Linguistic Gap Analysis
Linguistic Gap Analysis — 2 John (English → Japanese)
Purpose
This analysis identifies where standard modern Japanese has (a) no native vocabulary for a doctrine in 2 John, (b) vocabulary that already exists but is claimed by a competing semantic neighborhood (Buddhist, Shinto, Bushido, secular pop-culture, or on-giri social-obligation frameworks), and (c) vocabulary that is simply unfamiliar/dormant (biblical-illiteracy risk) to the target audience described in the baseline (12_ai_translation_requirements.md): largely secular, biblically illiterate Japanese readers with light Shinto/Buddhist cultural familiarity. It extends, and does not contradict, the baseline Romans Language Package. All baseline-established renderings are reused exactly; this document’s role is to map the gap structure underneath the choices already recorded in 08_core_glossary.md and assets/bible_term_registry.json, and to give Phase 2 translators a ranked risk map specific to this short, doctrinally concentrated letter.
2 John is unusual among the curriculum books processed so far in one important respect: its entire theological argument turns on a small number of terms reused across only 13 verses, several of which share Greek roots with opposite moral valence (κοινωνία/κοινωνέω; χαίρω used both for genuine joy and for the withheld greeting) or share surface-level Japanese collision risk with an unrelated term already fixed in the baseline (κύριος/κυρία → 主/婦人). Gap analysis here is therefore as much about internal cross-reference fencing within this one letter as it is about external syncretism risk.
1. Doctrine Vocabulary Matrix
For each of the four curriculum doctrines, this matrix records: the doctrine, the Japanese terms available to render it, the specific weakness of each available term, and the recommended strategy.
1.1 Walking in Truth and Love
| Available Japanese Term | Doctrine Role | Weakness | Recommended Strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| 真理 (shinri) — “truth” | Core term, ἀλήθεια | Defaults to abstract philosophical/scientific truth in secular use; overlaps with Buddhist doctrinal “truth” (四諦の真理, the Four Noble Truths) as an impersonal principle realized through insight | Use 真理 per glossary; anchor explicitly to Christ and to the apostolic teaching (vv.7, 9) at every doctrinally weighty occurrence — never let it stand as a free-floating abstract-noun claim |
| 本当 (honto) | Rejected alternative | Too casual/factual (“that’s true”); carries no covenantal-fidelity weight | Reject; never substitute |
| 愛 (ai) / 愛する (ai suru) — “love” | Core term, ἀγάπη/ἀγαπάω | No viable alternative exists, but modern secular usage is saturated with romantic/pop-culture connotation (J-pop, anime, dating shows) | Use 愛/愛する per glossary; preserve v.6’s circular definition (love = walking in the commandments) in Japanese syntax rather than smoothing it into looser paraphrase; teach the non-romantic sense explicitly at first occurrence |
| 恋 (koi) | Rejected alternative | Names romantic/erotic love specifically | NEVER use for ἀγάπη |
| 歩む (ayumu) — “walk” | Ethical-conduct metaphor, περιπατέω | Natural, already-idiomatic Japanese bridge (人生を歩む, “to walk through life”), but risks flattening into a vague “lifestyle” sense with no doctrinal content | Retain the doctrinal object every time: 真理を歩む / 命令に歩む, never a bare intransitive “walk” |
| 命令 (meirei) — “commandment” | Structural term binding love to obedience (v.6) | Risks a military/hierarchical “order” connotation if used loosely | Use 命令 consistently across all three occurrences (vv.4,5,6); do not vary the rendering, since the letter’s argument depends on the reader recognizing recurrence |
Doctrinal note: This doctrine’s chief linguistic problem is not a missing term but a crowded neighborhood problem for both 真理 and 愛 — both words are default vocabulary in Japanese for entirely secular, even entertainment-industry concepts. The doctrine requires active teaching-layer restoration in both cases, parallel in kind to the baseline’s treatment of 復活 (“resurrection”) as doctrinally correct but rhetorically deflated by pop-culture overuse.
