Linguistic Gap Analysis
Linguistic Gap Analysis — Hebrews — Romanian Language Package
0. Purpose and Method
This analysis identifies where standard literary Romanian — anchored to the Orthodox Synodal Bible tradition, with Cornilescu-tradition Evangelical equivalents noted secondarily, per the Romans baseline — has (a) no native term for a Hebrews concept, (b) a crowded semantic neighborhood where an available Romanian word already carries strong, doctrinally distinct associations from contemporary Orthodox liturgical or devotional life, or (c) a genuine translator’s choice between transliteration and paraphrase. It covers Hebrews 1–13 in full, with Hebrews 9:11-28 (the core passage) as the doctrinal anchor.
Hebrews presents a materially different linguistic-risk profile than Romans. Romans’ hardest terms cluster around soteriology (grace, justification, righteousness). Hebrews’ hardest terms cluster around cultic/priestly vocabulary (arhiereu, jertfă, sânge, cort, catapeteasmă) that collides directly with the vocabulary of the contemporary Romanian Orthodox Divine Liturgy — a collision risk category Romans barely touches. This is the central finding of this Step 8 analysis and governs the fencing strategy below.
1. Doctrine Vocabulary Matrix
| Doctrine | Available Romanian terms | Weaknesses / gaps | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| Superiority of Christ over Angels, Moses, and the Levitical Priesthood | înger (angel); Moise (proper name); preot, arhiereu (priesthood) | No native comparative-superiority vocabulary problem per se, but the argument structure (a chain of κρείσσων comparisons) has no single fixed Romanian equivalent; “mai bun/mai bună” is adequate but must be applied with total lexical consistency across 10+ occurrences spanning all 13 chapters or the comparative argument becomes invisible to the reader. Angel veneration (Sf. Mihail, Sf. Gavriil feast days, akathists) is a live devotional practice that could blunt Hebrews 1’s polemical edge if not addressed directly. | Fix “mai bun/mai bună” as the sole rendering of κρείσσων throughout (never vary with “superior,” “mai valoros,” etc.). For angels, retain “înger” (no viable alternative) but require a standing teaching note distinguishing latria (worship, reserved for the Son alone, 1:6) from dulia (veneration), a distinction Orthodox theology itself already draws — this is reinforcement, not correction. |
| Christ as the Great High Priest | arhiereu, mare preot (Cornilescu variant), preot, slujire, jertfă | ”Arhiereu” is the live, contemporary Romanian Orthodox title for a diocesan bishop (e.g., “Sinodul Arhiereilor”). This is the single largest collision risk in the entire curriculum. | Retain “arhiereu” (it is the correct, established Bible-translation term and abandoning it would break consistency with the Orthodox Synodal Bible itself, which also uses “arhiereu” for Christ at Heb 4:14 etc.) but require a standing translator note at first occurrence per curriculum unit distinguishing Christ’s unique, unrepeatable, non-transferable heavenly high priesthood from the ongoing ecclesiastical office of the same name. Never use “arhiereu” without contextual anchoring to “ceresc” (heavenly) or “al nostru” (our) nearby. |
| The New Covenant versus the Old | legământ, nou, vechi, mijlocitor, garant, făgăduință | Romanian “legământ” cannot reproduce the Greek διαθήκη’s deliberate double meaning (covenant / last will and testament) exploited at 9:16-17. This is a genuine untranslatable wordplay, not merely a risky term. | Render “legământ” consistently, but insert a mandatory explanatory footnote at 9:16-17 clarifying that the Greek word underlying the argument can mean both “covenant” and “will,” and that the author is trading on both senses — otherwise the logical force of the verse is simply lost in Romanian, not merely weakened. |
