Linguistic Gap Analysis
Linguistic Gap Analysis — Titus (English → Russian)
Purpose
This document executes Phase 1 Step 8 for the Titus curriculum. It builds on 08_core_glossary.md and the extended bible_term_registry.json to (1) map each named curriculum doctrine against the Russian vocabulary actually available for it, (2) identify true vocabulary gaps versus “crowded” semantic neighborhoods where an existing Russian word covers Titus’s concept but also several unrelated or theologically loaded senses, (3) resolve transliteration-vs-paraphrase decisions for terms newly introduced by Titus, and (4) rank the letter’s highest-risk ambiguities for Phase 2 review routing. It does not re-derive the baseline Romans findings; where Titus reuses baseline (TM-Reuse) terms, this analysis only notes new pressure the letter itself places on that existing rendering.
Titus’s risk profile differs from Romans in one structural way worth stating up front: Romans’ central hazard is the East-West grace/justification/sanctification divergence playing out across a long doctrinal argument. Titus compresses nearly the same grace-justification-regeneration argument into one dense paragraph (2:11-3:8) while ALSO adding an entirely new hazard class absent from Romans: concrete church-office vocabulary (elder/overseer) and household-authority vocabulary (submission, masters) that collides with existing, live Russian ecclesial and social structures rather than with abstract doctrine alone. Both hazard classes converge in the core passage’s frame chapters (1 and 3).
1. Doctrine Vocabulary Matrix
For each of the seven curriculum doctrines: the doctrine, the Russian term(s) currently available, their weaknesses, and the recommended handling strategy for Phase 2.
1.1 Grace That Trains for Godly Living
| Element | Detail |
|---|---|
| Available terms | благодать (grace, TM-Reuse, Critical); воспитывающая (trains, New, High); благочестие (godliness, New, High) |
| Weakness | Russian has no single verb that captures παιδεύω’s “forms a child through discipline, correction, and instruction together” sense with grace as subject. воспитывающая (from воспитывать, “to raise/rear a child”) is the best available option but is not a fixed theological term — it will read as a fresh, deliberate metaphor rather than settled vocabulary, which is actually appropriate to Paul’s own unusual grammatical move (grace as an active, personified pedagogical agent) but must not be silently smoothed into the flatter Synodal “научающая” (teaching), which loses the formation sense entirely. |
| Recommended strategy | Use воспитывающая in all expository/teaching text as the primary rendering; permit научающая ONLY inside direct Synodal Scripture citation blocks, with an explanatory footnote on first use in each document restoring the “grace personally forms character, not merely informs the mind” sense. Treat this as the curriculum’s doctrinal keystone term — do not vary the rendering across lessons. |
1.2 Qualifications for Elders
| Element | Detail |
|---|---|
| Available terms | пресвитер (elder, New, High); епископ / надзиратель (overseer, New, Critical); старец/старица (age-category “older,” collision risk) |
| Weakness | Russian ecclesial vocabulary is NOT neutral here: епископ names a real, singular, higher diocesan office in both the Russian Orthodox Church and Roman Catholic structures familiar to Russian readers. Paul’s flat identification of πρεσβύτερος and ἐπίσκοπος as the same office (1:5, 1:7) is therefore not merely a translation choice but a direct structural collision with readers’ default ecclesiology. Separately, старец/старица (the natural Synodal-register word for “older man/woman,” 2:2-3) collides with an entirely different, exalted Orthodox category — the venerated monastic spiritual elder/sage — creating a second, unrelated collision within the same short chapter. |
| Recommended strategy | Use пресвитер for πρεσβύτερος throughout (asset term, already standard in Russian Evangelical/Baptist usage). For ἐπίσκοπος, use надзиратель as the primary functional gloss with an explicit exposition note stating the interchangeability with пресвитер; avoid unqualified епископ entirely in running text, permitting it only inside a bracketed technical gloss “(греч. episkopos, «надзиратель» — не архиерейский сан).” For πρεσβύτης/πρεσβύτις (2:2-3), use пожилой мужчина/пожилая женщина and explicitly avoid старец/старица in expository register, flagging any Synodal quotation that uses them for a clarifying footnote. |
1.3 Sound Doctrine and Good Works
| Element | Detail |
|---|---|
