Linguistic Gap Analysis
Linguistic Gap Analysis — 2 Thessalonians (Sanskrit)
TRI Phase 1, Step 8
0. Purpose and Method
This document extends the baseline Romans translation_memory.json/bible_term_registry.json/doctrine_risk_registry.json methodology to the five load-bearing doctrines of 2 Thessalonians: The Day of the Lord, The Man of Lawlessness, Perseverance under Persecution, God’s Righteous Judgment, Standing Firm in the Traditions. It draws directly on 08_core_glossary.md and the curriculum’s bible_term_registry.json (already produced) and does not re-derive individual term choices; instead it analyzes the structural shape of the gap each doctrine faces in classical Sanskrit’s philosophical vocabulary, so that Phase 2 translators and reviewers understand why a given rendering was chosen, where the semantic neighborhood is dangerously “crowded” with rival technical systems, where Sanskrit is instead surprisingly empty of any ready term, and which risks are highest-priority for human theological review.
As the baseline’s categorical note establishes: in Sanskrit, unlike vernacular Language Packages, nearly every candidate term is not a loose cultural-background word but an already-theorized technical term inside a developed darśana (Vedānta, Nyāya, Mīmāṃsā, Yoga, Sāṃkhya, or Purāṇic/bhakti theology). This curriculum’s core passage (2:1-12) intensifies that condition because it is Paul’s single most extended, self-consciously linear-historical, one-time-event argument in the New Testament — placed against the two classical systems most structurally organized around cyclical time and repeatable divine intervention (Purāṇic kalpa-cosmology and Bhagavad Gītā avatāra theology). This is the defining linguistic problem of the whole letter.
Part A — Doctrine Vocabulary Matrix
A.1 The Day of the Lord
| Element | Analysis |
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| Available Sanskrit terms | प्रलयः (pralayaḥ, cosmic dissolution at kalpa’s end); युगान्तः (yugāntaḥ, end of a yuga); अन्तकालः (antakālaḥ, “time of the end,” comparatively neutral); कल्पान्तः (kalpāntaḥ, end of a kalpa) |
| Weakness of each | All four native candidates presuppose cyclical time: pralaya is periodically repeated (each kalpa ends in one), yugānta recurs every fourth-yuga turn, kalpānta is definitionally one of an unbounded series. None of Sanskrit’s ready-made “world-ending” vocabulary is capable of denoting a single, unrepeated, linear-historical terminus. |
| Recommended strategy | Do not use any of the four native candidates as the primary term. Use the periphrastic compound प्रभोः दिनम् (prabhoḥ dinam, “the Day of the Lord”), built transparently from baseline’s fixed प्रभुः, which carries no cosmological baggage of its own because “day” (दिनम्) is doctrinally inert vocabulary. Mandatory translator note at first occurrence in every document explicitly denying the pralaya/yugānta reading. |
| Residual risk | Even with प्रभोः दिनम् adopted, expository material (sermons, footnotes) that describes the Day of the Lord using adjectives like “final,” “cosmic,” “world-ending” risks smuggling in pralaya-shaped assumptions through descriptive language even where the fixed term itself is protected. Reviewers must check surrounding description, not just the fixed noun phrase. |
A.2 The Man of Lawlessness
| Element | Analysis |
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| Available Sanskrit terms | No candidate exists that is not already dharma-rooted, because “lawlessness” (ἀνομία) is structurally the direct negation of नियम/धर्म in any Sanskrit rendering. Candidates: अधर्मपुरुषः (adharmapuruṣaḥ), अधर्मी (adharmī), अराजकपुरुषः (arājakapuruṣaḥ, “anarchic/lordless man,” attested political-theory vocabulary for a kingless, lawless state) |
| Weakness | This is the single most severe unavoidable collision in the curriculum: Bhagavad Gītā 4.7 gives a citable proof-text in which adharma’s rise (adharmasya ca abhyutthānam) is the explicit, named trigger-condition for Kṛṣṇa’s avatāra (“yadā yadā hi dharmasya glānir bhavati… tadātmānaṃ sṛjāmyaham”). A Gītā-literate reader encountering “the adharma-man arises, and then the Lord destroys him” will recognize the shape of 4.7-8’s promise and may reflexively expect a fresh avatāra-response to adharma’s rise — precisely inverting Paul’s point, which is that the same, already-incarnate (देहधारणम्), already-resurrected, already-ascended Lord returns once to destroy him, not that adharma summons a new descent. |
| Recommended strategy | Retain अधर्मपुरुषः/अधर्मी (the least-alternative-available root is simply unavoidable), but treat this as the curriculum’s single highest-mandatory-annotation term: every occurrence (2:3, 8-9) requires an explicit, textually-anchored contrast note citing Gītā 4.7-8 by name, not a generic “different from Hindu belief” gloss (per 12_ai_translation_requirements.md Rule 4, extended here from Incarnation to this doctrine by direct analogy). |