| The Once-for-All Atoning Sacrifice | jertfă, sânge, a aduce, a ispăși, capacul ispășirii, iertare, o dată (pentru totdeauna), vărsare de sânge, înlăturare | Every term in this doctrine’s vocabulary set is drawn from the same semantic field as the contemporary Divine Liturgy (“Sfânta Jertfă,” “Sângele Domnului,” “Sfânta Împărtășanie”), risking either (a) collapse of Hebrews’ one-time historical sacrifice into the sacramentally re-presented Eucharistic offering, or (b) the opposite error of flattening rich liturgical resonance into a bare historical footnote. | Preserve the vocabulary (it is correct and irreplaceable) but pair “o dată (pentru totdeauna)” with every occurrence of “jertfă” applied to Christ’s death, making the never-repeated, historically completed nature of the reference unmistakable, without denying that the Liturgy re-presents (rather than repeats) that one sacrifice — a distinction Orthodox sacramental theology itself already makes and which this curriculum should state explicitly rather than assume. |
| The Danger of Apostasy and Warning Passages | a se abate, a se lepăda, necredință, pieire, a da înapoi | No single Romanian verb captures παραπίπτω/ἀφίστημι’s decisive, once-professed-then-abandoned sense without either (a) softening toward ordinary “a păcătui” (to sin) or (b) overshooting toward “a apostazia,” a rare loanword largely unfamiliar to lay readers and used almost exclusively for formal ecclesiastical apostasy proceedings. | Use “a se lepăda de credință” (to renounce/deny the faith) as the primary phrase rather than a single verb, since Romanian naturally intensifies through phrase-length rather than a single lexical item; reserve “a se abate” for milder drift-language contexts (e.g., 3:12’s “heart that turns away”) and “a se lepăda” for the sharper 6:6 sense. |
| Faith of the Old Testament Saints | credință, încredințare/adeverire, dovadă/dovedire, nădejde | Hebrews 11:1’s ὑπόστασις is the chapter’s single hardest term: it shares its exact root with “ipostas/ipostază,” Orthodox theology’s fixed Trinitarian/Christological technical term for a divine Person. A transliterated rendering here would be not merely inelegant but actively confusing at a foundational catechetical level. | Never transliterate ὑπόστασις at 11:1; use “încredințare” (paired secondarily with “adeverire”) per established Romanian Bible tradition, with an explicit “do not use ipostas/ipostază” instruction carried into every Phase 2 segment touching this verse. |
| Perseverance and Assurance | răbdare/stăruință, a da înapoi, pieire, disciplină/certare părintească, chemare, Începător | ”Assurance” as a discrete theological category (settled confidence of final salvation) sits in the same tension with Orthodox theosis-as-ongoing-process theology already flagged in the Romans baseline (assurance_of_salvation doctrine); Hebrews sharpens this tension further because its warning passages (6:4-6; 10:26-31) explicitly contemplate the possibility of a professing believer’s ruin, a real exegetical tension even among non-Orthodox interpreters. | Do not resolve the tension by translation choice; render both the assurance passages (6:19; 10:22-23) and the warning passages (6:4-6; 10:26-31) with full force in Romanian, and let the curriculum’s doctrine-analysis layer (not the glossary) carry the theological synthesis. |
| Access to God through Christ’s Blood | a se apropia, încredere/îndrăzneală, catapeteasmă, Locul Sfânt/Sfânta Sfintelor | ”Catapeteasmă” denotes, in every contemporary Romanian Orthodox parish, the iconostasis — an enduring architectural feature that (unlike the Hebrews veil) is not torn down or removed. Hebrews’ entire rhetorical point (10:20) is the opposite: the veil is opened/torn, granting direct access. | Retain “catapeteasmă” (there is no better available word and abandoning it would sever the reader’s link to the vivid, physically present referent in their own worship space) but require escalating teaching notes across all three occurrences (6:19; 9:3; 10:20), culminating in an explicit statement at 10:20 that Hebrews’ point is the opening of what was once a barrier — not a claim that the physical iconostasis should be removed, which is a category confusion the curriculum must forestall directly. |
2. Missing Vocabulary — No Native Romanian Equivalent
These concepts have no single existing Romanian word; each requires either a constructed phrase, a footnoted paraphrase, or explicit teaching background rather than a one-word solution.
