Linguistic Gap Analysis
Linguistic Gap Analysis: Jude — English–Romanian
Purpose and Scope
This document executes Phase 1 Step 8 for the Jude curriculum. It builds directly on 08_core_glossary.md and the merged bible_term_registry.json entries produced for Jude, and it assumes the baseline Romans translation_memory.json / bible_term_registry.json as the standing language authority. Nothing here contradicts baseline term renderings (har, mântuire, chemat, sfinți, Domnul, Iisus, Duhul Sfânt, credință, slavă, pace). This analysis instead maps where Jude’s specific vocabulary — much of it new to the Language Package — creates genuine gaps, crowded semantic neighborhoods, or transliteration decisions that Phase 2 translators must resolve consistently.
Jude is short (25 verses) but doctrinally dense and lexically unusual: it contains an unusually high concentration of rare words (ἀποδιορίζοντες, σπιλάδες, δεσπότης distinct from κύριος), a direct citation of non-canonical material (Enoch), and a structural keyword (τηρέω) that must echo identically across the letter. The core passage (1:3-23) contains nearly all of this density.
1. Doctrine Vocabulary Matrix
1.1 Contending for the Faith Once Delivered
| Element | Detail |
|---|---|
| Available Romanian terms | credință [TM, existing]; a lupta pentru [NEW]; o dată pentru totdeauna [NEW]; dat/predat [NEW]; credința cea preasfântă [NEW] |
| Weaknesses | (a) “credință” is semantically overloaded — it must carry both Romans’ subjective-trust sense (already anchored in TM) and Jude’s objective, doctrinal-content sense (“the faith,” a fixed deposit) with no morphological marker distinguishing the two; only context disambiguates. (b) “dat/predat” (παραδίδωμι) sits directly on top of the Romanian Orthodox theological category “Sfânta Tradiție,” creating a real risk that readers either collapse Jude’s closed apostolic deposit into the broader, still-unfolding category of living Tradition, or conversely react against “Tradiție” language altogether and lose the positive continuity Jude intends. (c) “a lupta pentru” for ἐπαγωνίζομαι lacks the athletic/agonistic intensity of the Greek compound; ordinary Romanian “a lupta” can describe any effortful struggle, diluting the specifically arena/combat imagery. |
| Recommended strategy | Retain “credință” per TM but require a bracketed teaching gloss at 1:3 and 1:20 clarifying the objective-deposit sense (“credința — învățătura apostolică primită, nu doar încrederea personală”). For παραδίδωμι, mandate the translator note distinguishing Jude’s closed, one-time deposit from ongoing Tradiție (already flagged CRITICAL in the registry) at every occurrence, not only the first. Strengthen “a lupta pentru” with an intensifying modifier where space allows (“a lupta din răsputeri pentru”) to recover the agonistic force, without inventing a new headword. |
1.2 Judgment on Ungodly False Teachers
| Element | Detail |
|---|---|
| Available Romanian terms | nelegiuit/nelegiuire [NEW]; har [TM]; desfrânare [NEW]; Stăpân [NEW]; Domnul [TM]; a tăgădui/a se lepăda de [NEW]; judecată/osândă [NEW]; ființe slăvite [NEW]; a huli [NEW]; agape/mese de dragoste frățească [NEW]; cei care produc dezbinări [NEW]; firești (oameni) [NEW] |
| Weaknesses | (a) Romanian has no single term that isolates “impiety toward God’s specific authority” from generic sinfulness; “nelegiuit” (lit. “lawless/unlawful one”) risks sliding toward a legal/civic register rather than Jude’s relational-irreverence sense, while “necredincios” wrongly shifts to “unbelieving.” (b) Stacking “Stăpân” beside “Domnul” (δεσπότης + κύριος, v.4) is lexically available but culturally fragile: ordinary Romanian usage does not habitually distinguish two titles for Christ side by side, so translators may unconsciously merge them into one phrase, erasing Jude’s double affirmation of deity. (c) “agape” as a transliterated loanword is a genuine comprehension asset (it already exists in Orthodox parish vocabulary) but risks bleeding into the Eucharistic register of “Sfânta Împărtășanie,” which the text does not intend at v.12. (d) “cei care produc dezbinări” resolves ἀποδιορίζοντες’s transitive/reflexive ambiguity in one direction (divisive troublemakers) while suppressing the equally valid reflexive reading (self-excluding apostates); this is a genuine gap, not merely a stylistic choice. |
