 5, Rank 1 |
3. The Church as a Holy and Royal Priesthood
| Concept | Available Persian terms | Weakness of each | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| Priesthood | كهانت (kahanat) / روحانیت (ruhaniyat) | روحانیت is the standing, everyday Persian term for Iran’s actual ordained clerical class (mullahs, ayatollahs) and would directly assert that every believer holds ordained clerical office — an overcorrection; كهانت is more OT-cultic-specific and less tied to the present clerical establishment | [1PET] Retain كهانت مقدس / كهانت سلطنتی; explicitly avoid روحانیت, which would collapse the very hierarchy Peter’s text dismantles back into a clerical-class category |
| Spiritual house / church | خانه روحانی / كلیسا / امت | كلیسا is baseline-established for ἐκκλησία but Peter’s Greek text itself does not use that word here; امت remains permanently rejected (Ummah-root) | [1PET] Use خانه روحانی only where the Greek has οἶκος πνευματικός (2:5); do not substitute كلیسا, preserving Peter’s own distinct ecclesial metaphor-set |
| Chosen/royal/holy people cluster | نسل، قوم، ملت | ملت (nation-state) carries nationalist-political overtones inappropriate for a spiritually-constituted people, and risks entanglement with Iran’s own state-nation rhetoric | [1PET] قوم preferred over ملت throughout (2:9-10); نسل reserved for the lineage/generation sense, explicitly glossed as non-ethnic |
| Spiritual sacrifice | قربانی روحانی / قربانی | Bare قربانی alone risks being read literally against the salient cultural backdrop of Eid-e Qorban’s actual animal sacrifice | [1PET] Always pair with روحانی qualifier, never used unqualified in this doctrine’s passages (2:5) |
4. Submission to Authority and Christlike Endurance
| Concept | Available Persian terms | Weakness of each | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| Submission | تابع بودن / اطاعت کردن / تسلیم شدن | تسلیم شدن (“to submit/surrender”) is etymologically and devotionally the closest Persian equivalent to the Arabic root of “Islam” itself (taslim/islam = submission/surrender to God) and risks collapsing NT ethical submission into the very identity-marker of the surrounding majority religion | [1PET] Use تابع بودن (civil/domestic contexts) and اطاعت کردن (general obedience); avoid تسلیم شدن for ὑποτάσσω throughout the letter |
| Human ruler (“king”) | پادشاه / رهبر / ولی فقیه (rejected) | Any term evoking Iran’s constitutional Supreme Leader office (Vali-ye Faqih/Rahbar) would improperly politicize 2:13-17’s civil-submission instruction | [1PET] پادشاه retained as the historically-distanced, depoliticized choice |
| Domestic “lord” (3:6) | آقا / خداوند (rejected here) | خداوند must remain exclusively reserved for Christ’s divine title per the baseline; using it for Sarah’s address to Abraham would dilute that reservation at the one point in the letter where the same Greek word (κύριος) appears in a plainly human, non-titular sense | [1PET] آقا mandated for 3:6 only; this is a segment-level exception requiring a standing validation-rule flag (see AI requirements update) |
| “Weaker vessel” | ظرف ضعیفتر / جنس ضعیف | جنس ضعیف (“the weaker sex/gender”) risks a categorical, essentialist reading beyond Peter’s narrower physical-strength point | [1PET] ظرف ضعیفتر (vessel imagery) preferred; must always appear paired with “joint heirs” in the same teaching unit |
5. Elders and Humility
| Concept | Available Persian terms | Weakness of each | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| Elder | کشیشان / مشایخ / شیخ / پیر | مشایخ/شیخ collide doubly: (a) Shia clerical rank terminology, (b) Sufi spiritual-master honorific; پیر (elder/Sufi master) carries the same mystical-authority loading | [1PET] کشیشان retained as the least-loaded option, though it itself imports a post-Reformation “clergy” flavor foreign to Peter’s plural, non-hierarchical, congregationally-embedded eldership — flagged as an imperfect-but-best-available choice, not a clean fit |
| Chief Shepherd | شبان اعظم / رهبر اعظم / ولی امر (rejected) | ولی امر (“guardian of the affairs,” a title applied to the Supreme Leader) must never be used, being a live political-religious title; رهبر اعظم (“supreme leader,” literal) risks direct political namesake collision | [1PET] شبان اعظم (pastoral-shepherd register, not political-ruler register) mandated; must be taught with explicit, deliberate contrast to Iran’s actual Supreme Leader office |
| Humility | تواضع / فروتنی | فروتنی is a plainer native-Persian synonym with less devotional weight; تواضع shares its root with Arabic/Islamic tawadu’ | [1PET] تواضع retained as the positive bridge term, but must be anchored to the Proverbs 3:34 citation and Christ’s own pattern, not generic social etiquette |
6. Christ’s Proclamation to the Spirits (1 Peter 3:18-22)
| Concept | Available Persian terms | Weakness of each | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| Spirits in prison | ارواح در بند / اجنه (rejected) / جن (rejected) | اجنه/جن (jinn) is the dominant, deeply active Iranian folk-Islamic category for unseen spirit-beings (possession, exorcism, amulets; attested in Quran 72) | [1PET] ارواح در بند / روحهای زندانی mandated; جن/اجنه forbidden substitutions requiring an explicit standing validation rule |