| Available terms | здравое учение (sound doctrine, New, Medium-High); добрые дела (good works, New, Medium-High); дела праведности (works of righteousness — excluded, New, Critical) |
| Weakness | No single-term gap; the risk is structural/relational, not lexical. Russian readers can easily hear “добрые дела” (good works, commanded 6x) and “дела праведности” (works of righteousness, excluded once, 3:5) as simple synonyms, since both literally contain “дела” (works/deeds). Paul’s argument depends on these being sharply distinguished: one is salvation’s ground (excluded), the other its fruit (commanded). Russian offers no morphological signal (e.g., no distinct prefix or suffix pairing) to mark this distinction the way English keeps “works of righteousness” and “good works” as two different phrases from context alone. |
| Recommended strategy | Never let “дела” alone stand for either phrase without its qualifier (праведности / добрые); always render in full. Require a standing cross-reference footnote at every occurrence of either phrase in the same lesson pointing to the other, explicitly naming the ground/fruit distinction, so the shared root word does not silently blur into synonymy. |
1.4 Salvation by Grace not Works
| Element | Detail |
|---|---|
| Available terms | спасение (salvation, TM-Reuse, Critical); благодать (grace, TM-Reuse, Critical); милость (mercy, New, High); оправдание (justification, TM-Reuse, Critical); возрождение (regeneration, New, Critical) |
| Weakness | This doctrine is where Titus places the single greatest concentration of Critical-risk vocabulary in the entire curriculum: five Critical/High terms occur within four verses (3:4-7). No individual term is missing from Russian — every concept has an available word — but the CUMULATIVE density means a reader can absorb any one of them into the dominant cultural default (Orthodox sacramental/synergistic salvation-as-process) without the text ever explicitly contradicting that reading, since each term in isolation is doctrinally compatible with either framework. |
| Recommended strategy | Treat 3:4-7 as a single indivisible high-risk unit rather than five separate term-flags. Require one consolidated theologian-reviewed exposition block accompanying this passage in every lesson that touches it, stating explicitly: (a) mercy and grace are the sole ground, (b) works of righteousness are explicitly excluded, (c) the saving act (ἔσωσεν) is a completed past event, (d) regeneration/renewal is the Spirit’s monergistic work, (e) justification is a forensic declaration. Do not scatter this explanation across separate, disconnected footnotes. |
1.5 Regeneration by the Holy Spirit
| Element | Detail |
|---|---|
| Available terms | возрождение (regeneration, New, Critical); обновление (renewal, New, Medium); омовение / баня (washing, New, High); Святой Дух (TM-Reuse, Medium) |
| Weakness | This is the curriculum’s clearest true vocabulary-vs-culture collision, structurally identical to the baseline’s “sanctification” Critical flag: возрождение is lexically correct but Russian Orthodox sacramental theology has already assigned this exact word a specific referent — the effect of the rite of baptism itself (baptismal regeneration, ex opere operato). Titus 3:5 pairs “washing” and “renewal by the Holy Spirit” in a single clause in a way that a sacramentally-trained reader will default to reading as a description of the baptismal rite, not (as this Protestant-authored curriculum intends) the Spirit’s separate, monergistic inward work of which baptism is a sign. |
| Recommended strategy | Never allow “омовение возрождения и обновления Святым Духом” to stand without an accompanying gloss distinguishing sign (washing/baptism as outward symbol) from substance (the Spirit’s inward regenerating work). Require theologian review at every occurrence, per the registry. Use омовение (not баня) in all expository text; баня is permitted only inside a direct Synodal citation block with a footnote noting its contemporary “bathhouse” connotation risk. |
1.6 Submission to Authority
| Element | Detail |
|---|---|
| Available terms | покоряться / повиноваться / подчиняться (submit, New, High); начальства и власти (rulers/authorities, New, High); господин (master, New, Medium-High) |
| Weakness | No lexical gap — Russian has abundant, well-worn vocabulary for hierarchical submission (a legacy of both Tsarist and Soviet administrative culture). The risk is the reverse of a gap: OVER-availability of politically loaded near-synonyms (покоряться carries a more total, personal-submission connotation; подчиняться a more administrative/bureaucratic one; повиноваться a more military/disciplinary one), any of which could be selected inconsistently across the three relationships (wife/husband, slave/master, citizen/state) Paul deliberately links with a single repeated verb. |