| Recommended strategy | Keep “nelegiuit/nelegiuire” but pair it, at first occurrence (1:4), with a short gloss anchoring it to irreverence toward God’s authority specifically (cf. vv.8, 15). Preserve “Stăpân” + “Domnul” as two distinct words at v.4 and add a translator note explaining the double-title strategy so Phase 2 translators do not silently merge them. Render ἀγάπαι as “agape (mese de dragoste frățească)” — transliteration plus paraphrase in the same clause — with a footnote distinguishing it from the Eucharist. For ἀποδιορίζοντες, retain “cei care produc dezbinări” as the primary rendering but preserve the rejected reflexive alternative in the segment cache and flag for mandatory theologian review at every occurrence (only one, v.19), per the registry entry. |
1.3 Old Testament Warnings as Types (Israel, Angels, Sodom)
| Element | Detail |
|---|---|
| Available Romanian terms | a nimici/a pieri [NEW]; rangul propriu/stăpânirea proprie [NEW]; lanțuri veșnice [NEW]; foc veșnic [NEW]; trup/fire străină [NEW]; Sodoma și Gomora [NEW, established proper name]; Cain, Balaam, Core [NEW, established proper names]; cârtitori [NEW] |
| Weaknesses | (a) The three types (Israel/v.5, angels/v.6, Sodom/v.7) depend on readers holding fairly detailed Old Testament background (Exodus, Genesis 6/2 Peter 2:4, Genesis 19) that a culturally Orthodox but liturgically-rather-than-catechetically formed reader may not have internalized systematically, even though the proper names themselves (Sodoma, Cain, Balaam, Core) are lexically unproblematic. (b) “rangul propriu” for ἀρχή is defensible but abstract; the concrete image of angels abandoning an assigned “post” or “station” is easily lost to a more bureaucratic-sounding “rang.” (c) “trup/fire străină” preserves the genuine exegetical crux (angelic-kind flesh vs. general unnatural desire) but a Romanian reader unfamiliar with the crux may default to a narrower reading than the Greek supports without the accompanying note. |
| Recommended strategy | Attach brief OT-background glosses to Cain, Balaam, and Core at first mention (already flagged Low risk lexically, but pedagogically necessary) rather than treating them as self-explanatory proper names. Render ἀρχή with a concrete-leaning option (“locul/rangul care le fusese dat”) rather than a purely abstract “rang” to preserve the sense of an assigned post that was abandoned. Retain the literal, unresolved “trup/fire străină” with the mandatory interpretive-range note rather than substituting a modern paraphrase that would silently foreclose one reading. |
1.4 Mercy and Rescue of the Wavering
| Element | Detail |
|---|---|
| Available Romanian terms | milă [NEW]; aveți milă de [NEW]; a se contrazice (v.9)/a se îndoi (v.22) [NEW]; a scoate/a răpi cu forța [NEW]; frică (cu grijă) [NEW]; cămașă mânjită [NEW]; a mântui/a scăpa [NEW, root TM] |
| Weaknesses | (a) The letter’s mercy theme depends on “milă” recurring identically across vv.2, 21, 22, 23; Romanian has near-synonyms (“îndurare,” “compasiune”) that a translator might reach for stylistically at one occurrence, breaking the deliberate verbal thread. (b) διακρίνομαι’s two senses (dispute, v.9; waver, v.22) genuinely cannot share one Romanian headword without either sounding wrong in one verse or obscuring the letter’s later application of the same root idea (uncertainty/instability) to struggling believers. (c) φόβος at v.23 risks being read as fear directed at the wavering person rather than wary caution about sin’s contamination — a subtle but pastorally significant misreading in a culture where contempt toward the “backslidden” is a live social risk. (d) “a scoate/a răpi cu forța” for ἁρπάζω must resist softening toward a gentler verb of “helping,” which would blunt the fire-rescue urgency. |