| Concept | Greek | Gap description | Recommended construction |
|---|---|---|---|
| Order of Melchizedek as a priestly category | τάξις Μελχισέδεκ | Romanian has no native category for “a priestly order distinct from, and prior to, the Levitical order established by the Law.” The concept must be built from background, not named by a single term. | ”rânduiala lui Melchisedec” (already fixed in the core glossary), always introduced with a one-sentence gloss (“o preoție anterioară și superioară celei levitice, instituite prin jurământul lui Dumnezeu”) at first occurrence in each teaching unit. |
| Permanent, non-transferable priesthood | ἀπαράβατος | No single Romanian adjective conveys “cannot pass to a successor.” “Netrecătoare” (non-passing) is serviceable but easily misread as merely “eternal” (= “veșnică”), losing the specific successor-less nuance central to 7:23-24’s argument (many Levitical priests died; Christ has no successor because he does not die). | Render as “preoție netrecătoare, care nu poate trece la altul” (a non-transferable priesthood, which cannot pass to another) at 7:24 rather than the bare adjective alone. |
| Earthly copy correlating to a heavenly original | ἀντίτυπος | No native Romanian noun for “a derivative correspondence-copy” outside the collision-prone loanword “antitip” (see §3 below). | “închipuire” (image/likeness) or “chip corespunzător” (corresponding form), always with an explicit “copie pe pământ a realității cerești” gloss at 9:24. |
| Costly, ransom-based redemption (vs. bare release) | λύτρωσις / ἀπολύτρωσις | Romanian “eliberare” (release) is available but flattens the costly-payment dimension; “răscumpărare” is correct but as a compound concept (re- + a cumpăra, “to buy back”) requires the kinsman-redeemer Old Testament background (Ruth’s Boaz; Leviticus 25) to land with its full force, background contemporary readers — Orthodox or Evangelical — cannot be assumed to have. | Use “răscumpărare” (fixed) but attach OT kinsman-redeemer background material in the doctrine unit for 9:12,15, not merely a glossary note. |
| A word without recorded ancestry (Melchizedek’s timelessness) | ἀγενεαλόγητος | A rare NT compound; Romanian has no everyday equivalent word. | ”fără genealogie” (without genealogy) — a transparent calque that works because Romanian genealogical vocabulary (“genealogie,” “neam,” “spiță”) is already familiar from OT narrative contexts; no further gap remains once this phrase is adopted. |
| Formative, loving fatherly correction (vs. punitive punishment) | παιδεία | ”Disciplină” is a modern loanword with secular/institutional connotations (school discipline); “pedeapsă” over-specifies as punitive. Neither alone carries 12:5-11’s explicit “because he loves” framing. | ”certare părintească” (fatherly correction) as primary, with “disciplină” retained only as a secondary clarifying gloss, never as the lead term, since “certare” in Romanian already carries a stronger relational/parental connotation than the more institutional “disciplină.” |
3. Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods Requiring Fencing
Unlike the missing-vocabulary list above, these Romanian words already exist and are already doctrinally loaded by contemporary Orthodox liturgical and devotional practice. The risk is not absence of a word but unwanted activation of the wrong referent domain. Each requires deliberate fencing (explicit notes, paired qualifiers, or contextual anchoring) rather than a search for a different word — in every case, the existing word is still the correct choice; substitution would create a worse problem (unfamiliarity) than the one it solves.