| Recommended strategy | Select ONE primary rendering (recommend покоряться, closest to ὑποτάσσω’s household-code register and already established in the baseline’s Romans 13 handling) and use it consistently across all three occurrences (2:5, 2:9, 3:1) so the authorial pattern remains visible; reserve подчиняться/повиноваться only for πειθαρχέω (3:1) to preserve Paul’s rhetorical doubling rather than repeating one word twice. Flag 3:1 and the household-slavery material of 2:9 for native-speaker/theologian-adjacent review given the passage’s political sensitivity, parallel to the baseline’s Romans 13 routing. |
1.7 Avoiding Divisive Controversies
| Element | Detail |
|---|---|
| Available terms | человек, вызывающий разделения (divisive person, New, High); состязания / споры (controversy, New, Medium); иудейские басни (Jewish myths, New, High) |
| Weakness | The obvious, literal cognate еретик/ересь EXISTS in Russian and is tempting precisely because it is available and fluent — but it is a false friend of exactly the kind flagged in the baseline for other terms: it imports the full weight of Ecumenical Council anathemas and, via раскольник/раскол, the memory of the 17th-century Old Believer Schism, onto a Greek word (αἱρετικὸς ἄνθρωπος) that at the time of writing meant something closer to “a faction-forming, quarrelsome person,” well short of a formal heresy verdict. |
| Recommended strategy | Never use еретик/ересь for Titus 3:10’s αἱρετικὸς ἄνθρωπος; use the descriptive phrase человек, вызывающий разделения consistently. For 1:14’s “Jewish myths,” pair every occurrence with an explicit exposition note (per registry) narrowing the target to a specific legalistic/speculative teaching movement (the “circumcision party” of 1:10), never Judaism as such — apply the same rigor the baseline requires for Romans 9-11. |
2. Missing Vocabulary vs. Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods
Titus’s terms fall cleanly into two categories requiring opposite handling strategies.
2.1 Genuinely Missing Vocabulary (no Russian term covers the concept at all)
These are concepts for which Russian has no ready-made single word and a compound, gloss, or newly-fixed expository phrase is required — the opposite problem from a “crowded” term, and lower overall risk because there is no wrong existing word to be pulled toward, only the task of building a new fixed phrase.
| Concept | Gap | Resolution |
|---|---|---|
| παιδεύω as grace’s active verb (2:12) | No Russian verb combines “discipline/correct” + “raise/form as a parent forms a child” + “grace as grammatical subject” in one word | Fixed phrase: “благодать, воспитывающая нас” — treat as a coined technical phrase for this curriculum, introduced with a definition on first use. |
| λαὸς περιούσιος, “a people for his own possession” (2:14) | No single modern Russian noun carries the OT “treasured covenant possession” sense; народ особенный flattens to “an unusual/distinctive people” in ordinary usage | Retain народ особенный as the base phrase but require a mandatory cross-reference gloss to Исход 19:5 / Втор. 7:6 (Exodus/Deuteronomy) on first occurrence, restoring the covenant-treasure sense every reader will otherwise miss. |
| ἐπιφάνεια spanning both advents (2:11, 2:13, 3:4) | Russian’s most natural options split into two different words for the two events (явление for a general appearing vs. второе пришествие specifically for the Second Coming), destroying Paul’s deliberate single-term literary bracket | Use явление uniformly at all three occurrences even at 2:13 (Christ’s return), overriding the natural pull toward второе пришествие, with a footnote explaining the deliberate authorial pattern is otherwise invisible in Russian. |
| μιᾶς γυναικὸς ἀνήρ literalism (1:6) | No single Russian idiom for “a one-woman man” exists outside a literal calque | Render literally, муж одной жены; carry all interpretive weight (monogamy vs. general fidelity) in exposition, never in the phrase itself. |
2.2 Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods (existing Russian term covers the biblical concept but ALSO several unrelated or competing senses that must be fenced off)
These carry the higher risk, because the wrong neighbor sense is already active and available in the reader’s mind and must be actively excluded, not merely supplemented.