| Recommended strategy | Lock “milă”/“aveți milă de” as the fixed rendering for all four occurrences of the ἔλεος/ἐλεέω root (vv.2, 21, 22, 23) with no stylistic substitution permitted — treat this with the same rigor as τηρέω. Keep the split rendering for διακρίνομαι (v.9 vs. v.22) but require a translator note at v.22 explicitly naming the same Greek root as v.9 so the letter’s interpretive link is not lost to a reader comparing translations. Add a mandatory clarifying gloss at v.23 that “frică” describes caution about contamination, not contempt toward the person. Preserve “a scoate/a răpi cu forța” without softening. |
1.5 Kept by God and Presented Blameless
| Element | Detail |
|---|---|
| Available Romanian terms | a păzi/păziți [NEW]; păziți-vă [NEW]; a păzi (de cădere) [NEW, for φυλάσσω]; a înfățișa fără prihană [NEW] |
| Weaknesses | This is the letter’s single greatest structural translation risk. Jude builds a deliberate verbal argument across vv.1, 6, 13, 21, and 24 using τηρέω (kept) and then, at the doxological climax (v.24), switches to the distinct verb φυλάσσω. Romanian has no natural single verb that captures both without either (a) using “a păzi” for both verbs, erasing Jude’s deliberate lexical variation at the climax, or (b) introducing a second verb (“a ocroti,” “a feri”) for φυλάσσω that risks looking like an unrelated concept rather than a related but distinct capstone term. There is also a risk that “a înfățișa fără prihană” (ἵστημι … ἀμώμους) is flattened toward a generic “curat” (clean) in casual paraphrase, losing the sacrificial-cultic resonance (unblemished offering) that gives the doxology its theological weight. |
| Recommended strategy | Fix “a păzi / păziți” identically for every τηρέω occurrence (1:1, 6, 13, 21) — no exceptions, no synonyms — per the registry’s High-risk flag. For φυλάσσω (1:24), adopt a distinguishable but visibly related rendering (“a păzi de cădere” or “a feri de poticnire”) and record the decision as binding for all Phase 2 documents, with a standing translator note explaining that Jude used two related-but-distinct Greek verbs and Romanian preserves the distinction rather than merging them. Retain “a înfățișa fără prihană” as a fixed compound phrase (never abbreviated to “curat”) to preserve the sacrificial resonance. |
1.6 Doxology and God’s Preserving Power
| Element | Detail |
|---|---|
| Available Romanian terms | slavă [TM]; bucurie nespusă [NEW]; Mântuitor [NEW, root TM]; mărire [NEW]; putere/stăpânire, autoritate [NEW]; veac(uri) [NEW]; viața de veci [NEW] |
| Weaknesses | This doctrine is, unusually in this Language Package, more asset than risk: nearly every term in the closing doxology (1:24-25) has a ready-made, liturgically reinforced Romanian Orthodox equivalent (“slavă,” “mărire,” “putere,” “în veci”), because Jude 1:24-25 is structurally a doxology of exactly the kind Orthodox liturgy uses constantly. The only real weakness is the opposite of scarcity: a translator accustomed to liturgical cadence may unconsciously expand or embellish the doxology beyond Jude’s actual wording (e.g., inserting a Trinitarian formula the text does not contain), or may reach for the fuller liturgical “acum și în veci, și în vecii vecilor” where Jude’s Greek has a simpler “before all time, and now, and forever.” |
| Recommended strategy | Leverage the liturgical resonance deliberately (it aids comprehension and reception) but constrain translators to Jude’s actual three-part temporal formula rather than the longer standard liturgical doxology, to avoid unintentionally over-Trinitarianizing or lengthening the text. Retain “Mântuitor” specifically so its visible root-continuity with “mântuire” is not lost — this is the doxology’s payoff line tying the whole letter together. |
2. Missing Vocabulary vs. Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods
2.1 Genuine Missing-Vocabulary Gaps (no adequate existing Romanian term)
| Gap | Greek | Issue | Resolution |
|---|---|---|---|