| Proclaimed | اعلام کرد / بشارت داد (rejected here) | بشارت داد (evangelized) would imply an offer of salvation extended to imprisoned spirits, teaching an unwarranted post-mortem second chance | [1PET] اعلام کرد (neutral herald-verb) mandated specifically for 3:19; بشارت داد remains correct and required for 1:12,25; 4:6’s separate εὐαγγελίζω occurrences — this is a same-root, different-verb disambiguation requiring careful segment-level tracking |
| Baptism | تعمید / غسل تعمید | غسل (ghusl) shares its root with the major Islamic ritual major-ablution term (ghusl) performed after specific states of impurity | [1PET] تعمید alone preferred over غسل تعمید to reduce the ghusl-resonance; Peter’s own explicit disclaimer clause (“not a removal of dirt from the body”) must be translated with full, unreduced force alongside the positive statement |
| Gospel to the dead | به مردگان بشارت داده شد | No single-term issue; the risk is doctrinal-sequencing (this verse plus 3:19 read together) rather than lexical | [1PET] Retain literal rendering; the safeguard is a mandatory paired teaching-note distinguishing 4:6 from 3:19, not a lexical substitution |
7. Holiness in Conduct
| Concept | Available Persian terms | Weakness of each | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| Born again | تولد تازه / تولد دوباره | تولد دوباره is a slightly more literal calque, functionally interchangeable, but تولد تازه is the term already established as a self-designation among Iranian Protestant/house-church converts | [1PET] تولد تازه retained as the existing convert-identity asset; must be distinguished from Sufi فنا (fana, mystical self-annihilation/rebirth as an achieved contemplative state) |
| Word of God | کلام خدا / کلمه خدا | کلمه خدا risks direct overlap with the Quranic Christological title “Kalimat Allah”/“Kalimatuhu” applied to Isa himself (Quran 4:171) | [1PET] کلام خدا preferred over کلمه خدا specifically to create lexical distance from the Quranic Christological title, while still requiring an explicit teaching note that this phrase denotes the gospel-message/scripture, not Christ’s person |
| Reverent fear | ترس / خداترسی / تقوا (rejected) | تقوا (taqwa, God-consciousness) is embedded in Islam’s deeds-weighing framework of uncertain final judgment, which would reintroduce the very anxiety Peter’s filial-fear concept excludes | [1PET] ترس/خداترسی retained; تقوا rejected as a substitute despite superficial semantic proximity |
Section 2 — Missing Vocabulary Requiring New Compounds or Paraphrase
These are concepts for which no single existing Persian word carries the needed sense; Persian must build a compound, and no rival-meaning collision is the primary concern (contrast with Section 3).
| Concept | Gap | Compound solution |
|---|---|---|
| Living hope (ἐλπὶς ζῶσα) | No noun-adjective pairing in ordinary Persian applies “living/alive” to abstract hope | امید زنده — a coined-but-transparent compound, now established via this glossary |
| Tested genuineness of faith (τὸ δοκίμιον τῆς πίστεως) | No single word for “proven-genuine-through-testing” applied to faith | خلوص آزمودهشده ایمان — three-word compound; must remain stable across 1:7 and its 4:12 fiery-trial echo |
| Once for all (ἅπαξ) | No adverb carries forensic non-repeatability in one word | یکبار برای همیشه |
| Bore our sins (substitutionary) | No single verb captures Isaiah 53’s sacrificial “bearing-up” sense | گناهان ما را بر خود گرفت — deliberately narrative rather than technical, to avoid smuggling in a ritual-legal term like کفاره |
| Put to death in flesh, made alive in spirit | No compact phrase preserves both the bodily-death and bodily-resurrection sense against a “merely spiritual survival” misreading | کشته شد در جسم، زنده شد در روح, always paired with an explicit note affirming bodily resurrection |
| Chief Shepherd | No existing single title in Persian church usage predates this text | شبان اعظم — new coinage, deliberately in pastoral rather than political register |
| Weaker vessel | No idiomatic Persian container-metaphor for a person exists | ظرف ضعیفتر — literal calque, requires explanatory gloss, not idiomatic on its own |
| Unfading crown of glory | No compact single-word “unfading-glory-crown” exists | تاج جلالِ تغییرناپذیر — three-element compound |
| Spirit of Christ (as OT-active) | No existing phrase distinguishes this from ordinary “Holy Spirit” in Persian church usage | روح مسیح — retained as a distinct, sharper phrase requiring its own explanatory note |
Implication: These gaps are not primarily doctrinal-collision risks (no rival tradition-loaded term competes for the space) but clarity risks: without a stable, memorized compound, translators may drift toward ad hoc paraphrase across documents, breaking learner consistency. All compounds above must be locked in translation memory before Phase 2 begins.
