Linguistic Gap Analysis — Mark 1–16 (Persian)

0. Methodology and Scope

This is PRD Phase 1 Step 8 for the Mark curriculum. It extends, and must never contradict, the baseline Romans Language Package for Persian. All Romans-established renderings (انجیل, فیض, ایمان, عدالت, نجات, پسر خدا, خداوند, ناموس, روح‌القدس, غیریهودیان, etc.) are treated as fixed inputs; this analysis addresses only (a) how those established terms behave differently under Mark’s narrative-Gospel genre and christological load, and (b) the substantial body of new vocabulary Mark introduces that has no Romans precedent (Son of Man, ransom, cup of suffering, Messianic Secret vocabulary, exorcism terms, purity terms, etc.).

The analysis is anchored theologically in the core passage, Mark 10:35-45 (James and John’s request for status; the Son of Man’s authority-through-service; “a ransom for many”), because this passage concentrates five of the eight curriculum doctrines at once: Servanthood versus Worldly Greatness, The Ransom for Many, The Necessity of the Cross (implied in the cup/baptism sayings, 10:38-39), Jesus as Suffering Servant and Son of God (Son of Man title, v.45), and Providence/the Father’s sovereign assignment (v.40). But scope is the full book, chapter 1 to 16, per the full-coverage mandate below.

Full-book coverage was already established at the term level in analysis/08_core_glossary.md and the Mark additions to bible_term_registry.json. This document performs the required Step 8 analytic work on top of that inventory: a doctrine-vocabulary matrix, missing-vocabulary vs. crowded-neighborhood mapping, transliteration/paraphrase adjudication, and a ranked risk list.

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1. Full-Chapter Coverage Ledger

Every chapter of Mark was reviewed for load-bearing vocabulary and doctrine content. Chapters not separately discussed in Sections 2–6 below contributed no new linguistic-gap items beyond what is already logged in 08_core_glossary.md / the Mark bible_term_registry.json additions, and are recorded here as explicitly reviewed.

Ch.	Reviewed	Load-bearing content	Disposition
1	✅	Gospel-title use (1:1), John’s baptism/repentance, Holy Spirit descent, temptation/Satan, first exorcism (1:23-27), authority (ἐξουσία), healing, Sabbath, clean/unclean (leper)	Covered in Sections 2–6
2	✅	Forgiveness of sins (2:1-12), Son of Man (2:10, 28), Sabbath/Lord of the Sabbath	Covered
3	✅	Apostles named (3:14), blasphemy against the Spirit (3:28-29), Satan/house divided, Boanerges	Covered
4	✅	Parable, mystery, Kingdom of God growth-parables	Covered
5	✅	Unclean spirit (Legion), σῴζω dual-sense healing (5:23,28,34), Talitha koum	Covered
6	✅	Sending of the Twelve, John the Baptist as prophet, feeding of 5000, “I am” (6:50), σῴζω (6:56)	Covered
7	✅	Tradition vs. command of God, Korban, clean/unclean fully developed, Syrophoenician woman/Gentiles, Ephphatha	Covered
8	✅	Peter’s confession (Christ), first Passion prediction (δεῖ, πάσχω), cross/self-denial (8:34), glory (8:38), Son of Man suffering	Covered — high doctrinal density
9	✅	Transfiguration, Beloved, Elijah/prophet questions, second Passion prediction, unbelief (9:24), Gehenna, unclean spirit (boy)	Covered — high doctrinal density
10	✅	Core passage (10:35-45): cup, baptism (figurative), Son of Man, ransom, ἀντί, πολλῶν, servant/slave, authority, providence (10:40); also divorce/Law, kingdom-childlikeness, rich young man/eternal life, third Passion prediction, Son of David (Bartimaeus)	Primary anchor — Sections 2–6 fully developed
11	✅	Hosanna, Temple entry/cleansage, Lord (11:3,9), authority question (11:28-33), fig tree	Covered
12	✅	Son of David / David as author question (12:35-37), Law summary (love command), widow’s mite, resurrection debate (Sadducees, 12:18-27)	Covered
13	✅	Temple destruction, false messiahs/prophets, election/the elect, watchfulness, Gospel to all nations, Holy Spirit in testimony	Covered
14	✅	Last Supper (body/blood/covenant), Gethsemane (Abba, cup), betrayal (παραδίδωμι), “I am” (14:62), trial/blasphemy charge, cry anticipated	Covered — high doctrinal density
15	✅	Crucifixion, cry of dereliction (15:34), veil torn (15:38), centurion’s confession (15:39)	Covered — climactic christological chapter
16	✅	Resurrection (16:6), Great Commission-adjacent sending (16:15)	Covered — climactic resolution

No chapter is silently omitted. Chapters 8–10 and 14–15 carry the heaviest doctrinal load for this curriculum’s eight named doctrines and receive the most detailed treatment below.