| Term | Crowded neighbors sharing the same word/root | Fencing required |
|---|---|---|
| возрождение (regeneration, 3:5) | (a) secular “revival/renaissance” (e.g. культурное возрождение, “cultural revival”); (b) Orthodox sacramental baptismal-regeneration doctrine | Fence against (a) by always pairing with “духовное” or an explicit theological frame; fence against (b) per Doctrine 1.5 above — theologian review mandatory. |
| целомудрие (self-control word-group, 1:8; 2:2,4,5,6; 2:12) | Narrowed almost exclusively to sexual chastity in contemporary usage | Fence with здравомыслие as a paired/alternating gloss and explicit exposition broadening the term to speech, temper, appetite, and finances, not sexuality alone, at first occurrence in each lesson. |
| епископ (overseer, 1:7) | Singular diocesan bishop’s office in Orthodox/Catholic ecclesiology | Fence by avoiding the bare word in running text entirely; see 1.2 above. |
| старец/старица (natural Synodal word for “older man/woman,” 2:2-3) | Venerated monastic spiritual elder/sage (a prestigious, distinct Orthodox category) | Fence by avoiding the word in expository register altogether; use пожилой мужчина/пожилая женщина. |
| благочестие (godliness, 1:1, 2:12) | Traditional ritual/liturgical piety (church attendance, fasting, feast observance) as a self-sufficient category | Fence by explicitly anchoring every occurrence to 2:11’s grace as source, not to ritual observance as such. |
| мир (peace, 1:4) | (i) “the world” (secular/created order); (ii) political/military peace, heavily loaded by 20th-century war memory | Fence per baseline convention: context must make the relational, God-given sense unmistakable at first occurrence. |
| еретик/ересь (available but REJECTED for divisive person, 3:10) | Full Ecumenical Council heresy-condemnation register; Old Believer Schism (раскол) memory | Do not use at all; see Doctrine 1.7 above. This is a crowded neighborhood resolved by complete avoidance rather than fencing. |
| баня (Synodal “washing/bath,” 3:5) | Contemporary “bathhouse/sauna,” a beloved cultural institution wholly unrelated to the text | Reserve exclusively for direct Synodal citation with a clarifying footnote; use омовение in all expository text. |
| дела (root shared by both “добрые дела” and “дела праведности”) | Simple synonymy collapse between commanded good works and excluded works-righteousness | See Doctrine 1.3 above; never truncate either phrase to bare “дела.” |
| закон (law, 3:9,13) | Full Romans-scale law/gospel argument the baseline associates with закон | Fence by keeping Titus’s narrower “unproductive legal disputation” sense distinct from Romans 2-7’s extended argument; do not import that fuller argument where Titus’s usage is incidental. |
3. Transliteration vs. Paraphrase Decisions
Titus introduces relatively few genuinely new transliteration candidates (most of its vocabulary is expressible with existing Russian roots), but several decisions are consequential enough to fix explicitly for Phase 2 consistency.