Section 3 — Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods Requiring Fencing
These are the inverse problem: Persian has abundant, well-established vocabulary in the neighborhood, but every candidate carries unwanted doctrinal freight from a specific rival tradition. “Fencing” means the chosen term must be hedged with mandatory, repeated doctrinal notes at every occurrence — a single glossary entry is not sufficient risk mitigation.
| Semantic neighborhood | Competing terms in the neighborhood | Rival tradition anchor | Fencing requirement |
|---|---|---|---|
| Suffering / martyrdom-devotion | رنج، عذاب، شهادت (shahadat, martyrdom) | Twelver Shia Ashura/Muharram devotional culture: Imam Hussein’s innocent suffering, ritually re-experienced annually, believed to carry intercessory benefit | Every occurrence of رنج in a Christological or believer-suffering context (nearly the whole letter) requires the doctrine-note discipline distinguishing (a) Christ’s unique atoning suffering, (b) believers’ non-atoning exemplary/participatory suffering, (c) neither being a Karbala-style ritual re-enactment. شهادت (martyrdom) must never be used for believers’ suffering, given its heavy Shia doctrinal freight around the Imams’ deaths |
| Christ’s return | ظهور، رجعت، بازگشت | Mahdi-centered Twelver Shia eschatology (Hidden Twelfth Imam) | ظهور retained (lexically standard) but fenced with mandatory repeated assertion of Christ’s own primary/exclusive return at 1:7, 1:13 |
| Clerical/priestly office | كهانت، روحانیت، طبقه روحانی | Iran’s constitutionally entrenched clerical hierarchy (Velayat-e Faqih; mullahs, mujtahids, ayatollahs) | كهانت مقدس/سلطنتی fenced by explicit universal-priesthood teaching at every occurrence (2:5, 2:9); روحانیت excluded from candidate pool entirely |
| Ritual purification | تعمید، غسل، وضو | Daily-practice Islamic ritual ablutions (wudu, ghusl) | تعمید fenced by mandatory preservation of Peter’s own textual disclaimer (3:21b) every time 3:21 is taught, never presented as the positive clause alone |
| Inheritance law | میراث، ارث، سهم الارث | Quranic fixed-share inheritance law (4:11-12), a live, everyday Iranian civil-legal category | میراث fenced with an explicit “non-apportioned, unforfeitable” doctrinal gloss at 1:4 and 3:7 |
| Ransom/expiation | فدیه، فدا، کفاره، تاوان | Quranic fidyah (37:107) and the ongoing ritual-legal practice of Ramadan fidyah payments; کفاره as a parallel expiatory-payment category | فدیه fenced with an explicit “once, unrepeatable, personal” gloss at 1:18-19; کفاره excluded entirely from the candidate pool for 2:24/1:18 |
| Submission/obedience | تابع بودن، اطاعت کردن، تسلیم شدن | Islam’s own name/root meaning (“submission/surrender to God”) | تسلیم شدن excluded entirely as a rendering of ὑποτάσσω anywhere in the letter; تابع بودن/اطاعت کردن fenced with the fruit-not-ground caution already established in the Romans baseline for obedience_of_faith |
| Fellowship/participation root (شرک) | مشارکت، شریک شدن، انبازی | Shirk (idolatrous partnership), the paradigm sin-category in both Sunni and Shia tawhid theology | Already flagged in the Romans baseline as a tolerated low-level resonance for ordinary “fellowship”; in 1 Peter 4:13 this resonance compounds with the suffering-neighborhood risk above, producing the letter’s single highest combined-risk phrase (see Section 5, Rank 1) |
| Grace / commendable conduct | فیض، پسندیده، قابل ستایش، لطف | Feyz’s emanationist philosophical loading (as in Romans) plus the letter’s own internal second, non-soteriological sense at 2:19-20 | فیض fenced exactly as in the Romans baseline for soteriological occurrences; MUST NOT be used at 2:19-20, where پسندیده/قابل ستایش is mandated instead — an intra-letter homonym-fencing case unique to 1 Peter |
| Fear/reverence | ترس، خداترسی، تقوا، هراس | تقوا’s embeddedness in the Islamic deeds-weighing framework of uncertain final judgment | ترس/خداترسی fenced with an explicit note that this fear flows from an already-secured filial relationship (1:17), not judgment-uncertainty |