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2. Doctrine Vocabulary Matrix

For each of the eight curriculum doctrines: available Persian terms, their specific weaknesses, and the recommended strategy. This matrix governs Phase 1 Step 9 (core glossary confirmation) and must be read together with 08_core_glossary.md.

2.1 Jesus as the Suffering Servant and Son of God

Available Persian terms	Weakness	Recommended strategy
پسر خدا (Son of God) — baseline, reused	None independent of baseline; risk is Mark-specific in placement (centurion’s confession, 15:39)	Retain exactly; never soften. Teach 15:39 as the narrative’s climactic, outsider-spoken confirmation
پسر انسان (Son of Man) — new	At face value reads as a mere self-reference to humanity/mortality (“a son of man” = “a human being” in ordinary Persian), which reinforces rather than complicates the Quranic “merely human prophet” default	Retain literal رendering (no viable alternative — it is a fixed repeated title); mandatory Daniel 7:13-14 catechesis paired with every occurrence, not left to context alone
خادم رنجدیده (a possible coinage for “Suffering Servant,” combining خادم + رنج‌دیده)	Not attested in Persian Bible tradition as a fixed title; risks being read as a novel descriptive phrase rather than an OT-rooted title (Isaiah 53)	Do not coin a new fixed title. Render Isaiah-53 echoes descriptively in context (رنج کشیدن + خادم) rather than manufacturing a new capitalized title Persian readers have never encountered
من هستم (ego eimi) — new	Persian “من هستم” is not idiomatic self-identification (colloquial Persian would say “منم”); the deliberate awkwardness must be preserved, not smoothed	Retain من هستم precisely because it is slightly marked/formal, preserving the possible Exodus 3:14 resonance at 14:62

Gap identified: Persian has no existing fixed theological compound for “Suffering Servant” as a title (unlike پسر خدا or مسیح). This is a genuine missing-vocabulary item — see Section 3.

2.2 The Kingdom of God Breaking In

Available terms	Weakness	Strategy
ملکوت خدا — baseline, reused	Mark’s parables (ch. 4) stress gradual, hidden, organic in-breaking (seed growing secretly, mustard seed) — a nuance the noun phrase itself does not carry	Reinforce through verb choice around the noun (e.g., “ملکوت خدا در حال گستردن است” — “is spreading/advancing”) rather than static “is here”; avoid framing that suggests sudden political establishment, given Velayat-e Faqih associations already flagged in baseline
مثل (parable) — new	Everyday transparent word; carries none of the dual reveal/conceal function of παραβολή in 4:11-12	Explicit teaching required at every parable-chapter occurrence; cannot rely on the word itself to signal the concealment function
راز (mystery) — new	Strong pull toward Sufi اسرار (esoteric gnosis for an initiated elite)	Must be glossed as openly proclaimed, not restricted, content — direct tension with the word’s own connotation, requiring active correction rather than passive reliance on context

Gap identified: No single Persian word captures “in-breaking” (an already-but-not-yet, progressively arriving reign) without supplementary phrasing. See Section 3.

