Linguistic Gap Analysis
Linguistic Gap Analysis: 1 Thessalonians (English/Greek → Sanskrit)
Purpose and Scope
This document executes PRD Phase 1 Step 8 for the 1 Thessalonians curriculum. It extends — and must not contradict — the Romans baseline translation_memory.json, bible_term_registry.json, and 12_ai_translation_requirements.md. Its purpose is to make explicit, for the five doctrines assigned to this curriculum (The Return of Christ, Resurrection of Believers, Sanctification, Hope in Grief, The Day of the Lord), exactly where classical Sanskrit’s philosophical vocabulary helps translation, where it actively fights it, and where no ready vocabulary exists at all. The core passage, 1 Thessalonians 4:13–18, sits at the intersection of four of the five assigned doctrines simultaneously (Hope in Grief, Resurrection, Return of Christ, and — via 5:1–11’s immediate sequel — Day of the Lord), and is treated throughout as the theological anchor rather than the boundary of analysis. Coverage below spans the whole letter, chapters 1–5.
Categorical reminder (per baseline framing): every risk below is grounded in a citable classical text — a specific Upaniṣadic mahāvākya, a specific Bhagavad Gītā verse, a specific Yoga Sūtra aphorism, or a specific Mīmāṃsā/Nyāya technical category — not a diffuse cultural-background impression. This is what makes Sanskrit’s risk profile different in kind from a vernacular Language Package’s.
Part 1: Doctrine Vocabulary Matrix
For each assigned doctrine: the available Sanskrit candidate terms, why each candidate is attractive, its specific weakness, and the recommended strategy (which is already reflected in 08_core_glossary.md / bible_term_registry.json and must not be re-derived).
1.1 The Return of Christ (Parousia)
| Candidate | Attraction | Weakness | Verdict |
|---|---|---|---|
| अवतारः / अवतरणम् (avatāraḥ) | Transparent “descent” vocabulary; would read fluently | Forbidden. Grounded in Bhagavad Gītā 4:7–8’s explicit self-description of periodic divine descent; worse than the baseline’s Incarnation problem because a future, still-awaited instance already exists in the canonical list — Kalki, the tenth avatāra expected at the close of Kali Yuga. Christ’s return would map onto an existing slot in a live eschatological expectation rather than being read as sui generis. | Rejected |
| आगमनम् (āgamanam), “coming” | Plain, unmarked | Too thin; does not convey personal agency, visibility, or that this is a return (a second coming of one who has already come once) | Rejected as primary; retained as a secondary descriptive word within the compound |
| प्रभोः पुनरागमनम् (prabhoḥ punarāgamanam), “the Lord’s coming-again” | Built from प्रभुः (already fixed for “Lord”) + पुनर्-आगमन (“coming again”); transparently signals recurrence of the same subject, not a new descent-event or new avatāra instance | Requires a mandatory translator note at first occurrence distinguishing “the same Christ returning” from “a new avatāra appearing,” since पुनर्- could otherwise be heard as echoing avatāra’s own repeatability | Adopted (fixed in glossary) |
Recommended strategy: Use प्रभोः पुनरागमनम् exclusively. Mandatory theologian note at every occurrence: (1) this names the same, unique, already-incarnate eternal Son reappearing, not a new avatāra instance; (2) it occurs once within linear history’s consummation, not as one descent within a cyclical yuga-restoration pattern.