Section 4 — Transliteration vs. Paraphrase Decisions
Following the baseline’s practice (retaining Abba, Amen, Hallelujah as transliterations while translating theological content), this letter requires the following decisions:
Transliterate (preserve foreign/proper-noun form, per established Persian Christian Bible tradition):
- Proper names: عیسی (Isa), مسیح (Masih), پطرس (Petros/Peter — new for this curriculum; not present in Romans), پولس is not present in 1 Peter but سیلوانوس (Silvanus, 5:12) and مرقس (Mark, 5:13) are — both require established Tarjome Ghadeem/Mojdeh forms, not novel transliterations
- Place names (1:1): پونتوس (Pontus), غلاطیه (Galatia), کاپادوکیه (Cappadocia), آسیا (Asia), بیطینیه (Bithynia) — use the same established forms already fixed in Persian Bible tradition for Acts/the Pauline epistles; do not re-transliterate independently
- نوح (Noah) — already shared Quranic-Persian form, transliterate consistently
- بابل (Babylon, 5:13, likely code for Rome) — retain literal transliteration; a footnote may gloss the probable referent, but the text itself should not silently substitute “Rome”
Do NOT transliterate (paraphrase/translate into native theological vocabulary):
- ἀπολογία (3:15) — translate as پاسخ/دفاع, not a Greek-derived loan; the concept needs indigenized force given its real legal-interrogation stakes for the audience
- ὑπογραμμός (2:21) — translate as سرمشق/نمونه; a transliterated Greek loan would carry no meaning to the target reader
- ἀρχιποίμην (5:4) — translate as شبان اعظم; no transliteration precedent exists in Persian Bible tradition for this compound title
Borderline case requiring a documented decision:
- ζωοποιηθεὶς πνεύματι (3:18) — decision made to paraphrase as زنده شد در روح rather than coin a technical term, because the interpretive question (bodily vs. non-bodily) is precisely what is at doctrinal stake; a paraphrase that stays close to ordinary language, paired with a mandatory explanatory note, is safer than a technical compound that might appear to settle the question wordlessly.
Section 5 — Ranked List of Highest-Risk Ambiguities in 1 Peter
Ranked by combined severity (doctrinal centrality × cultural-collision intensity × frequency), highest first. All Rank 1–7 items require human theologian review routing per the doctrine risk registry framework.
- در رنجهای مسیح مشارکت کردن (4:13, “share in Christ’s sufferings”) — the single most precise structural echo of a specific Shia devotional practice (Ashura sineh-zani/qama-zani ritual “sharing” in Hussein’s suffering) found anywhere in this curriculum; combines two independently risky roots (مشارکت’s shirk-resonance, رنج’s Karbala-resonance) in one compound phrase.
- ظهور for Christ’s return (1:7, 1:13) — fixed technical vocabulary of the Hidden Twelfth Imam’s awaited reappearance; used repeatedly at the letter’s theological high points (testing-unto-glory, hope set fully on grace to be revealed).
- ارواح در بند / spirits in prison (3:19) — direct collision with the pervasive, actively-practiced Iranian folk-Islamic jinn paradigm; compounded by the passage’s inherent interpretive difficulty even in the source text.
- كهانت مقدس / كهانت سلطنتی (2:5, 2:9) — confronts a live constitutional structure (Velayat-e Faqih) rather than an abstract theological rival; mistranslation risks either muting the doctrine’s force or making it sound like incitement to religious-political change rather than an ecclesiological claim.
- تعمید’s disclaimer clause (3:21) — the doctrinal safeguard is contained in a subordinate clause that could easily be dropped or softened in translation/paraphrase, right where the collision with wudu/ghusl is most acute.
- میراث (1:4, 3:7) — a live, everyday operative legal term; risk is less about outright doctrinal denial than about quiet, unnoticed conceptual substitution (readers assuming Quranic fixed-share logic without any signal that a different framework is in view).