2.3 Faith and Discipleship amid Fear

Available terms	Weakness	Strategy
ایمان (faith) — baseline, reused	Shia iman’s creedal/Imamate-assent layer (per baseline) persists in Mark’s healing-faith contexts; Mark’s faith is often desperate, embodied trust in a crisis (5:34; 9:24) rather than propositional	Anchor faith consistently to trust in Jesus personally in the healing/exorcism narratives, not creedal content
بی‌ایمانی (unbelief) — new	Persian devotional culture (shared with Islamic piety) treats voiced doubt as shameful; 9:24’s “help my unbelief” runs directly against this	Teach explicitly as a model utterance, not a confession of disqualifying failure
ترس (fear) / نترسید (do not be afraid) — general vocabulary, not flagged in glossary but load-bearing for this doctrine (4:40; 5:36; 6:50; 9:6; 16:8)	ترس is unmarked, low-risk vocabulary, but the doctrine “Faith and Discipleship amid Fear” requires it be paired consistently with faith-language so the curriculum’s thematic pairing is visible in translation, not just in English lesson framing	Recommend adding ترس/نترسید as a tracked (Low risk) term in translation memory for consistency across lesson materials, even though it needs no doctrinal correction itself
بیدار باشید / هوشیار باشید (watchfulness) — new	Must be distinguished from Mahdi-occultation-and-reappearance popular apocalyptic expectation	Teach as readiness rooted in Christ’s own certain, already-accomplished work, not speculative timeline-watching

Gap identified: No existing flagged entry for “fear” (φόβος/φοβέομαι) despite its structural importance to this specific curriculum doctrine (the disciples’ fear at sea, at the transfiguration, at the empty tomb). Recommend promoting it to tracked status. See Section 3.

2.4 The Necessity of the Cross

Available terms	Weakness	Strategy
باید (حتماً باید) (dei) — new	Ordinary باید is too weak for binding divine necessity; without intensification reads as mere advisability	Mandatory intensified construction at all three Passion predictions (8:31; 9:31; 10:33-34)
رنج کشیدن (paschō) — new	Neutral suffering-vocabulary; no inherent doctrinal risk, but must stay yoked to باید so necessity and suffering are never separated	Pair consistently; do not let translators vary the pairing for stylistic reasons
صلیب / مصلوب کردن (cross/crucify) — new	The single sharpest point of collision in the entire book: direct contradiction of Quran 4:157’s crucifixion-denial	Zero hedging at every occurrence (8:34; 15:13-32); this is the load-bearing term for the entire doctrine and must never be paraphrased away (e.g., no “he died” substitutions that omit the crucifixion method)
جام (cup) — new	Hafez/Sufi wine-cup ecstatic-union resonance actively pulls the opposite direction (pleasurable mystical intoxication vs. bitter judgment)	Anchor explicitly to OT judgment-cup background at every occurrence (10:38-39; 14:23, 36); never allow the image to stand unglossed
پرده (veil) — new	Requires typological background (access to God) unfamiliar to most readers	Explicit teaching note required at 15:38; do not assume symbolic transparency

No missing vocabulary here — this doctrine’s core terms are all already well-supplied by Persian; the risk is entirely in cultural gloss resonance (جام) and doctrinal collision (صلیب), not lexical absence.

2.5 Servanthood versus Worldly Greatness

Available terms	Weakness	Strategy
خادم (diakonos) — new	Long-established Persian political/religious honorific (“خادم مردم,” “خادم الحرمین الشریفین”) — the exact opposite connotation of Mark’s point, since Mark’s خادم is genuinely lowly, not a dignifying self-description used by the powerful	Every occurrence in the Servanthood doctrine (9:35; 10:43,45) requires context that makes clear this is not an honorific being claimed but a real, low-status role being embraced
غلام (doulos) — new	Second-order escalation term; correctly avoids بنده’s Islamic ‘abd Allah vertical resonance, but غلام itself carries historical slavery connotations that may register as archaic/uncomfortable in modern Persian	Retain (rejected alternative already ruled out at baseline-extension level); gloss briefly on first occurrence (10:44) that this intensifies خادم rather than introducing an unrelated category
اقتدار (authority) — new	Direct collision with Iranian state/clerical rhetoric (“اقتدار نظام,” “اقتدار ولایت فقیه”)	Must fence Jesus’s positive unique authority (1:22, 27; 2:10) from the negative worldly-domineering authority he explicitly rejects (10:42) — see Section 4, crowded neighborhood
بزرگ / بزرگی (great/greatness) — general vocabulary, untracked	No inherent risk but structurally load-bearing to the doctrine’s core contrast (10:42-44: “whoever wishes to be great among you…”)	Recommend tracking as Low risk for consistency; ensure the same Persian word for “great/greatness” is used across all occurrences of this specific contrast so the rhetorical structure of 10:42-44 survives translation

Gap identified: No pre-existing neutral Persian word for “servant leadership” as a positive counter-concept to worldly rulership without either (a) sliding into the honorific خادم problem or (b) sounding like literal slavery. This is a genuine conceptual gap requiring paraphrase, not a single term. See Section 3.