1.2 Warning against Deceivers Denying the Incarnation
| Available Japanese Term | Doctrine Role | Weakness | Recommended Strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| 受肉 (juniku) — “incarnation” | [BASELINE REUSE] Central doctrinal anchor | None as a term itself (established, non-syncretistic theological compound); risk is entirely in what NOT to use nearby | Retain exactly; render σάρξ (“flesh,” v.7) as 肉体 (nikutai, “physical body”) rather than bare 肉, which risks a fleshly-appetite (肉の欲) reading |
| 化身 (keshin) / 権化 (gonge) | Forbidden alternatives | Describe a kami’s or bodhisattva’s provisional, repeatable manifestation (honji suijaku theology) | NEVER use for 受肉, under any framing — this is the single most doctrinally catastrophic substitution risk in the letter |
| 告白する (kokuhaku suru) — “confess” | Public affirmation test, ὁμολογέω | Contemporary secular Japanese usage (especially youth/anime/drama culture) overwhelmingly denotes a romantic love-confession (“kokuhaku culture”) | Use 告白する per glossary, but every occurrence in teaching material must immediately frame it as public doctrinal affirmation about Christ’s incarnation, not personal romantic disclosure |
| 惑わす者 (madowasu mono) — “deceiver” | Doctrinal false-teacher category, πλάνος | 惑わす carries folkloric resonance with kitsune/tanuki trickster tales (fox/badger spirits “bewitching” humans) | Always anchor to v.7b’s specific content (denial of the incarnation); never leave as a free-floating “deceiver” label that could read as folk-supernatural mischief |
| 反キリスト (Han-Kirisuto) — “antichrist” | Strongest theological censure, ἀντίχριστος | Inverse risk: already a familiar apocalyptic-villain trope from Japanese fantasy/horror fiction and anime — risk of trivialization, not blankness | Teach explicitly as active, present-tense doctrinal opposition to the true incarnation, not a fictional end-times supervillain |
| キリストの教え (Kirisuto no oshie) — “teaching of Christ” | Doctrinal boundary marker, διδαχὴ τοῦ Χριστοῦ | 教え is Japan’s generic word for any religious/philosophical teaching (Buddhist, Confucian, Shinto 教え are identical in form) — risks relativizing the teaching of Christ as one option in Japan’s syncretistic religious marketplace | Stress the definite article’s exclusivity in every use: THE teaching, singular and bounded, tied to v.7’s confession — never “a teaching of Christ” among others |
| 世 (yo) vs. 世界 (sekai) — “world” | The fallen order the deceivers “go out” into, κόσμος | 世界 defaults to neutral globalized-geography sense (世界のニュース); risk of collapsing into Buddhist 世間 (the transient mundane realm to be transcended through practice) | Prefer 世 in doctrinal statements; treat κόσμος as a moral-relational rebellion category, not an ontological one to escape via enlightenment |
Doctrinal note: This is the highest-stakes doctrine in the letter linguistically as well as theologically. Two of its five key terms (受肉, 告白する) sit at the intersection of correct-word-but-wrong-register risk; two others (惑わす者, 反キリスト) sit at the intersection of correct-word-but-borrowed-genre risk. No term here is simply missing — every term exists in Japanese — but every term also has an actively competing, well-populated semantic neighborhood that must be fenced off explicitly in teaching material, not assumed to be avoided by word choice alone.