| Intensified agonistic contend | ἐπαγωνίζομαι | Romanian “a lupta” is a general-purpose struggle verb used for physical, political, and figurative fights alike; it lacks the compound intensification of the Greek (ἐπι- + ἀγωνίζομαι, “to contend upon/in addition,” athletic-arena root). No single Romanian word isolates this. | Use “a lupta din răsputeri pentru” (a lupta + intensifying modifier) rather than inventing a neologism; record as a constructed rendering, not an assumed existing term. |
| Rare compound: transitive/reflexive divider | ἀποδιορίζοντες | A near-hapax legomenon in the NT; Romanian, like English, has no single word that natively carries both “cause divisions among others” and “separate oneself off” senses simultaneously. | Retain “cei care produc dezbinări” as primary, preserve the reflexive alternative in the segment cache, flag for theologian review (already done in registry) rather than treating this as settled vocabulary. |
| Forensic-sacrificial “present blameless” | ἵστημι … ἀμώμους | No single Romanian verb+adjective pairing natively carries both the legal/ceremonial sense of “presenting” someone formally and the sacrificial-cultic sense of “unblemished” simultaneously; the phrase must be constructed. | Fixed compound “a înfățișa fără prihană” — treat as a coined technical phrase for this curriculum, consistent with how “dreptate imputată” was constructed in the Romans package for a comparable conceptual gap. |
| Double title stacking for deity | δεσπότης beside κύριος | Ordinary Romanian devotional usage does not stack two distinct sovereignty titles for Christ in one breath; “Stăpân” exists but is not conventionally paired with “Domnul” in received liturgical phrasing the way the Greek pairs δεσπότης/κύριος. | Construct the pairing deliberately (“pe singurul nostru Stăpân și Domn, Iisus Hristos”) and flag every occurrence for theologian review per the escalation rules, since this is a constructed rather than inherited phrase. |
2.2 Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods (existing terms with competing associations that must be fenced)
| Term | Crowding source | Fencing strategy |
|---|---|---|
| dat/predat (παραδίδωμι, “delivered”) | Directly adjacent to “Sfânta Tradiție,” a load-bearing Orthodox theological category (Scripture-and-Tradition jointly authoritative). Without fencing, readers will either import the full weight of “Tradiție” onto Jude’s one-time deposit, or react defensively against it. | Mandatory translator note at every occurrence distinguishing Jude’s closed, ἅπαξ-qualified apostolic deposit from the broader living-Tradition category — affirming continuity of content without implying an open, still-developing deposit. |
| agape (ἀγάπαι, “love feasts”) | Adjacent to “Sfânta Împărtășanie” (Eucharist) in the Orthodox liturgical imagination; “agapă” already denotes a real parish practice, but not the Eucharist itself. | Pair the transliteration with the paraphrase in-line (“agape — mese de dragoste frățească”) and footnote the distinction from the Eucharist at first occurrence (v.12). |
| sfinți (ἅγιοι, “saints”) | Crowded by canonized-saint veneration (icons, relics, akathists) — already flagged CRITICAL at the baseline level; Jude 1:3 reinforces this because Jude explicitly addresses the whole threatened congregation, not an ascetic elite. | Repeat the baseline’s mandatory clarifying note at 1:3 specifically, since this is the letter’s only occurrence and carries the full weight of establishing corporate identity for the rest of the letter’s argument. |
| chemat (κλητός, “called”) | Crowded by “chemare monahală” (monastic vocation) — baseline caution applies; Jude 1:1 stacks “chemat,” “preaiubit,” and “păziți” together as a triple description of every believer, intensifying the risk that “chemat” alone reads as a specialized, elevated call. | Ensure the triple-address of v.1 is translated as one coordinated description of ordinary believers, with a note that none of the three terms (called, beloved, kept) implies a monastic or specialized class. |
| arhanghelul Mihail (proper name) | Crowded by strong Orthodox liturgical veneration of Archangel Michael (feast day, iconography, invocations). | Surface, rather than obscure, Jude’s point that even Michael did not presume to pronounce judgment himself but deferred to the Lord — use this as a teaching contrast to the false teachers’ presumption, not a passage to soften for fear of seeming to diminish Michael. |