2.6 The Messianic Secret

Available terms	Weakness	Strategy
ساکت کردن / منع کردن (rebuke/command to silence) — new	Risk is not lexical but interpretive: could be read (especially in polemical contexts questioning NT reliability) as evidence Jesus’s divine identity was late, uncertain, or fabricated	Consistent narrative-strategy framing required at every occurrence (1:25, 34; 3:12; 8:30; 9:9), climaxing at the unhedged 14:62 confession
مسیح دروغین / پیامبر دروغین (false messiah/prophet) — new	Adjacent to, but must not be polemically equated with, Twelfth Imam/Mahdist expectation itself	Historical-analogy teaching (past Mahdist claimant movements) permitted; direct equation with the doctrine of the Hidden Imam itself is not
مثل (parable, dual reveal/conceal function)	See 2.2	Ties the Messianic Secret to the parable-teaching’s own reveal/conceal logic (4:11-12) — recommend cross-referencing these two doctrines explicitly in lesson material

No missing vocabulary — this is purely a narrative-strategy teaching challenge, not a lexical gap.

2.7 Jesus’ Authority over Sickness, Sin, and Nature

Available terms	Weakness	Strategy
اقتدار (authority) — new	See 2.5; crowded neighborhood with political rhetoric	Positive-sense anchor for this doctrine specifically: 1:22, 27; 2:10; nature-miracles (4:39-41; 6:48-51)
روح پلید / دیو (unclean spirit/demon) — new	Risk of assimilation into Iran’s very active جن (jinn) folk-possession/جن‌گیری exorcism-practice framework, read as one more instance of an established genre rather than unique divine authority	Every exorcism narrative should include framing distinguishing Jesus’s unilateral command (no incantation, no ritual, no negotiated bargain with the spirit) from folk جن‌گیری practice, which typically involves negotiation, ritual, or a professional exorcist’s technique
گناه / آمرزیدن-بخشیدن (sin/forgiveness) — baseline + new compound	Forgiveness-of-sins narrative (2:1-12) depends on گناه carrying full personal-moral weight before a personal God; risk of collapse into ritual impurity or generic wrongdoing	Retain baseline گناه; render “who can forgive sins but God alone” (2:7) with maximum clarity that Jesus’s direct pronouncement claims that very prerogative
پاک / ناپاک (clean/unclean) — new	Directly parallels the shared najis/pak Islamic purity binary structuring hearers’ prior food/washing/prayer-readiness formation	Pastoral framing required, not blanket dismissal; Jesus relativizes ritual purity in favor of heart-purity without implying purity codes as such were meaningless
سبت (Sabbath) — new	No equivalent institution in Islamic practice (Friday ≠ Sabbath-rest)	Requires background teaching on what Sabbath observance even was, before “Lord of the Sabbath” (2:28) can register as the deity-claim it is

No missing vocabulary — this doctrine is well-supplied lexically; all risk is neighborhood-crowding and cultural-assimilation risk (see Section 4).

2.8 The Ransom for Many

Available terms	Weakness	Strategy
فدیه (ransom/lytron) — new	The single most linguistically dangerous term in the entire curriculum: collides simultaneously with (1) Islamic legal فدیه (compensatory payment/fine, e.g., for a broken fast — a transactional, not sacrificial-atoning, category), (2) فدائیان (fedayeen) political-revolutionary self-sacrifice rhetoric from modern Iranian history, and (3) the baseline-documented Karbala/Hussein martyrdom-intercession framework, which already primes hearers to read a righteous figure’s suffering as benefiting mourners through remembrance/mourning ritual rather than substitutionary payment	No adequate single-word alternative exists in Persian. Retain فدیه with mandatory contextual glossing at every occurrence, explicitly distinguishing: (a) not a legal fine/compensation, (b) not commemorative political self-sacrifice, (c) not a martyrdom whose benefit is received through ritual mourning, but a specific, personal, substitutionary price paid once, securing actual release from sin’s bondage
به‌جای / در عوض (anti, substitution) — new	Must not collapse into general-benefit برای (“for the benefit of,” without substitutionary force)	Enforce substitutionary preposition at 10:45 without exception
بسیاری (pollōn, “many”) — new	No independent risk, but requires unfamiliar Isaiah 53 background (not part of the shared Quranic prophetic corpus) since Isaiah’s servant songs are absent from Muslim-background readers’ prior formation	Explicit Isaiah 53:11-12 LXX cross-reference required whenever this term appears in teaching material
جان (psychē, “life/soul”) — new	Risk of importing Greek soul/body dualism	Retain whole-self (Hebrew nephesh-influenced) sense
خون عهد (blood of the covenant) — new	Islam denies atoning function to sacrificial blood; Eid al-Adha is commemorative only. Muharram Hussein-blood symbolism risks unintended devotional overlap	Explicit distinguishing teaching required at 14:24, tightly linked to the 10:45 ransom saying as the same theological event described two ways