1.3 Hospitality and Doctrinal Discernment
| Available Japanese Term | Doctrine Role | Weakness | Recommended Strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| 家に迎え入れる (ie ni mukae ireru) — “receive into house” | The narrow hospitality prohibition, v.10 | Cuts directly against おもてなし (omotenashi), Japan’s celebrated near-unconditional guest-welcome ethic (famously showcased in Japan’s 2013 Olympic bid speech) | Frame explicitly and repeatedly as a narrow, doctrinally bounded exception protecting a house-church from institutionalized false teaching — never as a general principle against hospitality, and never presented as a repudiation of omotenashi as a cultural value |
| 加担する (kadan suru) — “partake/be complicit” | The negative-valence κοινωνέω, v.11 | Shares its Greek root with the baseline’s positive, Low-risk fellowship term (交わり, majiwari) | NEVER use 交わり for v.11’s κοινωνέω under any circumstance — reusing it would create a direct internal contradiction with the Romans baseline’s established warm, positive sense of the same word; 加担する must be used and flagged for mandatory theologian review every occurrence |
| 挨拶の言葉をかける (aisatsu no kotoba wo kakeru) — withheld greeting formula | The concrete social act of endorsement withheld, vv.10-11 | A literal rendering of the Greek χαίρειν λέγειν idiom (“say to him, Rejoice”) is opaque in Japanese | Render functionally as withholding a formal greeting/blessing of endorsement — the point is public endorsement, not casual politeness |
| 悪い行い (warui okonai) — “evil works” | The consequence of complicity, v.11 | Risk of reading as generic bad behavior, disconnected from doctrine | Always tie back explicitly to v.7’s denial of the incarnation in teaching notes, not left as free-floating ethical language |
Doctrinal note: The core gap here is not vocabulary but cultural-value tension: Japanese hospitality culture is not merely a neutral backdrop but an actively celebrated national virtue, which makes this doctrine’s command counter-cultural in a way it may not be for many other language communities. This is a doctrine-application risk more than a term-choice risk, but it must be flagged at the same severity as a vocabulary gap because a mistranslation of tone (rather than of word) could cause the doctrine to be rejected as culturally offensive rather than understood as a bounded exception.
1.4 Perseverance in the Teaching of Christ
| Available Japanese Term | Doctrine Role | Weakness | Recommended Strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| とどまる/留まる (todomaru) — “abide” | Sustained doctrinal fidelity, μένω | No major syncretistic collision, but risks being read as passive stasis (“staying put”) rather than active perseverance | Teach as active, willed perseverance in doctrine — parallel to the baseline’s caution against reducing Spirit-wrought sanctification to a passive or single achieved event |
| 神との関係を持つ (Kami tono kankei wo motsu) — “have God” | The stark either/or test, v.9 | A literal rendering (神を持つ, “to have God”) risks an object-possession reading evocative of お守り (omamori) amulet-carrying practice | Render relationally, never literally; preserve the binary force of the verse without the amulet/charm-object overtone |
| 報い (mukui) — “reward” | Gracious response to perseverance, μισθός, v.8 | Closely associated with 応報 (ōhō), Buddhist/folk karmic retribution earned through merit/demerit accumulation | Teach explicitly as God’s gracious response to grace-enabled perseverance, kept doctrinally distinct from justification/salvation (never at risk of forfeiture by works) — parallel caution to the baseline’s non-transactional 恵み clarification |
| 教えを越えて先走る者 (oshie wo koete senbashiru mono) — “goes ahead/beyond” | Polemical self-description of false teachers, προάγω, v.9 | A literal “one who goes ahead” risks sounding like commendable spiritual growth | Use the periphrastic rendering; NEVER use 進歩 (shinpo, “progress”), which carries strong positive connotations from Japan’s modernization narrative and would invert the verse’s polemical point |
| 長老 (chourou) — “elder” | Author’s title, v.1 | None significant | Standard, well-established ecclesiastical term (cf. 長老派教会, Presbyterian church); Low risk |
Doctrinal note: This doctrine’s central linguistic challenge is the inverse-connotation risk shared by 報い and 進歩 — both are ordinary Japanese words carrying a positive cultural charge (karmic merit-reward; national progress narrative, respectively) that runs precisely counter to, or requires careful redirection from, the doctrinal point being made. This is a distinct gap-type from syncretistic collision (a competing religious meaning) — it is a connotation-polarity gap, where the natural cultural reading of the word pulls in a different direction than the text’s argument, without necessarily being false.
2. Missing Vocabulary vs. Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods
2 John’s linguistic risk profile can be sorted into four distinct gap-types. Unlike Romans, this letter contains almost no true vocabulary vacuum (a concept with literally no native word) — every key term maps onto an existing Japanese word. The risk is almost entirely in neighborhood-crowding and cross-reference collision.
2.1 True Vocabulary Gaps (Low Count)
- None identified as a hard vacuum in this letter. The closest candidate, the compressed idiom χαίρειν λέγειν (“say to him, Rejoice,” vv.10-11), is a structural/idiomatic gap rather than a conceptual one: Japanese has no equivalent one-word epistolary greeting-verb, requiring periphrastic handling (挨拶の言葉をかける). This is a translation-mechanics gap, not a doctrine-vocabulary gap.