1.2 Resurrection of Believers
| Candidate | Attraction | Weakness | Verdict |
|---|---|---|---|
| पुनर्जन्म (punarjanma) | Common word for “coming back after death” | Forbidden per baseline. Names the precise technical mechanism of transmigration in Sāṃkhya-Yoga (karmāśaya/vāsanā) and Vedānta (liṅga-śarīra migration) — repeated re-embodiment into a new life, not the same body raised once | Rejected |
| पुनरुत्थानम् (punarutthānam) | Already fixed in baseline for Christ’s own resurrection; morphologically neutral (“rising again”) | Must be extended here to believers’ future bodily resurrection (4:16), and its sequencing language (“the dead in Christ will rise first”) must be grammatically preserved — a subtlety absent from the Romans baseline’s simpler christological usage | Adopted, extended sense |
| महानिद्रा-प्राप्तः (mahānidrā-prāptaḥ) for the “sleep” euphemism | Attested epic-Sanskrit death-euphemism; avoids सुषुप्ति’s Advaita loading | Still requires a note that this is a euphemism for bodily death awaiting bodily reawakening, not a description of a consciousness-state | Adopted with mandatory note |
Recommended strategy: पुनरुत्थानम् throughout for both Christ’s and believers’ resurrection, with explicit sequencing preserved in translation (नियमेन प्रथमम् / “in fixed order, first”). Bare निद्रा/शयन forbidden for “asleep in Christ” — use महानिद्रा-प्राप्तः, with a footnote distinguishing it from सुषुप्ति (Māṇḍūkya Upaniṣad’s third consciousness-state) at first occurrence per document.
1.3 Sanctification
| Candidate | Attraction | Weakness | Verdict |
|---|---|---|---|
| पवित्रीकरणम् (pavitrīkaraṇam) | Already fixed in baseline; morphologically transparent (“making holy”) | None beyond the general पवित्र-family caution (ritual-instrumental root sense of pavitra as a soma-strainer) already flagged in baseline | Adopted, reused exactly |
| शुद्धिः (śuddhiḥ) | Common purity vocabulary | Names Vedic/dharmaśāstra ritual purification for specific impurity-events (birth, death, contact) — resolved procedurally, not by the Spirit’s ongoing moral work | Rejected (per baseline) |
| आत्मा (ātmā, bare) for the anthropological “spirit” of 5:23 | Obvious literal cognate for πνεῦμα | Critical collision. आत्मा is reserved exclusively for पवित्र आत्मा; reusing it for the human spirit-component in the very same sanctification passage would relocate the Advaita ātman-Brahman identity risk from theology proper into anthropology, exactly where 5:23’s trichotomy (spirit/soul/body) most needs precision | Rejected — see 1.3a below |
| चेतना (cetanā) | Names awareness/consciousness without asserting metaphysical identity with Brahman | Still intersects Sāṅkhya puruṣa-prakṛti dualism and Vedāntic pañcakośa/tri-śarīra schemes | Adopted, with mandatory dual-review note |
| जीवः (jīvaḥ) for ψυχή/“soul” | Ordinary word for the living individual | Live technical term in Vedānta (jīva under māyā, contrasted with Paramātmā) and Jainism (jīva/ajīva) | Adopted with note distinguishing “individual locus of mind/emotion/will” from the metaphysical jīva-under-ignorance category |
1.3a — The 5:23 trichotomy is this letter’s single hardest gap. Romans never requires distinguishing “spirit,” “soul,” and “body” as three co-named terms in one verse; 1 Thessalonians 5:23 does. This forces three simultaneous decisions in one clause, each landing on a different major school (Advaita’s ātman, Vedānta’s jīva, and the comparatively safe शरीरम्), where Romans only ever had to solve one of these problems at a time.
Recommended strategy: शरीरम् (body, unproblematic) / जीवः (soul, footnoted) / चेतना (spirit, footnoted, explicitly not पवित्र आत्मा) — never आत्मा for the third term.