Gap identified/confirmed: فدیه is a documented, unresolved missing/inadequate-vocabulary problem (already flagged in the glossary as requiring mandatory glossing). This analysis confirms no better alternative was found and formally closes the search: transliteration is not viable (the word is already a native Persian word, not a loanword, so there is no “untranslated” escape route as with, e.g., a proper name), and paraphrase alone (e.g., “a payment that frees”) loses the fixed, repeatable, citation-friendly nature of the saying. Recommendation: retain فدیه, escalate to permanent Critical status with a standing mandatory footnote template (see Section 5).

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3. Missing Vocabulary Analysis

True lexical gaps identified in this pass — concepts for which Persian has no existing fixed term or established Christian-theological compound, requiring either a new coinage (subject to theologian review) or a supplementary-phrase strategy rather than a single word:

Concept	Why it is a genuine gap	Recommended handling
”Suffering Servant” as a fixed title (Isaiah 53 background applied to Christ)	No existing Persian Bible-tradition compound; خادم رنج‌دیده is plausible but unattested and would be a novel coinage	Do NOT mint a new capitalized title for Phase 2 output. Use descriptive language (خادمی که رنج می‌کشد / آنکه رنج کشید) tied explicitly to Isaiah 53 citations rather than manufacturing a term readers have never encountered in devotional literature
”In-breaking” / progressive-yet-already-present kingdom arrival	ملکوت خدا (noun phrase) is static; Persian lacks a single verb capturing “breaking in” (sudden partial arrival of a future reality into the present)	Supplement with verb phrases per-passage (نزدیک شدن, در حال گستردن, هم‌اکنون آغاز شده) rather than seeking one fixed equivalent; document per-occurrence choice in the segment cache per Step 16 procedures
”Servant leadership” as a positive counter-model to worldly greatness	No neutral Persian term avoids both the خادم-honorific problem and the غلام-archaism/discomfort problem simultaneously	Handle by paraphrase within the passage itself (explaining the counter-cultural reversal explicitly: “بزرگ‌ترین در میان شما باید کوچک‌ترین و خادم همه باشد”) rather than seeking a single label; do not attempt to coin “خادم-رهبری” (servant-leadership) as a lesson-title term, since it would read as an imported Western leadership-training buzzword, not biblical vocabulary
Fear (φόβος/φοβέομaι) as a tracked doctrinal term	Not currently tracked in translation memory despite being structurally central to “Faith and Discipleship amid Fear”	Add ترس / نترسید as new Low-risk tracked entries (see Section 6, and recommend inclusion in the Step 9 glossary consolidation)
A single Persian word for “ransom” free of Islamic-legal, political-revolutionary, and Karbala-devotional overtones	Confirmed absent (see 2.8)	فدیه retained as the least-bad option, permanently glossed, never used without contextual correction

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4. Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods Requiring Fencing

These are terms where Persian’s available vocabulary is not absent but overcrowded by competing, doctrinally incompatible senses already active in the destination culture. Each requires an explicit “fence” — a rule for what the term must NOT be allowed to mean in this curriculum.