- στόμα πρὸς στόμα (“mouth to mouth,” v.12) is similarly a structural idiom gap; the literal image is not just unfamiliar but actively misleading in Japanese (risking a kissing or direct-food-transmission reading) and must be rendered functionally (直接会って).
2.2 Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods Requiring Fencing
These are terms where the Japanese word is correct and unavoidable, but shares linguistic territory with a strong competing association that must be explicitly fenced off in teaching material:
| Japanese Term | Doctrinal Sense Needed | Competing Neighborhood | Fencing Strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| 告白する | Public doctrinal affirmation (v.7) | Romantic love-confession (“kokuhaku culture”) | Explicit “not a love confession — a statement about who Jesus Christ is” framing at first occurrence |
| 惑わす者 | Doctrinal false teacher (v.7) | Kitsune/tanuki trickster folklore | Explicit tie to v.7b’s specific content every occurrence |
| 反キリスト | Sober end-times theological category (v.7) | Fantasy/horror pop-culture supervillain trope | Explicit “not a fictional villain — a present, active theological reality” framing |
| 教え (in キリストの教え) | THE bounded, exclusive apostolic doctrine (v.9) | Generic religious/philosophical “teaching” (Buddhist/Confucian/Shinto 教え, identical word) | Stress the definite, singular reference every occurrence; never allow “a teaching” phrasing |
| 報い | Grace-enabled reward (v.8) | 応報 karmic merit/demerit retribution | Explicit “gracious response, not karmically earned” framing, echoing baseline’s 恵み clarification |
| 愛 | Self-giving, commandment-defined love (vv.1,3,5,6) | Romantic/pop-culture love | First-occurrence teaching establishing agapē’s non-romantic, obedience-linked sense |
| 真理 | Christ-anchored covenantal truth (vv.1-4) | Abstract philosophical truth; Buddhist Four Noble Truths | Explicit anchoring to Christ (vv.7,9) at every doctrinally weighty occurrence |
| 家に迎え入れる | Narrow doctrinal exception (v.10) | おもてなし unconditional hospitality ethic | Explicit “bounded exception, not a repudiation of hospitality” framing |
2.3 Internal Cross-Reference Collisions (Unique to 2 John, Absent from Romans Baseline)
These are the letter’s most distinctive linguistic risk category: pairs of terms that share a Greek root or a Japanese homophone/near-homophone but must receive different Japanese renderings to avoid contradicting either the baseline or the letter’s own argument.
| Collision Pair | Shared Root/Form | Required Fencing |
|---|---|---|
| Κύριος (Lord, v.3) vs. κυρία (lady, vv.1,5) | Shared Greek root κυρ- | 主 (shu) reserved exclusively for the divine title; 婦人 (fujin) for the addressee. Must never share a rendering or be visually/phonetically conflated in Japanese, even though the Greek wordplay is arguably deliberate in the source text |
| κοινωνία (positive fellowship, baseline/v.13 context) vs. κοινωνέω (negative complicity, v.11) | Shared Greek root κοινων- | 交わり (majiwari) reserved for the positive sense only (per baseline); 加担する (kadan suru) for v.11’s negative sense. This is the single highest-priority fencing rule in the entire letter — a translator defaulting to the “obvious” cognate rendering would directly contradict the established baseline term |
| χαίρω (joy, v.4) vs. χαίρειν λέγειν (withheld greeting, vv.10-11) | Shared Greek root χαρ- | 喜び (yorokobi) for genuine joy; 挨拶の言葉をかける (functional withholding of greeting) for vv.10-11. The Greek text’s ironic wordplay (the elder’s joy vs. the greeting he forbids extending to deceivers) is not recoverable in Japanese lexical form and must be handled as a teaching-notes observation, not a translation-choice — attempting to force lexical parallelism would produce unnatural Japanese |
| 予言者/予言 (fortune-teller/prediction) vs. 預言者/預言 (prophet/prophecy) | Baseline homophone risk — not present in 2 John’s vocabulary, but retained here as a standing validation check since 08’s cross-reference table references baseline fulfillment_of_prophecy adjacent doctrines | No prophet/prophecy vocabulary occurs in 2 John itself; flagged only to confirm no accidental introduction of this baseline risk term in teaching material referencing OT background |