| Romanian term | Contemporary Orthodox referent that crowds it | Hebrews referent that must be fenced off | Fencing strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| arhiereu | Living ecclesiastical office: a consecrated bishop, member of the Holy Synod of Bishops (Sfântul Sinod al Arhiereilor) | Christ’s unique, unrepeatable, non-transferable heavenly high priesthood | Standing note at every occurrence in Christological use; never let “arhiereu” stand alone without an adjacent qualifier (“arhiereul nostru ceresc,” “singurul arhiereu desăvârșit”) |
| catapeteasmă | The physical iconostasis, a permanent architectural feature separating nave from altar in every parish church today | The Mosaic veil, now torn/opened, symbolizing removed separation | Escalating notes at 6:19, 9:3, 10:20; explicit statement that Hebrews’ argument is about access being opened, not a claim about contemporary church architecture |
| mijlocitor / mijlocire | The constant Orthodox liturgical practice of petitioning canonized saints and, above all, the Theotokos, as intercessors (akathists, litanies, “Preasfântă Născătoare de Dumnezeu, mântuiește-ne”) | Christ’s own exclusive, personal, continuous mediating and interceding office (7:25; 8:6; 9:15; 12:24) | Foreground 7:25 (“he always lives to make intercession”) as the interpretive anchor before any material on requesting others’ prayers; never let a lesson introduce “mijlocire” without first establishing Christ’s own priority |
| sfinți | Canonized figures venerated through icons, relics, and akathist prayer | The corporate designation for all believers (6:10; 13:24) | Reuse the Romans-baseline standing clarifying note at every occurrence, unmodified |
| ipostas / ipostază (the word to AVOID, not use) | The fixed Trinitarian/Christological technical term for a divine Person (e.g., “cele trei ipostasuri ale Sfintei Treimi”) | Hebrews 11:1’s ὑπόστασις, an entirely unrelated sense (“assurance,” “substantial reality of hoped-for things”) | Explicit “do not transliterate” instruction (already in the glossary); render as “încredințare/adeverire” only |
| antitip (the word to AVOID as a rendering choice) | The fixed Orthodox liturgical-sacramental term for the consecrated Eucharistic elements, understood as antitype of the heavenly reality | Hebrews 9:24’s ἀντίτυπος, describing the earthly sanctuary as copy of the heavenly original — the same typological direction inverted | Do not transliterate; use “închipuire / chip corespunzător” |
| liturghie / a sluji liturghia (the phrase to AVOID) | The fixed proper term for the contemporary Divine Liturgy (Eucharistic celebration) | λειτουργία’s broader NT sense: the Mosaic priests’ cultic service generally, and Christ’s own heavenly priestly ministry (8:2,6; 9:1,6,21; 10:11) | Render consistently as “slujire,” never “liturghie,” throughout Hebrews |
| preot | The living contemporary Romanian parish clergy title | The Levitical priest of the Old Testament sacrificial system | Keep explicit Old Testament/tabernacle context markers (“preot levitic,” “preoții din Legea Veche”) near every occurrence to prevent the reader defaulting to their own parish priest |
| pocăință | One of the Holy Mysteries (Sfintele Taine): the sacramental rite of Confession, practiced regularly | Hebrews 6:1,6’s foundational, initial “repentance from dead works,” the once-for-all turning that grounds Christian life | Clarify that Hebrews addresses the foundational turning, not primarily the recurring sacramental rite — the two are not opposed but are not identical either; the curriculum should state this rather than let the reader assume identity |
| jertfă applied metaphorically (13:15 “jertfă de laudă”) | The atoning, once-for-all sacrifice of Christ vocabulary used throughout chs. 9-10 | The metaphorical extension to praise/worship offered continually by believers | Always pair with “de laudă” and never let the bare noun stand for this verse in isolation, to prevent the reader hearing an implied repeatable atoning act |
| chemare | ”Chemare monahală” — the culturally prominent call to monastic life | The general, universal call of every believer (3:1’s “heavenly calling”) | Reuse Romans-baseline standing note unmodified |
4. Transliteration vs. Paraphrase Decisions
| Term | Decision | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| Μελχισέδεκ | Transliterate (“Melchisedec”) | Proper name; established Romanian Bible form; no substitute possible or needed. |
| Ἀαρών | Transliterate (“Aaron”) | Proper name; established form. |
| Μωϋσῆς | Transliterate (“Moise”) | Proper name; established form. |
| ἀββά | Retain transliteration (“Avva”) | Already fixed in Romans baseline; not reopened by Hebrews (term does not recur in Hebrews itself but the convention applies to related devotional material). |