1.4 Hope in Grief
| Candidate | Attraction | Weakness | Verdict |
|---|---|---|---|
| आशा (āśā) for “hope” | Ordinary word for hope/expectation | Shades toward desire/craving — a category systematically marked for renunciation (vairāgya) and structurally parallel to Buddhist tṛṣṇā, the reverse moral valence from Paul’s commended, confident hope | Rejected |
| प्रत्याशा (pratyāśā) | Retains “confident expectation” sense with less craving-connotation | Still requires a note anchoring it as certainty tied to a promised historical event (resurrection, return), not open-ended aspiration | Adopted |
| शोकः (śokaḥ) for “grief” | The plain, standard word; no synonym meaningfully escapes it | Direct doctrinal collision, not merely risk. This is precisely the śoka Kṛṣṇa addresses and dissolves in Bhagavad Gītā 2:11–30 by denying death’s ultimate reality through the eternal, transmigrating ātman (“na tvaṃ śocitum arhasi,” 2:11; “nainaṃ chindanti śastrāṇi,” 2:23). Paul’s move is the mirror opposite: he does not deny death’s reality, he answers real grief with a future bodily event | Adopted, flagged as the doctrinal center of this passage — no alternative rendering solves this; the fix must be an explanatory note contrasting the structure of the consolation, not a different word for grief |
| निर्वाणम्-adjacent vocabulary (“extinguishing” sorrow) | — | Forbidden outright; reactivates the baseline’s permanently forbidden salvation-term root | Rejected |
Recommended strategy: शोकः + प्रत्याशा as the fixed pair, always co-occurring per 4:13’s own structure (“so that you may not grieve [शोकं कुर्यात] as others do who have no hope [प्रत्याशा येषां नास्ति]”). The mandatory note must state the contrast in kind: Gītā answers grief by denying death is ultimately real (the eternal ātman is never actually slain); Paul answers grief by affirming death is real and promising a future reversal of it (bodily resurrection). Translators must not let प्रत्याशा alone carry this weight — the note is doctrinally load-bearing, not decorative.
1.5 The Day of the Lord
| Candidate | Attraction | Weakness | Verdict |
|---|---|---|---|
| कल्पान्तः / प्रलयः (kalpāntaḥ / pralayaḥ) | Existing, well-developed Sanskrit vocabulary for cosmic dissolution — tempting because it is already available and dignified | Names one dissolution within an endlessly repeating kalpa-cycle (each followed by fresh sṛṣṭi); using it would silently import cyclical cosmology into a linear, unrepeated event | Rejected |
| युगान्तः (yugāntaḥ), “end of an age” | Familiar eschatological register (end of Kali Yuga, awaiting Kalki) | Same cyclical problem as above, compounded by direct adjacency to Kalki-avatāra expectation already flagged for the Return of Christ | Rejected |
| प्रभुदिनम् (prabhudinam) | Transparent compound built directly on प्रभुः; asserts a specific day belonging to a specific Lord, not a phase of an impersonal cosmic cycle | Being a new coinage, it carries no pre-existing cosmological connotation to correct — which is exactly its virtue, but it also means the linear, final, unrepeated character must be taught explicitly since the word alone will not resist a cyclical reading if left unglossed | Adopted |
Recommended strategy: प्रभुदिनम् exclusively; mandatory theologian note at every occurrence distinguishing it from pralaya/kalpa cyclicality, paralleling the Romans baseline’s caution about linear vs. cyclical time under “Fulfillment of Prophecy.” The sons-of-light/sons-of-darkness language (5:5) must likewise be flagged against the sattva/tamas guṇa framework (Gītā 14, 17): Paul’s categories are relational and changeable through conversion; guṇas are (in most classical readings) a fixed constitutional admixture of prakṛti.
Part 2: Missing Vocabulary vs. Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods
Sanskrit’s problem for this curriculum is bimodal: some concepts have no ready word at all (missing vocabulary, requiring coinage or descriptive compounding), while others sit in semantic neighborhoods so crowded with pre-existing technical meaning that every available word must be actively fenced off from its classical sense.