Term	Competing neighbors already occupying the space	Fence required
اقتدار (authority)	State/clerical political rhetoric (“اقتدار نظام,” “اقتدار ولایت فقیه”)	FENCE: اقتدار applied to Jesus (1:22,27; 2:10; nature miracles) = unique, positive, divine authority. اقتدار applied to Gentile rulers (10:42) = the explicitly REJECTED worldly model. Never let the same word imply Jesus endorses or resembles either Iranian state authority patterns or the domineering rulers he criticizes.
خادم (servant)	Political/religious honorific self-description by the powerful (“خادم مردم”)	FENCE: in Mark’s servanthood sayings, خادم must denote a real, low, costly role voluntarily taken by the greatest (9:35; 10:43), the reverse of an honorific worn to enhance status.
جام (cup)	Hafez/Sufi mystical wine-cup (جام می, ecstatic union with the Beloved)	FENCE: cup = OT prophetic judgment-cup (Ps 75:8; Isa 51:17; Jer 25:15) and Gethsemane’s cup of suffering, never a metaphor for mystical intoxication or ecstatic union.
راز (mystery)	Sufi اسرار — elite esoteric gnosis attained through a mystical path	FENCE: راز = God’s redemptive plan, now openly proclaimed to all who have ears to hear (4:11-12 read in light of the wider Gospel proclamation, not as restricted initiatory knowledge).
تجلی (transfiguration)	Ibn Arabi/Sufi تجلی — divine self-manifestation available in principle to any sufficiently purified seeker	FENCE: تجلی in Mark 9:2-8 = a unique, unrepeatable, bodily historical event witnessed by three named disciples and confirmed by the Father’s audible voice, not a generalizable mystical experience.
محبوب (beloved)	Sufi Beloved/lover (ma’shuq) erotic-mystical devotional register (Rumi, Hafez)	FENCE: محبوب at 1:11/9:7 = the Father’s covenantal filial declaration over the unique Son, not romantic-mystical union language.
فدیه (ransom)	Islamic legal fedyeh (compensatory fine); فدائیان political self-sacrifice; Karbala martyrdom-intercession	FENCE: (see 2.8) — mandatory triple-negative gloss at every occurrence.
روح پلید / دیو (unclean spirit/demon)	Active Iranian جن/جن‌گیری folk-exorcism practice	FENCE: exorcisms are evidence of Jesus’s unique, unilateral divine command, not an instance of a familiar folk-exorcism genre performed by a skilled practitioner.
پاک/ناپاک (clean/unclean)	Shared Islamic najis/pak ritual-purity system governing food, washing, prayer-readiness	FENCE: Jesus relativizes ritual purity toward heart-purity; this is not a blanket dismissal of the concept of purity as such, and must be taught pastorally, not polemically.
توبه (repentance)	Islamic tawba as a self-sufficient soteriological transaction (regret + confession + resolve = forgiveness, apart from mediating atonement)	FENCE: توبه in Mark is always inseparably joined to faith in Christ’s death and resurrection, never a self-contained transaction.
استاد (teacher/rabbi)	Sufi pir/master honorific	FENCE: must always be correctable by surrounding fuller titles (Lord, Son of Man, Christ) so “teacher” is never read as Jesus’s complete identity.
مسیح دروغین/پیامبر دروغین (false messiah/prophet)	Historical Mahdist claimant movements; contemporary Twelfth Imam expectation	FENCE: historical-analogy teaching permitted; the doctrine of the Hidden Imam itself must not be directly polemicized as inherently false messianism.
جهنم (Gehenna/hell)	Shared Quranic Jahannam with its own mizan-based, intercession-mitigable framework	FENCE: judgment in Mark rests on relationship to Christ, not a separable deeds-weighing calculus that could be offset by intercession from another figure.
تسلیم-rooted vocabulary for betrayal	اسلام/تسلیم shared root (س-ل-م, submission)	FENCE: never use تسلیم-rooted vocabulary for Judas’s betrayal or Jesus being “handed over” to hostile authorities; reserve تسلیم strictly for a positive, voluntary yielding sense (e.g., Jesus’s own submission to the Father’s will, if ever rendered this way) — prefer به دست … سپردن for all hostile “handed over” contexts.