- فدیه/فدا شدید (1:18) — direct lexical overlap with an ongoing, currently-practiced ritual-legal payment category (Ramadan fidyah); risk of readers assimilating Christ’s ransom into a repeatable compensatory-payment logic.
- مسیحی as identity-term (4:16) — not a translation-accuracy risk but a real-world safety/status risk: the same word carries protected-minority status for some readers and acute apostasy-related legal exposure for others; teaching materials must carry this awareness, not just the correct gloss.
- خداوند vs. آقا (3:6) — low frequency (one occurrence) but structurally important: a single missed disambiguation would directly dilute the letter’s otherwise-consistent reservation of خداوند for Christ’s exclusive Lordship.
- فیض’s dual sense (throughout vs. 2:19-20) — an intra-letter homonym risk unique to this curriculum; a translator following “translation memory says فیض” mechanically at 2:19-20 would introduce a doctrinal error by importing soteriological grace into an ethical-commendation statement.
- کشیشان vs. مشایخ/شیخ (5:1, 5:5) — lower per-occurrence severity than Ranks 1-10 but structurally significant because it is this letter’s primary term for church office and interacts directly with the priesthood-of-all-believers doctrine (Rank 4).
- شبان اعظم (5:4) — political-register collision risk with Iran’s Supreme Leader office is real but lower-frequency (single occurrence) and more easily contained by a single strong teaching note than Ranks 1-5.
- کلام خدا (1:23, 4:11) — risk is subtler (a title collision, not a doctrine-denial collision) since the Quranic “Kalimat Allah” reference is to Christ’s person, not scripture; still requires explicit disambiguation given the same underlying phrase.
- گناهان ما را بر خود گرفت vs. کفاره-adjacent readings (2:24) — risk is that even with the correct non-کفاره rendering chosen, hearers steeped in the کفاره/expiatory-payment framework may still assimilate the concept informally; requires reinforcing teaching, not merely correct lexical choice.
Section 6 — Cross-Reference to Prior Artifacts
- All Persian renderings named above are already recorded, with full doctrinal notes, in the updated
bible_term_registry.jsonentries drafted for 1 Peter and in08_core_glossary.md. - This document performs no new term selection; it re-organizes those same decisions by (a) doctrine, (b) gap-type (missing vs. crowded), (c) transliteration policy, and (d) risk ranking, as required by PRD Step 8.
- The ranked list in Section 5 should directly inform the Step 9
doctrine_risk_registry.jsonupdate (new doctrine entries for the eight curriculum doctrines) and the Step 12 AI translation requirements update (new FORBIDDEN SUBSTITUTIONS and ESCALATION RULES entries for 1 Peter-specific terms: جن/اجنه for spirits in prison, کفاره for bore-our-sins/ransom, تسلیم شدن for submission, روحانیت for priesthood, ولی امر/رهبر اعظم for Chief Shepherd, شریک شدن as an alternate for share-in-sufferings).
Section 7 — Full-Book Coverage Confirmation
Every chapter of 1 Peter has been reviewed for this gap analysis:
- Chapter 1 (1:1-25): reviewed — living hope, resurrection, inheritance, testing/genuineness, ζωήν/ἀποκάλυψις (ظهور), ransom, lamb imagery, born again, word of God, reverent fear, love (agapē), soul. All addressed in Sections 1-5 above.
- Chapter 2 (2:1-25): reviewed — living stone, cornerstone, spiritual house, holy/royal priesthood, chosen race/holy nation, Gentiles, submission (civil and household), grace (commendable sense), example/pattern, sin-bearing, healing-by-wounds. All addressed above.
- Chapter 3 (3:1-22): reviewed — wife/husband submission, weaker vessel, domestic “lord,” gentle/quiet spirit, will of God, good conscience, defense/apologia, suffering for righteousness, once-for-all, substitution, put-to-death/made-alive, proclamation to spirits in prison, Noah, baptism, angelic subjection. All addressed above.
- Chapter 4 (4:1-19): reviewed — fiery trial, sharing in Christ’s sufferings, reproach for Christ’s name, Christian identity, gospel to the dead, love covers sins, hospitality, spiritual gifts, household of God, faithful Creator. All addressed above.
- Chapter 5 (5:1-14): reviewed — elders, shepherd/oversight, shameful gain, Chief Shepherd, unfading crown, humility, devil, kiss of love, closing benediction (peace/grace). All addressed above.
No chapter was found to contribute terminology outside the scope already captured in the doctrine vocabulary matrix, gap sections, and ranked ambiguity list above.