| Residual risk | अराजकपुरुषः was considered as an escape from the dharma-root entirely (drawing on arājaka, “kingless/anarchic,” a real classical political category from Arthaśāstra literature on states without a king) but was set aside because it shifts the emphasis from moral/spiritual rebellion to political disorder, weakening the text’s actual claim. Documented here as a rejected alternative for the record, not adopted. |
A.3 Perseverance under Persecution
| Element | Analysis |
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| Available Sanskrit terms | सहिष्णुता (sahiṣṇutā, ordinary endurance/tolerance); तितिक्षा (titikṣā, forbearance); क्लेशसहनम् (kleśasahanam, “endurance of kleśa”) |
| Weakness | तितिक्षा is one of the six explicitly enumerated qualifications (śama, dama, uparati, titikṣā, śraddhā, samādhāna — the śama-damādi-ṣaḍ-sampat) for a mokṣa-seeking aspirant in Advaita Vedānta, catalogued systematically in the Vivekacūḍāmaṇi. It names a self-cultivated inner virtue oriented toward liberation, not endurance of externally inflicted persecution for Christ’s sake. Using it would relocate Paul’s pastoral encouragement into a sādhana (spiritual-discipline) framework aimed at Self-realization. Likewise, “affliction” itself (θλῖψις) has a false-friend collision: क्लेशः is Patañjali’s precise technical term (Yoga Sūtra 2.3) for the five root causes of bondage (avidyā, asmitā, rāga, dveṣa, abhiniveśa) — an internal metaphysical bondage-condition, not persecution inflicted by outsiders. |
| Recommended strategy | सहिष्णुता for perseverance/endurance, पीडा for affliction, उत्पीडनम् for persecution (all already fixed in the term registry) — deliberately chosen as the most ordinary, least classically-systematized members of this semantic field, explicitly avoiding तितिक्षा and क्लेशः. |
| Residual risk | सहिष्णुता’s very ordinariness is a double-edged asset: it carries almost no technical baggage, but for that same reason it also carries almost no built-in theological content, and could be read as merely “patience” or “tolerance” in a religiously flat sense unless the passage’s Christ-centered motivation (“for the sake of which you are also suffering,” 1:5) is kept explicit in surrounding text. |
A.4 God’s Righteous Judgment
| Element | Analysis |
|---|---|
| Available Sanskrit terms | कर्मफलम् (karmaphalam, the fruit of karma); दण्डः (daṇḍaḥ, punishment/rod, from daṇḍanīti); न्यायः (nyāyaḥ, “justice,” but also the proper name of the Nyāya darśana); धार्मिकः निर्णयः (dhārmikaḥ nirṇayaḥ, “righteous verdict,” compounding two baseline Critical-risk roots) |
| Weakness | कर्मफलम् is the single most dangerous false-friend available for “judgment/retribution” language in this entire curriculum: it names an impersonal, automatic, self-executing causal law operating without a personal judge — the precise opposite of Paul’s picture of a personal God who deliberately, reasoningly renders a verdict and then personally executes retributive justice (1:6-9). न्यायः is separately unusable as a plain noun (already forbidden in baseline) because it is the proper name of an entire orthodox darśana of logic and epistemology. |
| Recommended strategy | Use the already-fixed compound परमेश्वरस्य धार्मिकः निर्णयः for the doctrine as a whole, and दण्डः (drawn deliberately from Arthaśāstra royal-punishment theory, daṇḍanīti) for the specific act of retribution/vengeance (ἐκδίκησις, 1:8) — daṇḍa’s royal-judicial resonance is a genuine asset here, evoking a personal sovereign’s deliberate legal act rather than automatic recompense. Never प्रतिफलम् (“fruit-in-return”) or कर्मफलम् for either term. |
| Residual risk | निर्णयः inherits the Mīmāṃsā/Nyāya pūrvapakṣa-uttarapakṣa-siddhānta disputation procedure baseline already uses positively for “justification” — an asset for forensic weight, but translators must not let this compound drift into implying God’s judgment is the outcome of an argued debate rather than a sovereign, already-settled verdict grounded in his own righteous character. |
A.5 Standing Firm in the Traditions
| Element | Analysis |
|---|---|
| Available Sanskrit terms | परम्परा (paramparā, lineage-transmission); सम्प्रदायः (sampradāyaḥ, a named historical devotional lineage, e.g. the four Vaiṣṇava sampradāyas); उपदेशाः (upadeśāḥ, “teachings/instructions,” comparatively institution-neutral) |