| firești (oameni) (ψυχικοί, “worldly/soulish”) | Crowded by the positive, load-bearing Orthodox tripartite anthropology (trup-suflet-duh), in which “suflet” (soul) is not deficient but a good and necessary part of the human person. | Mandatory teaching note: the deficiency Jude names is pneumatological (lacking the Spirit’s indwelling), not anthropological (having a soul is not the problem); must not be read as devaluing “suflet” as such. |
| Enoh (citation source) | Crowded by canon-boundary questions in both Orthodox (Anaghinoscomena) and Evangelical traditions — 1 Enoch is outside both canons. | Mandatory note distinguishing “citing a true prophetic saying” (which Jude, as an inspired apostolic writer, is authorized to do, as with pagan poets cited elsewhere in the NT) from “canonizing the source book.” Do not let readers conclude either that Jude is unreliable for citing it, or that 1 Enoch should be regarded as Scripture. |
| stânci ascunse / pete (σπιλάδες) | Not crowded by an external cultural association, but internally crowded by two live, defensible readings (nautical hazard vs. moral stain) that a single Romanian rendering will inevitably favor one of. | Retain both glosses via translator note rather than collapsing to one image; note the possible lexical echo with v.23’s “cămașă mânjită” for teaching purposes. |
3. Transliteration vs. Paraphrase Decisions
| Item | Decision | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| Ἑνώχ (Enoch) | Transliterate: “Enoh” | Standard Romanian Bible proper-name convention; the risk is doctrinal (canonicity), not lexical, and is handled by a teaching note, not by altering the name. |
| Κάϊν, Βαλαάμ, Κόρε (Cain, Balaam, Korah) | Transliterate, per established Romanian Bible forms: “Cain,” “Balaam,” “Core” | Standard proper names with existing Romanian Bible convention; no paraphrase needed, but OT-background glosses are needed pedagogically (see §1.3). |
| Σόδομα καὶ Γόμορρα | Transliterate: “Sodoma și Gomora” | Standard, well-known proper names; no ambiguity. |
| Μιχαὴλ ὁ ἀρχάγγελος | Transliterate + retain title: “arhanghelul Mihail” | Established form; the title “arhanghel” is itself already a transliterated Greek loanword fully naturalized in Romanian. |
| ἀγάπαι (love feasts) | Transliterate + paraphrase together: “agape (mese de dragoste frățească)“ | Transliteration alone risks Eucharistic confusion (see §2.2); paraphrase alone loses the recognizable liturgical asset. Combining both in-line, with a footnote, resolves this best. |
| δεσπότης (Master/Sovereign) | Paraphrase, not transliterate: “Stăpân” | A transliterated “despot” would carry strongly negative modern connotations (tyrant) in Romanian; “Stăpân” (Master/Owner) correctly conveys absolute authority without the pejorative modern sense. |
| ἀμήν (Amen, implied in doxological register) | Transliterate: “Amin” | Per baseline transliteration standard for established liturgical exclamations. |
| πνεῦμα ψυχικοί (soulish) | Paraphrase, not transliterate: “firești (oameni)“ | No transliteration option exists (this is a native Greek adjective, not a proper noun or loanword); paraphrase with mandatory teaching note is the only viable path (see §2.2). |
| ἁγιωτάτη πίστις (most holy faith) | Paraphrase using existing TM roots: “credința cea preasfântă” | Both component roots (sfânt, credință) are already established in translation memory; constructing the superlative phrase natively is preferable to any loanword approach. |
General rule for Jude: transliterate proper names (persons, places, titles like “arhanghel”) per established Romanian Bible convention; paraphrase common nouns and adjectives even where a Greek-derived loanword might exist in theological jargon, unless (as with “agape”) the loanword carries a genuine, positive comprehension asset that outweighs its collision risk — in which case pair transliteration with paraphrase rather than choosing one exclusively.