| Term | Decision | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| Спаситель (Savior, σωτήρ) | Native Russian word, NOT transliterated | Спаситель is already a fully established, doctrinally weighty Russian title (shared with Orthodox usage, e.g. Спас as an icon-type name); transliterating (e.g. “сотер”) would be both unnecessary and would strip the term of its existing devotional resonance, which is an asset here. |
| ἐπίσκοπος (overseer) | Functional paraphrase (надзиратель), NOT the transliteration-adjacent native cognate епископ | Although епископ is the “obvious” and even native-feeling Russian word, it is rejected specifically because it is a false-friend collision (see 1.2/2.2 above), not because it is foreign-sounding. This is the letter’s clearest case where the “more natural-sounding” option is the wrong choice. |
| αἱρετικὸς ἄνθρωπος (divisive person) | Descriptive paraphrase (человек, вызывающий разделения), NOT the transliteration-adjacent cognate еретик | Same logic as above: the cognate is fluent and tempting but theologically overweighted; paraphrase is required. |
| παλιγγενεσία (regeneration) | Native compound (возрождение), NOT transliterated | No transliteration tradition exists or would aid comprehension; the risk here is cultural-associative (see 1.5), not lexical availability, so paraphrase/compounding is irrelevant — the existing native word must simply be explicitly qualified in exposition rather than replaced. |
| λαὸς περιούσιος | Retain Synodal phrase (народ особенный) rather than coin a new transliteration or fresh paraphrase | Preserves continuity with the existing Russian Bible tradition and the OT cross-reference (Исход 19:5) readers may already know from liturgical exposure; supplement with explanatory gloss rather than replacing the phrase. |
| Πιστὸς ὁ λόγος (“faithful is the saying,” 3:8) | Native formulaic phrase (верно это слово), NOT transliterated | Matches existing Pastoral Epistles formulaic-marker function; no transliteration candidate applies. |
| αὐτοκατάκριτος (“self-condemned,” 3:11) | Native periphrastic paraphrase (сам себя осудил), NOT a coined compound-neologism | Russian has no natural single-word compound equivalent to this rare Greek compound; periphrasis is the standard and sufficient solution, low risk. |
| Авва (Abba, cross-reference to Romans baseline; not in Titus itself but relevant to adoption/heir cross-references at 3:7) | N/A — no occurrence in Titus | Noted only to confirm no new transliteration decision is required here; Titus’s heir/inheritance language (3:7) uses native наследник, not a transliterated term. |
General rule for Phase 2: Titus contains no cases requiring a NEW transliterated loanword (unlike, e.g., “Мессия” or “Авва” in the Romans baseline). Every genuinely new Titus term is resolved either by an existing native Russian word (sometimes requiring explicit fencing, per Section 2.2) or by a descriptive paraphrase deliberately chosen to AVOID a tempting but false-friend native cognate (епископ, еретик). This is a distinct pattern from Romans, where the primary transliteration decisions concerned proper names and a few technical loanwords; Titus’s primary linguistic-gap challenge is neighborhood-fencing, not vocabulary importation.
4. Ranked List of Highest-Risk Ambiguities
Ranked by combined doctrinal weight and probability of silent misreading, for Phase 2 Step 17 review-routing priority.
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Titus 3:4-7 as a unit (grace/mercy/salvation/regeneration/justification cluster). The single highest-density concentration of Critical-risk vocabulary in the letter; no individual term is wrong, but the cumulative effect risks a fully coherent, internally consistent Orthodox synergistic-process reading of the entire passage that the curriculum’s Protestant-forensic argument never explicitly rules out unless the consolidated exposition block (see 1.4) is present. Theologian review mandatory, treated as one unit, not five separate flags.
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ἐπίσκοπος / πρεσβύτερος identity claim (1:5-7). Not primarily a word-choice risk but a structural-ecclesiology collision: the text asserts an equivalence (elder = overseer, one office) that directly contradicts the monoepiscopal structure most Russian readers, Orthodox or secular-cultural, assume by default. Silent mistranslation here does not just weaken a nuance — it can invert the passage’s meaning into an unintended claim about a separate, higher office. Theologian review mandatory at every occurrence.
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возрождение / λουτρόν pairing (3:5) — regeneration and washing. Distinct from #1 in kind: this is specifically the baptismal-regeneration collision (sign vs. substance), a live, named East-West controversy in exactly the way the baseline flags for sanctification. High probability of silent absorption into sacramental theology if the sign/substance distinction is not stated in every occurrence. Theologian review mandatory.
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Titus 2:13’s single-referent “great God and Savior” construction. Grammatically subtle (single-article Greek apposition) in a way Russian syntax does not automatically preserve; a comma-based Russian rendering risks silently splitting one referent into two (God the Father AND Jesus Christ, rather than Jesus Christ AS great God and Savior), inadvertently weakening the letter’s highest-Christology statement without any obvious mistranslation “red flag” to a casual reviewer. Theologian review mandatory at every occurrence, syntax double-checked specifically for apposition clarity.