| Weakness | This is the second most severe unavoidable collision in the curriculum, alongside 4.7-8. Both परम्परा and सम्प्रदायः name a living, ongoing, perpetually-generative transmission mechanism authorized by successive gurus within a lineage — the guru-śiṣya-paramparā structure baseline already flags under “apostle.” Paul’s παράδοσις (paradosis) in 2 Thessalonians 2:15 and 3:6 is the opposite structure: a closed, complete, already-fully-delivered body of teaching from a specific, historically commissioned apostolic office (Paul’s own, cf. 3:17’s handwritten signature as authentication), not an open channel capable of producing new authoritative content generation after generation. |
| Recommended strategy | उपदेशाः (“teachings,” comparatively institution-neutral) is adopted, but — critically — it must never appear unanchored. Every occurrence requires an explicit possessive/agentive anchor to apostolic authority (“the teachings we handed down,” “delivered by the apostle”) so that the term functions as a closed noun-phrase referring to a specific one-time deposit, not a free-floating word that a reader could reattach to an ongoing paramparā. |
| Residual risk | Because उपदेशाः alone (without the anchor) is doctrinally under-determined, this term is at the highest risk of silent doctrinal drift across a long multi-chapter curriculum if later documents abbreviate the anchoring phrase for stylistic economy. This should be flagged as a consistency-audit item, not just a first-occurrence footnote item — recommend checking every occurrence in Phase 2, not only the first. |
Part B — Missing Vocabulary vs. Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods
Sanskrit’s problem in this curriculum is bimodal: some doctrines suffer from genuine vocabulary absence (no ready term exists at all, so any choice is a fresh coinage/compound with low risk of collision but also low pre-existing resonance), while others suffer from the opposite: a crowded neighborhood where too many well-developed rival technical terms compete for the same conceptual space, each importing its own doctrinal apparatus. Both conditions require different translator discipline.
B.1 Genuinely Missing Vocabulary (Low Collision Risk, but No Ready Resonance)
| Concept | Status | Why missing | Strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| Davidic-style linear covenant history culminating in a single future Day | Missing | No classical Sanskrit source imagines history as a single unrepeated line moving toward one terminal event; even itihāsa (historical narrative, e.g. Mahābhārata) is set within the cyclical yuga-frame | Periphrastic compounds only (प्रभोः दिनम्); accept that the concept must be taught, not evoked, since no existing word carries linear-terminus connotations natively |
| A “restrainer” that is an impersonal-then-personal providential historical mechanism (2:6-7) | Missing | Sanskrit’s closest structural candidates (नियन्त्रणम्, निरोधः) are both already claimed by other systems (see B.2) | Coin निवारकम्/निवारकः from the ordinary root √vṛ (“to hinder/cover”), deliberately avoiding both निग्रह (also used in bhakti restraint contexts) and निरोध (Yoga Sūtra 1.2) |
| A forged/counterfeit apostolic letter functioning as a false authority-claim (2:2) | Missing | Classical Sanskrit literature has no close analogue institution to a circulated pseudonymous scriptural-status letter (its closest parallel, contested śāstra authorship debates in Mīmāṃsā, concerns interpretation of accepted texts, not forged new ones) | Handle descriptively (कूट-prefixed forgery vocabulary, already used for “false signs,” extended by analogy) rather than seeking a single noun |
B.2 Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods (High Collision Risk — Require Active Fencing)
These are neighborhoods where Sanskrit has too much, not too little, ready vocabulary, and every neighboring term must be explicitly and permanently fenced off in the translation memory, not merely avoided once.
Neighborhood 1: Cyclical world-ending / cosmic-dissolution vocabulary Members: प्रलयः, युगान्तः, कल्पान्तः, महाप्रलयः. Fence: none of these may ever render “Day of the Lord,” “end of the age,” or any 2 Thessalonians 1-2 eschatological reference. All must be treated as permanently forbidden substitutions equivalent in force to baseline’s मोक्षः/मुक्तिः/निर्वाणम् prohibition for “salvation.”
Neighborhood 2: Avatāra / periodic divine descent vocabulary Members: अवतारः, आविर्भावः, अवतरणम्. Fence: this neighborhood governs three distinct 2 Thessalonians terms simultaneously — parousia (आगमनम्), epiphaneia (प्रकटीभावः), and the very existence of the Man of Lawlessness doctrine (which risks activating Gītā 4.7’s trigger-logic even without any Sanskrit avatāra-word being used). This is the only neighborhood in the curriculum requiring three separate, coordinated fences rather than one.