2.1 Missing Vocabulary (requires coinage/compounding — no live danger of collision, but no shortcut either)
| Concept | Gap | Resolution |
|---|---|---|
| Rapture / sudden bodily seizure of the living (4:17) | No Sanskrit term names a sudden, passive, corporate, bodily removal; every existing ascent-vocabulary (devayāna, arcirādi-mārga) names a gradual, self-attained, individual, subtle-body journey | Coined verbal compound आकृष्टाः भविष्यामः (“we shall be seized/drawn up”), built on √kṣip/kṛṣ passive-force vocabulary rather than any mārga-vocabulary, with mandatory contrast note |
| Parousia’s technical “formal escort of an arriving dignitary” sense (4:17’s ἀπάντησις) | No Sanskrit ceremonial-reception term is in general theological use for this Hellenistic diplomatic protocol | Descriptive compound सम्मुखगमनम् (“going to meet face-to-face”), glossed with an explanatory note rather than relying on the compound alone |
| Archangel as a rank of created messenger (4:16) | No existing term names a messenger-hierarchy without invoking either देव (pantheon member) or a Purāṇic gaṇa-classification | प्रधानदूतः, built on दूत (“messenger,” already resonant with प्रेषितः’s √preṣ root), explicitly kept out of the देव category |
| The trumpet-signal specifically as an eschatological summons-instrument, distinct from a named deity’s personal iconographic attribute (4:16) | तूर्यम् exists but is not independently a doctrinal category; the real gap is negative — avoiding शङ्खः’s Kṛṣṇa/Viṣṇu association | तूर्यम् adopted precisely for its doctrinal emptiness — a virtue here |
| A neutral, non-hierarchical term for lateral congregational admonition (5:14) | उपदेश is available but denotes guru→disciple instruction; no ready Sanskrit term names peer-to-peer correction within a spiritually equal community | उपदेशं कुरुत retained but with mandatory reframing note; no better single word exists, so the note carries the weight |
2.2 Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods (require active fencing — the opposite problem)
| Concept | Crowding | Fencing required |
|---|---|---|
| शोकः / “grief” | Directly occupied territory of Bhagavad Gītā 2, the most famous grief-consolation passage in the entire classical corpus | Every occurrence needs the contrast-note described in 1.4, not merely a definition |
| आत्मा / “spirit” (anthropological, 5:23) | The single most theorized word in the entire classical corpus (mahāvākyas, all six darśanas engage it) | Absolute prohibition on bare आत्मा outside the fixed पवित्र आत्मा compound; चेतना substituted, itself requiring its own disambiguating note |
| निद्रा / शयन / “sleep” (death euphemism, 4:13–15) | सुषुप्ति (Māṇḍūकya Upaniṣad’s third state of consciousness) sits immediately adjacent to any bare sleep-word used near death-and-consciousness themes | महानिद्रा-प्राप्तः substituted; note required distinguishing bodily-death euphemism from a consciousness-state |
| आनन्दः / “joy” (1:6, 2:19–20, 3:9) | Names Brahman/Ātman’s own essential nature (sat-cit-ānanda, Taittirīya Upaniṣad) | हर्षः substituted; lower urgency than the Critical items above, but still requires consistency across all three joy-passages in this letter |
| क्रोधः / “wrath of God” (1:10, 5:9) | Classed among the ṣaḍ-ripu (six enemies of the self) and named a gate to hell in Gītā 16:21 — an ethical defect to be conquered | Requires explicit note: God’s क्रोध is personal, holy, judicial response, not an unruly passion requiring self-mastery |
| कामः / “lust” (4:5) | Bare काम is a sanctioned puruṣārtha (legitimate life-goal), not inherently sinful | Qualifying compound (विषयतृष्णा / अनियन्त्रितः कामः) mandatory; bare काम forbidden as primary rendering |
| प्रकाशः/अन्धकारः “light/darkness” as moral categories (5:5) | Adjacent to the sattva/tamas guṇa-classification (Gītā 14, 17) | Note required: Paul’s categories are relational/changeable, not fixed constitutional guṇa-type |
| व्यभिचारः / “sexual immorality” (4:3) | Dharmaśāstra literature pairs specific sexual offenses with specific prāyaścitta (ritual penance) | Note required: resolved by Spirit-wrought sanctification, not prescribed ritual penance, paralleling baseline’s caution on पापम् |
| मूर्तिः / “idols” (1:9) | The reverential technical term for a consecrated image in mainstream devotional Hindu practice, not a neutral or pejorative word in the destination culture | Mandatory theologian-reviewed framing note at every occurrence: Paul’s specific point is “lifeless images with no reality behind them” versus the “living and true God,” not a blanket polemic against image-mediated devotion as such |
| निर्वापणम् / निरोधः as candidates for “quench” (5:19) | निर्वापण shares root family with the permanently forbidden निर्वाणम्; निरोधः is Patañjali’s own definition of yoga itself (Yoga Sūtra 1:2) | Both excluded; √śam-based मा शमयत adopted instead, aligning with the already-approved शान्तिः root |
General principle for this letter: where Romans’ crowding problems clustered mainly around soteriology and Christology (मोक्ष/मुक्ति, अवतार, ईश्वर), 1 Thessalonians’ crowding clusters around psychology and eschatology — grief, sleep, spirit/soul, joy, wrath, light/darkness, and cyclical time. This is a direct consequence of the assigned doctrine set (Hope in Grief, Resurrection, Return, Day of the Lord) landing on exactly the terrain classical Sanskrit philosophy has most thoroughly systematized.