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5. Transliteration vs. Paraphrase Decisions

Item	Decision	Rationale
Boanerges (3:17)	Transliterate (بوانرگس) + gloss (“Sons of Thunder”)	Proper nickname; no translation value, only historical-narrative interest
Talitha koum (5:41)	Transliterate (طالیتا قوم) + gloss	Preserves Mark’s own preserved-Aramaic narrative device; the gloss carries the meaning
Korban (7:11)	Transliterate (قربان) + mandatory clarifying gloss	Paraphrase would lose the technical legal-vow specificity; but transliteration alone risks false identification with قربانی (Eid sacrifice) — gloss is mandatory, not optional
Ephphatha (7:34)	Transliterate (افاتا) + gloss	Same rationale as Talitha koum
Hosanna (11:9-10)	Transliterate (هوشیعنا) + gloss (“Save now,” acclamation)	Established loanword in Christian liturgical Persian; paraphrasing as a plain imperative would lose its liturgical-acclamation register
Abba (14:36)	Transliterate (ابا), paired with پدر	Baseline-established; preserves Aramaic intimacy alongside the formal Persian translation
Eloi Eloi lama sabachthani (15:34)	Transliterate + full gloss (خدای من، خدای من، چرا مرا واگذاردی؟)	The cry’s Aramaic/Hebrew sound-form is part of its dramatic and historical authenticity; the gloss is theologically essential (Psalm 22:1 citation) and must not be omitted even though the transliteration is retained
Son of Man (πεσαρ-ε ensan)	Paraphrase (literal translation), NOT transliteration	This is a title requiring active theological content (Daniel 7), not a proper name; transliterating the Greek/Aramaic underlying idiom (bar enash) would be unintelligible and inconsistent with how the rest of the Gospel’s titles are handled
Ransom (فدیه)	Paraphrase-adjacent native word, NOT transliteration, NOT coinage	Greek λύτρον has no loanword tradition in Persian; the existing native word فدیه is retained despite its risks because coining a wholly new term would sever the concept from any existing Persian vocabulary at all, making it harder, not easier, to teach against the competing senses
”I am” (ἐγώ εἰμι)	Paraphrase using marked-formal Persian (من هستم), NOT the colloquial منم	Preserves the deliberate stylistic markedness signaling possible Exodus 3:14 resonance
Cup of suffering (ποτήριον)	Paraphrase (جام) with mandatory OT-background gloss, NOT a coined compound like “جام غضب” (cup of wrath)	جام alone is the natural Persian word for the vessel; adding “غضب” pre-emptively would flatten the term into a single doctrinal reading before the OT background teaching is introduced — better to gloss contextually per-occurrence
Names: Peter, James, John, Judas, Bartimaeus, Pilate, etc.	Use established Persian Bible (Tarjome Ghadeem/Mojdeh) forms throughout (پطرس, یعقوب, یوحنا, یهودا, بارتیمائوس, پیلاطس)	Consistency with baseline naming-convention precedent (Paul=پولس, David=داوود, etc.)

General principle applied throughout: transliteration is reserved for (a) proper names/nicknames with no doctrinal content of their own, and (b) Aramaic/Hebrew phrases Mark himself deliberately preserves untranslated in the Greek text (signaling the translator should do likewise, always with a gloss). Paraphrase/native-word rendering is used for all doctrinal-content vocabulary, even where the native word carries risk, because a coined neologism would be unintelligible to the target house-church readership and unsupported by any existing devotional literature.

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6. Ranked List of Highest-Risk Ambiguities in Mark

Ranked by combined severity (doctrinal centrality × collision strength × frequency/narrative weight), specifically for this curriculum’s eight doctrines and core passage.

1. فدیه (ransom, 10:45) — Critical. Triple collision (Islamic legal fedyeh, fedayeen political rhetoric, Karbala martyrdom-intercession) with no adequate alternative; sits at the exact center of the core passage and “The Ransom for Many” doctrine. Highest-priority mandatory theologian review on every occurrence.

2. صلیب / مصلوب کردن (cross/crucify) — Critical. Direct, unavoidable contradiction of Quran 4:157; the single most theologically load-bearing and culturally confrontational term in the whole book, underlying “The Necessity of the Cross.”

3. پسر انسان (Son of Man) — Critical. Face-value Persian reading actively reinforces, rather than complicates, the “merely human prophet” Christology already native to most readers; requires repeated Daniel 7 catechesis across at least fourteen occurrences, making consistency across lesson materials a major operational risk.