3. Transliteration vs. Paraphrase Decisions
| Term/Phrase | Decision | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| Θεός → 神 | Retain (baseline) | No transliteration option exists for “God” in Japanese theological tradition; established term |
| Ἰησοῦς → イエス | Transliterate | Established Shinkaiyaku Protestant form; NOT the Kirishitan-era ゼズス |
| Χριστός → キリスト | Transliterate | Standard loan-compound; “Christianity” itself is キリスト教 |
| ἀντίχριστος → 反キリスト | Semi-transliterate (compound: 反 + キリスト) | Neither pure transliteration nor pure paraphrase; leverages the already-transliterated キリスト while adding the native negation prefix 反, the standard Japanese Bible-translation convention |
| ἀμήν → アーメン | Transliterate | Standard closing liturgical form across Japanese Christian tradition |
| ἐκλεκτῇ κυρίᾳ → 選ばれた婦人 | Paraphrase (descriptive) | No single-word Japanese equivalent for the compressed Greek epistolary address; retain interpretive openness between individual/church-personification readings |
| χαίρειν λέγειν → 挨拶の言葉をかける | Paraphrase (functional/idiomatic) | Literal transliteration is meaningless; literal translation (“say Rejoice”) is opaque; the functional sense (a formal greeting of endorsement) is what must be conveyed |
| στόμα πρὸς στόμα → 直接会って | Paraphrase (idiomatic) | Literal “mouth to mouth” risks an unintended physical-intimacy or feeding reading in Japanese; functional equivalent required |
| Θεὸν ἔχειν → 神との関係を持つ | Paraphrase (relational, not literal) | Literal “have God” risks an amulet/charm-possession (omamori) reading; must be rendered relationally |
| ἐρχόμενον ἐν σαρκί → 受肉 | Established theological compound (neither transliteration nor literal paraphrase) | 受肉 (“receiving flesh”) is the settled Japanese theological term across the Bible-translation tradition; retain exactly per baseline incarnation entry |
| διδαχὴ τοῦ Χριστοῦ → キリストの教え | Direct compound translation, NOT transliteration | 教え has no transliteration option and none is needed; the risk is entirely in the crowded-neighborhood sense (Section 2.2), not in whether to transliterate |
General principle for this letter: 2 John contains very few candidates for transliteration beyond the already-fixed proper nouns and titles (Jesus, Christ, Antichrist compound, Amen). Its paraphrase decisions cluster almost entirely around idiom-handling (Section 2.1’s structural gaps) rather than doctrinal-term avoidance, which distinguishes this letter’s transliteration profile from Romans, where transliteration decisions (e.g., アバ for Abba) served to preserve theological intimacy rather than merely to solve an idiom problem.
4. Ranked List of Highest-Risk Ambiguities in 2 John
Ranked by combined severity of (a) doctrinal centrality, (b) probability of translator or reader error, and (c) whether the error would be silent (undetected without cross-checking against this analysis).
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κοινωνέω (v.11) rendered as 交わり instead of 加担する. — Critical. This is the single highest-risk ambiguity in the letter specifically because it is a plausible, cognate-consistent error: a translator working quickly and pattern-matching to the baseline’s positive
fellowshipentry could reuse 交わり for v.11 without noticing the moral-valence inversion, producing a rendering that says the opposite of the source text’s warning while looking internally “consistent.” Mandatory human theologian review on every occurrence, per the core glossary’s escalation flag. -
v.7’s denial-of-incarnation clause, in full (受肉 + 告白する + 惑わす者 + 反キリスト stacked in a single verse). — Critical. No single term here is individually mistranslatable given the fixed baseline/registry entries, but the verse’s cumulative rhetorical weight depends on all four terms being simultaneously fenced against their respective competing neighborhoods (romantic confession culture, trickster folklore, supervillain trope). A translation that gets each word technically “correct” in isolation can still fail to convey the verse’s severity if the surrounding teaching material does not do this fencing work together, in one place.