4. Ranked List of Highest-Risk Ambiguities in Jude
Ranked by combined doctrinal weight and likelihood of translator/reader error, highest first:
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παραδίδωμι / “the faith once delivered” (1:3) vs. Sfânta Tradiție — CRITICAL. The letter’s opening theological claim collides directly with a load-bearing Orthodox category; mishandling this single verse can distort how the entire letter is received by the primary audience. (Registry: delivered, Critical)
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Enoch citation and canonicity (1:14-15) — CRITICAL. Genuine risk of readers concluding either that Jude regards 1 Enoch as Scripture, or that Jude’s argument is undermined by citing a non-canonical source; both conclusions are wrong and doctrinally consequential. (Registry: enoch, Critical)
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τηρέω consistency across vv.1, 6, 13, 21 and its relation to φυλάσσω at v.24 — CRITICAL/HIGH structural risk. This is the letter’s central verbal argument (believers kept vs. angels kept for judgment); any inconsistency in Phase 2 rendering silently breaks Jude’s own literary structure. (Registry: kept, keep_from_stumbling, both High)
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ψυχικοί and Romanian tripartite anthropology (1:19) — HIGH. A careless rendering risks contradicting a positive, catechetically central Orthodox anthropological category (trup-suflet-duh) rather than making Jude’s actual, narrower pneumatological point. (Registry: worldly_soulish, High)
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ἀποδιορίζοντες transitive/reflexive ambiguity (1:19) — HIGH. A near-unique word whose two readings meaningfully change whether the false teachers are chiefly internal agitators or self-excluding apostates; no confident resolution is available from lexical evidence alone. (Registry: cause_divisions, High)
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δεσπότης stacked with κύριος (1:4) — HIGH. A constructed double-title phrase with no natural Romanian precedent; high risk of unconscious merging into a single title, silently weakening the deity-of-Christ emphasis the verse builds. (Registry: master_sovereign, High)
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διακρίνομαι polysemy across vv.9 and 22 — HIGH. Same Greek root, two distinct senses (dispute vs. waver), that Romanian cannot render with one word without damaging one of the two passages; the letter’s rhetorical link between the two occurrences is also at risk of being lost entirely. (Registry: dispute_or_waver, High)
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σπιλάδες lexical crux (1:12) — MEDIUM-HIGH. Two defensible readings (reefs vs. blemishes) with a possible deliberate echo of v.23’s “stained garment”; silently resolving in one direction forecloses a legitimate interpretive option.
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σαρκὸς ἑτέρας, “strange flesh” (1:7) — MEDIUM-HIGH. Genuine exegetical crux (angelic-kind flesh vs. general unnatural desire) with real pastoral sensitivity if resolved carelessly toward a narrower modern reading than the text supports.
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ἀγάπαι vs. Eucharistic “comuniune”/liturgical association (1:12) — MEDIUM-HIGH. Not a translation error risk so much as a reception risk: readers may import Eucharistic solemnity into a description of the false teachers’ self-indulgent conduct, inverting the verse’s critical tone.
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Archangel Michael’s restraint (1:9) vs. veneration expectations — MEDIUM. Risk is homiletical rather than lexical: a culture with strong positive veneration of Michael may resist or soften the text’s point that even Michael deferred rather than presumed to judge.
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“sfinți” corporate vs. canonized-saint default (1:3) — CRITICAL by baseline classification, listed here for completeness since Jude’s single occurrence carries unusually high argumentative weight (it establishes who is being addressed for the rest of the letter).
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“chemat” vs. monastic-calling default, compounded with “preaiubit” and “păziți” in one triple address (1:1) — HIGH. The stacking of three loaded terms in one verse compounds baseline risk rather than diluting it.
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“har” perverted into license (1:4) vs. participatory Palamite grace — CRITICAL by baseline classification; Jude’s usage (grace abused, not grace itself) requires careful framing so the condemnation lands on the abuse, not on the participatory reality of grace the Orthodox reader otherwise rightly holds.
5. Summary for Phase 2 Handoff
- All Critical/High items above must be loaded into the merged
bible_term_registry.jsonanddoctrine_risk_registry.json(Phase 1 Step 2/9 outputs) with review routing set to “Human theologian” for items 1-9 above and “Native speaker review” for items 10-11. - The τηρέω/φυλάσσω consistency decision (item 3) must be finalized and locked as a binding style rule before any Phase 2 segment translation begins, since it affects five separate verses across the letter’s structure.
- Every crowded-neighborhood term in §2.2 requires a standing translator note template, not a one-off gloss, since these collisions recur across any future Jude-based curriculum material, not only the core passage.
- No chapter of Jude falls outside this analysis: the whole letter (1:1-25) has been reviewed; verses outside the immediate doctrine list (e.g., vv.17-19’s apostolic prediction, v.16’s grumblers) are addressed above as part of “Judgment on Ungodly False Teachers” and “Old Testament Warnings as Types” respectively, and no verse range has been silently skipped.