Part 3: Transliteration vs. Paraphrase Decisions
| Decision Type | Terms | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| Transliterate (proper names/titles) | यीशुः, ख्रीष्टः, तीमथियः, सिलुवानः, शैतान्, आमीन्, हल्लेलूया | Established Serampore-tradition precedent (baseline + 12_ai_translation_requirements.md). शैतान् specifically transliterated rather than mapped to असुरः/राक्षसः, which would import unrelated Purāṇic mythological narrative apparatus onto a figure Paul intends as a specific, singular spiritual adversary — the same logic already applied to मसीहः in the baseline. |
| Transliterate (theologically load-bearing but no safe native equivalent exists) | None newly required beyond the baseline’s existing transliterated set; this letter does not introduce a term requiring transliteration purely for lack of any translatable option (unlike, say, “Abba” in Romans) | |
| Paraphrase/compound (native vocabulary insufficient as single words) | प्रभोः पुनरागमनम् (Return), आकृष्टाः भविष्यामः (rapture), प्रभुदिनम् (Day of the Lord), पुत्रत्वेन स्वीकरणम्-style descriptive phrasing patterns extended to महानिद्रा-प्राप्तः (sleep-euphemism), सम्मुखगमनम् (meeting) | Each names a compound event (recurrence, sudden seizure, a specific day, a euphemistic state) that no single classical noun captures without either coining a neologism from whole cloth or reactivating a forbidden term; multi-word compounds allow the doctrinal content to be built in transparently rather than borrowed from an existing charged word |
| Reuse baseline term as-is (already solved) | सुसमाचारः, अनुग्रहः, विश्वासः, त्राणम्, पुनरुत्थानम्, प्रभुः, पवित्र आत्मा, सर्वेश्वरः, पवित्रम्, पवित्रीकरणम्, पवित्राः जनाः, महिमा, परमेश्वरस्य सामर्थ्यम् | No re-derivation permitted per glossary enforcement rules; these decisions were already made under greater scrutiny in the Romans baseline and must carry over unchanged |
| New single-word coinage rejected in favor of transliteration | ख्रीष्टः (rather than deriving a Sanskrit calque of “Anointed One” from अभिषिक्तः) | अभिषिक्तः is grammatically available and would be transparent, but transliteration preserves the proper-name function ख्रीष्टः has already acquired as part of “Jesus Christ” as a compound name, consistent with how यीशुः itself is handled; also avoids abhiṣikta’s own ritual-consecration resonance (royal/priestly anointing rites) intruding where “Christ” functions primarily as a name rather than a title in most of this letter’s occurrences |
Governing rule applied throughout: transliterate proper names and names-functioning-as-titles; paraphrase/compound theological events and states that classical Sanskrit has no single noun for; reuse-exactly wherever the baseline has already solved the problem. Never coin a new single-word Sanskrit noun for a Critical-tier concept when a multi-word compound can build the needed distinction in transparently — single new nouns invite readers to reach for the nearest existing technical synonym, which compounds resist better.
Part 4: Ranked List of Highest-Risk Ambiguities in This Letter
Ranked by (a) doctrinal centrality to the assigned doctrine set, (b) specificity and prominence of the competing classical-text collision, and (c) exposure — how often and how load-bearingly the term recurs across chapters 1–5.
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शोकः / grief consolation-structure vs. Bhagavad Gītā 2:11–30 (4:13) — Ranked highest because this is not merely a word-choice risk but a structural collision: two entirely different logics of consolation (denial of death’s reality via eternal ātman, vs. affirmation of death’s reality answered by future resurrection) using the very same word for the emotion being addressed. No lexical substitution can fix this; only a mandatory explanatory note can. This is the doctrinal center of the letter’s core passage.