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v.9’s Θεὸν ἔχειν / οὐκ ἔχειν rendered literally as 神を持つ. — High. The literal rendering is grammatically valid Japanese and would likely pass a surface fluency check, making this a silent-error risk: it reads naturally but imports an amulet/charm-possession (omamori) association absent from the source text’s stark relational either/or claim. Requires explicit validation-rule checking, not just glossary lookup.
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Κύριος/κυρία (v.3 vs. vv.1,5) accidentally sharing or visually blending renderings. — High. Low probability given the established fixed distinction (主 vs. 婦人), but high severity if it occurs, since it would either deify the letter’s human addressee or (in the reverse direction) demote Christ’s title to an ordinary honorific. Flag as a validation-rule check specific to this letter, absent from the Romans baseline validation table.
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προάγω (v.9) rendered with 進歩 or another “progress”-positive term. — High. Risk of polarity inversion: a plausible-sounding translation could accidentally commend the false teachers’ self-justifying framing rather than exposing it, especially given Japan’s strong cultural association of 進歩 with positive modernization. Requires the periphrastic rendering (教えを越えて先走る者) without exception.
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μισθός (v.8) rendered with unexamined 応報-adjacent phrasing. — High. Less severe than #5 because 報い itself is the correct headword and is already specified, but surrounding explanatory phrasing in teaching notes could easily drift into karmic-merit language (e.g., describing the reward as something “accumulated” through faithful deeds) without an explicit statement anchoring it to grace-enabled perseverance rather than merit accumulation.
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διδαχὴ τοῦ Χριστοῦ (vv.9-10) losing its definite, exclusive force through generic 教え phrasing. — Medium-High. Unlike the above, this risk is gradual/cumulative rather than a single point-failure: repeated loose phrasing (“a teaching of Christ,” “Christian teachings”) across a teaching document could slowly relativize the doctrine’s exclusivity claim without any single sentence being flagged as wrong.
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λαμβάνω εἰς οἰκίαν (v.10) causing cultural offense or rejection of the passage’s authority if introduced without the omotenashi-exception framing. — Medium. This is a reader-reception risk more than a translation-accuracy risk: even a linguistically perfect rendering could be experienced as culturally jarring or simply disbelieved/softened by a Japanese teacher or reader if the bounded-exception framing (Section 1.3) is not carried into the surrounding lesson material.
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χαίρω wordplay (v.4 vs. vv.10-11) attempted as forced lexical parallelism in Japanese. — Low-Medium. Risk here runs in the opposite direction from most entries above: an over-eager translator noticing the Greek wordplay might try to preserve it by unnaturally reusing 喜び-family vocabulary in the withheld-greeting verses, producing awkward or misleading Japanese. The correct handling is to let the wordplay surface only in teaching commentary, not in the translated text itself.
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ἐκλεκτός root (vv.1, 13) drifting toward competitive-selection framing (合格/選抜) through loose paraphrase in surrounding explanatory text. — Low-Medium. The headword (選ばれた) is already fixed and correct; the risk is confined to explanatory material that might inadvertently frame the “elect lady”/“elect sister” language in terms of the addressee having “passed” some standard, rather than having been graciously chosen.
5. Summary Recommendations for Phase 2
- Load
08_core_glossary.mdandassets/bible_term_registry.jsonin full before any 2 John segment translation; both already encode the correct headword choices identified in this analysis. - Add a 2 John-specific validation rule (beyond the Romans baseline’s validation table) checking specifically for: (a) 交わり appearing anywhere near v.11, (b) 主/婦人 conflation near v.1/3/5, (c) 進歩 or other positive-progress vocabulary near v.9’s προάγω clause.
- Treat Section 2.2’s “crowded neighborhood” terms (告白する, 惑わす者, 反キリスト, キリストの教え, 報い, 愛, 真理, 家に迎え入れる) as requiring a mandatory explanatory sentence at first occurrence in any teaching document, not merely a correct glossary lookup — this letter’s risk profile is dominated by connotation-management, not missing vocabulary.
- Route v.7, v.9, and v.11 for mandatory human theologian review without exception, per the escalation flags already recorded in
08_core_glossary.mdSection F; this linguistic gap analysis independently confirms and reinforces that routing on purely lexical-risk grounds.