| ὑπόστασις (Heb 11:1 sense) | Reject transliteration (“ipostas/ipostază” forbidden) — use paraphrase “încredințare/adeverire” | Root-identical collision with the fixed Trinitarian technical term; transliteration would be actively misleading, not merely unfamiliar. |
| ἀντίτυπος | Reject transliteration (“antitip” forbidden as primary rendering) — use paraphrase “închipuire / chip corespunzător” | Collides with the fixed Orthodox liturgical term for the Eucharistic antitype, which runs in the opposite typological direction. |
| ἀρχιερεύς | Use existing native word “arhiereu,” not a paraphrase or new coinage | The word already exists, is already the correct Orthodox Synodal Bible rendering, and any invented alternative (e.g., “conducătorul preoțesc suprem”) would sound foreign and break continuity with the reader’s existing Bible. The collision is managed by teaching notes, not by avoiding the word. |
| ἀρχηγός | Paraphrase via established honorific title, not transliteration (“Începător,” with “Căpetenie” as secondary variant) | No Greek-derived loanword exists in general Romanian usage; the Synodal tradition’s own phrase “Începătorul mântuirii noastre” (2:10) is the natural anchor. |
| ἱλαστήριον | Paraphrase (“capacul ispășirii”) | A physical-object description; transliteration would produce an unintelligible neologism with no existing Bible-Romanian precedent. |
| καταπέτασμα | Use existing native word “catapeteasmă,” not a paraphrase | As with arhiereu, the word already exists and is the correct, expected term; the doctrinal risk is managed through notes, not lexical avoidance. Inventing an alternative (e.g., “perdeaua cortului”) would sever the (doctrinally productive, once fenced) link to the reader’s own church architecture that makes 10:20’s resolution land with force. |
| λειτουργία | Paraphrase, deliberately avoiding the existing cognate loanword (“slujire,” not “liturghie”) | Rare case where the “obvious” existing Romanian derivative must be actively rejected because its contemporary meaning has narrowed to a single fixed liturgical referent incompatible with Hebrews’ broader usage. |
| Χριστός (fused name-title usage) | Transliterate as established name-title “Hristos” | Already fixed as its own registry entry (christ_name_title); paired consistently with “Iisus,” never “Isus,” within this document set. |
5. Ranked List of Highest-Risk Ambiguities in Hebrews
Ranked by combined severity (doctrinal weight × likelihood of reader misapplication given Romanian Orthodox devotional life), highest first.
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ἀρχιερεύς → arhiereu (Christ as High Priest) — Direct homonymic collision with a living, functioning ecclesiastical office (diocesan bishop). Highest risk in the entire curriculum because the collision is not merely conceptual but institutional and current. (Critical)
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καταπέτασμα → catapeteasmă (the veil, esp. 10:20) — The identical word names a permanent architectural feature of every Orthodox parish, while Hebrews’ argument requires the reader to grasp that the barrier it names has been removed. Highest risk of a reader drawing the doctrinally opposite conclusion from the term’s everyday referent. (Critical)
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ὑπόστασις → încredințare/adeverire, NOT ipostas (Hebrews 11:1) — Root-identical to the Trinitarian technical term; a single mistranslated segment could import Person-of-the-Trinity language into a verse about the nature of faith, a category error severe enough to distort catechesis on both faith and Trinitarian doctrine simultaneously. (Critical)
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μεσίτης / ἐντυγχάνει → mijlocitor / mijlocire (Christ’s exclusive mediation and intercession) — Sharper than the parallel Romans risk because Hebrews names an exclusive office (μεσίτης, 8:6; 9:15; 12:24), not merely an activity; Orthodox liturgical practice’s constant recourse to saints and the Theotokos as intercessors could default-override Christ’s own exclusive mediatorship described at 7:25 unless explicitly sequenced first in every lesson. (Critical)
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διαθήκη’s double sense at 9:16-17 (covenant/testament) — A genuine untranslatable wordplay; without a footnote, the argument of these two verses simply does not work in Romanian, and readers may conclude the text is non-sequitur rather than recognizing lost wordplay. (High)