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αἱρετικὸς ἄνθρωπος / еретик false-friend trap (3:10). High risk not because the correct rendering is hard to determine (it is already resolved: avoid еретик), but because the WRONG rendering is so fluent and tempting that it could pass unflagged through translation without triggering suspicion in a reviewer who is not specifically watching for it. Theologian review recommended specifically to verify the forbidden term was avoided, not merely to adjudicate a genuine ambiguity.
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дела праведности vs. добрые дела collapse (3:5 vs. 6+ other occurrences). Risk is cumulative and structural across the whole letter rather than concentrated in one verse: repeated exposure to “дела” without careful qualification across many lessons increases the chance that, by the letter’s midpoint, a reader has quietly merged the two categories Paul works hard to keep separate. Native speaker review at each occurrence; theologian review if any single lesson juxtaposes both phrases directly (as 2:14-3:1-3:5-3:8 does across the core passage).
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σωφροσύνη word-group narrowing to sexual chastity (1:8; 2:2,4,5,6; 2:12). Six-plus occurrences across the letter mean this risk compounds structurally even though no single occurrence is Critical-tier; by letter’s end, a reader may have received a subtly but systematically narrowed ethical vision (purity-only) instead of Paul’s comprehensive self-mastery concept. Native speaker review, with a standing requirement to vary/broaden the gloss across occurrences rather than repeating one narrow definition.
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ὑποτάσσω consistency across three relationships (2:5, 2:9, 3:1) intersecting Russian’s crowded submission-vocabulary neighborhood. Risk is register-drift (accidentally using different Russian synonyms at each occurrence) rather than doctrinal collision per se, but the drift itself would obscure Paul’s deliberate structural linking of household, slave, and civic submission under one term. Native speaker review for cross-occurrence consistency; theologian-adjacent review for 3:1 given political sensitivity parallel to Romans 13.
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старец/старица vs. πρεσβύτης/πρεσβύτις category confusion (2:2-3) layered onto the separate πρεσβύτερος office confusion (1:5-9) in the same letter. Two DIFFERENT collision risks share overlapping Russian vocabulary roots (старец/старший/пресвитер) within two adjacent chapters, raising the chance a reader conflates the age-category with the office-category even after each is individually fenced. Native speaker review, explicitly checking for cross-chapter bleed between the two distinct “elder” concepts.
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иудейские басни / “circumcision party” generalization risk (1:10-14). Lower-frequency than the above but carries the highest EXTERNAL-consequence risk if mishandled, given the historical weight of antisemitism in the region the baseline already documents for Romans 9-11; a single unqualified rendering here could cause reputational and pastoral harm disproportionate to its brief textual footprint. Theologian review mandatory, consistent with baseline routing for unity_of_jews_and_gentiles material.
5. Summary Table — Risk Tier Distribution for Titus-New Terms
| Risk Tier | Count of New (non-TM-Reuse) Terms | Representative Examples |
|---|---|---|
| Critical | 5 | возрождение (regeneration), епископ/надзиратель (overseer), нашего великого Бога и Спасителя (2:13 compound), дела праведности (works of righteousness), the 3:4-7 unit as a whole |
| High | 11 | милость (mercy), Спаситель (savior), омовение (washing), воспитывающая (trains), благочестие (godliness), пресвитер (elder), пожилой мужчина/пожилая женщина (older man/woman), человек вызывающий разделения (divisive person), покоряться (submit), начальства и власти (rulers/authorities), иудейские басни (Jewish myths) |
| Medium | ~18 | добрые дела, целомудрие/здравомыслие, явление, человеколюбие, доброта/благость, здравое учение, домоправитель, наследник, ревностный к добрым делам, искупить, отдал Себя за нас, беззаконие, состязания/споры, распри о законе, вразумление, отстранись, and others per glossary |
| Low | ~10 | родословия, распри, бесполезны и суетны, раб Божий, познание истины, надежда вечной жизни, снисходительный/кротость, vice list group, отправить в путь, законник/юрист, бесплодны, сам себя осудил |
End of Phase 1 Step 8 deliverable for Titus. Proceed to Step 9 (Register and Tone Calibration) using this gap analysis alongside 08_core_glossary.md and the extended bible_term_registry.json.