4. خون عهد / بدن + خون (blood of the covenant, body/blood compound, Last Supper) — Critical. No independent Persian ritual category combines body-and-blood elements outside a Christian frame; Islamic denial of atoning blood-function and Karbala blood-symbolism both actively compete for the same devotional space.

5. اقتدار (authority) — dual valence within the same doctrine set — High. The single sharpest “fencing” problem in the whole book: the identical word must carry opposite values (Jesus’s unique divine authority vs. the worldly domineering authority he condemns) within the very passage (10:42-45) that is this curriculum’s core text.

6. خادم (servant, diakonos) — High. Contemporary Persian political/religious usage as a self-flattering honorific runs in the opposite rhetorical direction from Mark’s point, creating an active risk that Mark 10:43’s command reads as advice to seek an honorific title rather than embrace genuine lowliness.

7. جام (cup of suffering) — High. Sufi ecstatic-union wine-cup resonance pulls toward the theologically opposite emotional register (joyful mystical intoxication) from the judgment/anguish sense required at Gethsemane and in the ransom-adjacent 10:38-39.

8. روح پلید / دیو (unclean spirit/demon) — High. Active, currently-practiced Iranian جن‌گیری folk-exorcism culture risks normalizing Jesus’s exorcisms as one more instance of an existing genre rather than unique evidence of divine authority — directly undercuts “Jesus’ Authority over Sickness, Sin, and Nature.”

9. پاک / ناپاک (clean/unclean) — Critical (per registry) / High practical risk. Directly relativizes the shared najis/pak system central to hearers’ own prior religious formation and daily practice; mishandling risks either offending unnecessarily or being read as permission to disregard purity concepts wholesale.

10. راز (mystery) and مثل (parable) together — High (combined). Both terms for the Kingdom-breaking-in doctrine risk opposite failure modes — راز toward Sufi elite gnosis, مثل toward flat transparency with no concealment function — creating a genuine risk that the kingdom parables’ dual reveal/conceal purpose (4:11-12) is lost entirely regardless of which term dominates a given lesson’s phrasing.

11. ساکت کردن / منع کردن (Messianic Secret silencing commands) — High. Interpretive rather than lexical risk: susceptible to being read, especially by skeptical or polemically-primed readers, as evidence of a late or invented divine-identity claim rather than a deliberate narrative strategy.

12. تجلی (transfiguration) — Critical (per registry) but lower practical frequency (one narrative unit, 9:2-8). Sufi pantheistic-reading risk is severe but contained to a single, teachable episode.

13. به دست … سپردن vs. تسلیم (betray/hand over) — High. Purely a translator-discipline risk (avoiding the tempting but wrong تسلیم root); low ambiguity once the rule is applied consistently, but a single lapse reintroduces an Islam-adjacent resonance into a betrayal narrative.

14. توبه (repentance) — High. Persistent risk that توبه is heard and taught as a self-sufficient act (regret + resolve) sufficient in itself, independent of the faith-in-Christ pairing Mark always gives it (1:15).

15. جلال (glory, future/eschatological sense in Mark) and محبوب (beloved) — Medium-High. Sufi jalal/jamal and Beloved/lover resonances are real but lower-frequency and more manageable through consistent contextual anchoring than items 1–14.

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7. Forward Recommendations for Step 9 (Core Glossary Finalization)

1. Formally add ترس / نترسید (fear / do not be afraid) as tracked Low-risk terms, given their structural role in “Faith and Discipleship amid Fear.”
2. Formally close the فدیه search: no better single-word alternative exists; lock in a standing mandatory footnote template for Phase 2 (see 12_ai_translation_requirements.md update needed in Step 10+).
3. Do not coin new theological vocabulary for “Suffering Servant” or “servant leadership” — handle both by contextual paraphrase, never a manufactured fixed title.
4. Explicitly cross-reference the “authority” (اقتدار) dual-valence fence in any lesson material touching both Jesus’ Authority doctrine and Servanthood-versus-Greatness doctrine, since both draw on the same word with opposite intended values within the core passage itself.
5. Carry all fencing rules in Section 4 forward into the AI translation requirements system prompt (parallel to the Romans baseline’s “CRITICAL FORBIDDEN SUBSTITUTIONS” block) at the next pipeline step.