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ἅγια / ἅγια ἁγίων at 9:12 (Locul Sfânt / Sfânta Sfintelor) — Genuine textual ambiguity (general sanctuary vs. innermost chamber specifically) compounded by the fact that Romanian must choose one or the other rendering, unlike Greek’s flexible bare plural; silent resolution risks either overstating or understating the scope of Christ’s heavenly entry. (High)
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λειτουργία → slujire, avoiding “liturghie” — Lower doctrinal stakes than items above, but high likelihood of accidental drift toward the cognate loanword in less carefully reviewed Phase 2 segments, given how natural “liturghie” would feel to a translator working from Greek λειτουργία. Requires active vigilance precisely because it is not a hard word to get wrong, only an easy one to get wrong by default. (High)
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ἀντίτυπος → not “antitip” (9:24) — Same drift risk as #7: the transliteration is linguistically obvious and doctrinally backwards. (High)
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παραπίπτω / ἀφίστημι → a se abate / a se lepăda (apostasy warnings, 3:12; 6:6) — Risk of softening toward generic “a păcătui,” which would blunt the warning passages’ distinctive force — arguably Hebrews’ most pastorally consequential translation choice, since these passages are already exegetically contested even in the source language. (Critical, per curriculum weighting — see doctrine “Danger of Apostasy”)
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ἀπαράβατος → netrecătoare (7:24, Christ’s non-transferable priesthood) — Risk of collapsing the specific “no successor” argument into a generic “eternal,” weakening the chapter 7 comparative argument against the many, mortal Levitical high priests. (Medium-High)
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μετάνοια → pocăință (6:1,6; 12:17) — Risk of over-identifying Hebrews’ foundational repentance with the recurring sacramental rite of Confession, subtly shifting the text’s own argument (a once-for-all foundational turning) toward an ongoing devotional practice framing not in view in these verses. (High)
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ἱλάσκομαι → a ispăși (2:17) — Risk of softening into “a împăca” (reconcile) alone, losing the costly, God-ward, wrath-related dimension; foundational to the entire atonement argument developed through chapter 9. (Critical)
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τελειόω → a desăvârși, tracking two distinct referents (Christ’s completed perfecting vs. believers’ ongoing perfecting) — Risk of collapsing both senses into a single undifferentiated Orthodox theosis-adjacent reading, obscuring the text’s own distinction between a finished, historical qualifying-event (Christ, 2:10; 5:9; 7:28) and a still-open, communal process (believers, 11:40; 12:23). (High)
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κρείσσων → mai bun/mai bună, consistency risk — Not a conceptual ambiguity but a discipline risk: any lapse into synonym variation (“superior,” “mai valoros”) across the 13+ occurrences would render the epistle’s central structural argument invisible to the Romanian reader, even though no single occurrence is individually high-risk. (Medium, but structurally significant)
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πρωτότοκοι → cei întâi-născuți (12:23, corporate sense) — Lower individual stakes, but risk of confusion with any future curriculum unit’s Christological “firstborn” title language (not present in Hebrews itself, but likely to arise in cross-referenced material), requiring a clear corporate-vs-Christological fence even though Hebrews itself does not create the ambiguity directly. (Medium)
6. Summary Recommendation for Phase 2
Hebrews’ linguistic-gap profile differs from Romans’ in kind, not merely degree: where Romans’ hardest risks were abstract soteriological terms (grace, righteousness, justification) contested at the level of systematic theology, Hebrews’ hardest risks are concrete cultic-vocabulary terms (arhiereu, catapeteasmă, jertfă, sânge) contested at the level of lived weekly liturgical practice. Phase 2 segment processing must therefore weight teaching-note density even more heavily toward the priestly/sacrificial vocabulary cluster (§1’s rows 2 and 4; §3’s arhiereu/catapeteasmă/mijlocitor/liturghie entries) than the Romans package required, since these are not one-time doctrinal clarifications but recurring, chapter-spanning terms that a reader encounters in worship every week outside this curriculum entirely.
This analysis extends the Romans baseline 06-equivalent gap analysis (not directly available in this package but presumed structurally parallel) and directly informs 08_core_glossary.md, translation_memory.json, bible_term_registry.json, and doctrine_risk_registry.json for the Hebrews curriculum.