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आत्मा exclusion for the anthropological “spirit” of 5:23 — Ranked second because it is the sharpest possible extension of the single highest-stakes term identified in the entire Romans baseline (Holy Spirit/ātman-Brahman) into a new context (human trichotomy) the baseline never had to solve. Getting this wrong in even one occurrence reopens the gravest risk in the whole Language Package.
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प्रभोः पुनरागमनम् vs. Kalki-avatāra expectation (3:13; 4:15–17; 5:23) — Ranked third because, unlike the baseline’s Incarnation-avatāra caution (which warns against a past, closed list), this risk involves a live, future-oriented, still-awaited classical expectation actively held by target readers, making false-parallel drift especially easy across this letter’s three separate return-references.
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आकृष्टाः भविष्यामः vs. devayāna/arcirādi-mārga ascent (4:17) — Ranked fourth: the rapture’s sudden/passive/corporate/bodily character is the structural photographic negative of the graded/self-attained/individual/subtle-body ascent taught across Chāndogya, Bṛhadāraṇyaka, and Gītā 8:24–26. High risk because “going up after death” is exactly the kind of surface-plausible bridge a reader would draw without an explicit note.
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प्रभुदिनम् vs. pralaya/kalpa cyclicality (5:2) — Ranked fifth: linear-vs-cyclical time already appears in the Romans baseline (fulfillment of prophecy), but here it governs the letter’s second major doctrine (Day of the Lord) rather than a supporting point, raising its weight within this specific curriculum.
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महानिद्रा-प्राप्तः vs. सुषुप्ति (4:13–15) — Ranked sixth: real but narrower risk than items 1–5, since सुषुप्ति describes a state of the living, not a death-euphemism, making the collision less immediately intuitive to a reader than items above, though still requiring a standing note.
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मूर्तिः / idols vs. mūrti-pūjā devotional practice (1:9) — Ranked seventh: high pastoral sensitivity (risk of the passage being heard as a blanket attack on image-veneration) but narrower doctrinal centrality to this letter’s five assigned doctrines than items 1–6, which bear directly on Hope in Grief, Resurrection, Return, and Day of the Lord.
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क्रोधः / wrath vs. ṣaḍ-ripu ethical-defect classification (1:10; 5:9) — Ranked eighth: real collision, but wrath is not itself one of the five assigned doctrines (it supports Day of the Lord and Salvation) and the fix is a single consistent note rather than a structural translation problem.
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प्रकाशस्य/अन्धकारस्य पुत्राः vs. sattva/tamas guṇa framework (5:5) — Ranked ninth: meaningful but appears only once, in a single verse, rather than recurring across the letter.
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विषयतृष्णा / कामः-qualification vs. kāma-as-puruṣārtha (4:5) — Ranked tenth: manageable through a qualifying compound already adopted; lowest risk among the Critical/High tier because bare काम’s positive classical status is well known and the corrective compound is unambiguous once applied consistently.
Summary Table: This Letter’s Distinctive Gap Profile vs. the Romans Baseline
| Feature | Romans Baseline | 1 Thessalonians (this letter) |
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| Center of gravity for collisions | Soteriology / Christology (mokṣa, avatāra, Īśvara-subordination) | Psychology of death and eschatological time (grief, sleep, spirit/soul, cyclical vs. linear time) |
| Sharpest single new risk | Holy Spirit / ātman-Brahman identity (theology proper) | Same risk re-triggered in anthropology (5:23’s human “spirit”), plus a live future-avatāra (Kalki) parallel absent from Romans’ closed-list avatāra caution |
| New coinage burden | Moderate (several compounds already established) | Higher — rapture, meeting, sleep-euphemism, and Day of the Lord all require fresh multi-word compounds with no Romans precedent to reuse |
| Ratio of Critical-tier new terms | Lower proportion | Markedly higher proportion (8 of the newly introduced terms), directly reflecting how squarely this doctrine set lands on Sanskrit’s most heavily theorized philosophical terrain |
This document must be read together with 08_core_glossary.md (term-level detail) and assets/bible_term_registry.json (registry entries) before any Phase 2 segment translation begins, per the Pre-flight Checklist in 12_ai_translation_requirements.md.