Neighborhood 3: Yogic internal-discipline vocabulary (Patañjali’s technical apparatus) Members: निरोधः (citta-vṛtti-nirodha, YS 1.2), क्लेशः (YS 2.3), विपर्ययः/मिथ्या-ज्ञानम् (YS 1.8), तितिक्षा (Vivekacūḍāmaṇi’s ṣaḍ-sampat). Fence: this neighborhood is unusually dangerous because its members are scattered across four different doctrines in this curriculum (restrainer, affliction, working-of-delusion, perseverance) — a translator who is careful about one occurrence may unconsciously reach for a same-neighborhood synonym in a different doctrine’s passage. Recommend a single consolidated “Patañjali exclusion list” checked against every segment, not four separate spot-checks.
Neighborhood 4: Automatic-causation vocabulary (karma-phala family) Members: कर्मफलम्, प्रतिफलम्, फलम् (bare), दैवम्, भाग्यम्. Fence: governs both “God’s Righteous Judgment” (vengeance, judgment) and, by extension, “Providence” (already fenced in baseline for Romans 8:28, but re-activated here at 2:6-7’s “in its own time”). Every instance of divine action having a consequence in this letter must be phrased to keep a personal, willing Agent grammatically explicit (subject + verb of judging/repaying), never a bare noun that could stand alone as an impersonal causal residue.
Neighborhood 5: Guru-lineage transmission vocabulary Members: परम्परा, सम्प्रदायः, गुरु-शिष्य-परम्परा, दीक्षा (initiation). Fence: governs “traditions” (paradosis). Note that दीक्षा (initiation into a lineage) was not previously flagged in the glossary but should be added to the forbidden-neighbor list now: nothing in 2 Thessalonians describes an initiation event, but a translator reaching for vocabulary near “receiving the tradition” could drift toward दीक्षा-adjacent phrasing (e.g., “received” as “was initiated into”) without intending to. Flag proactively.
Neighborhood 6: Rasa-theory devotional-emotion vocabulary (Gauḍīya Vaiṣṇava) Members: प्रेम, स्नेह, अनुराग, भाव, महाभाव, रति (Rūpa Gosvāmī’s rasa-hierarchy). Fence: governs “love” (2:10; 3:5) and, less directly, “hope” (2:16). प्रेम is retained as the least-worst option per baseline Serampore precedent, but this is the neighborhood where a single word choice does not solve the problem: प्रेम is itself inside this rasa-hierarchy as its second stage (rati → prema → sneha → māna → praṇaya → rāga → anurāga → bhāva → mahābhāva). No synonym escapes the hierarchy entirely; the fence here is not lexical substitution but mandatory redefinition at every occurrence, exactly as baseline requires for धार्मिकता.
B.3 Structural Observation
Note the asymmetry: doctrines that are theologically unique to the biblical narrative (a single future Day, a once-for-all apostolic deposit) tend to fall into Part B.1 (missing vocabulary, low collision, but also low native resonance, requiring more explanatory apparatus). Doctrines that overlap with a general religious category already present in classical India (world-renewal, an anti-dharma figure, judgment/retribution, disciplined endurance, transmitted teaching) fall into Part B.2 (crowded, high collision, requiring active, permanent fencing rather than one-time footnotes). Phase 2 review effort should be weighted toward B.2 accordingly.
Part C — Transliteration vs. Paraphrase Decision Log
Consistent with the baseline’s preference for transliteration only where (a) the referent is a proper name/unique historical particular, or (b) every available native term carries unacceptable doctrinal baggage and no safe compound can be built.
| Term | Decision | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| Satan (Σατανᾶς) | Transliterate: शैतानः | Both native candidates (असुरः — the Vedic-Purāṇic anti-god class in the deva-asura conflict; मारः — the Buddhist tempter-figure) name an already-populated character within a rival cosmology, not a unique personal adversary. Transliteration, as with यीशुः and मसीहः, sidesteps this entirely. |
| Messiah / Christ (title vs. proper name) | Split decision: मसीहः when functioning as doctrinal title (“the Messiah promised in Scripture”); ख्रीष्टः when functioning as part of the compound proper name “Jesus Christ” | Preserves the baseline’s own distinction; prevents the doctrinal weight of “Messiah” from being diluted into a bare name-particle, while keeping “Jesus Christ” as a single recognizable proper-name unit per Serampore convention. |
| Abba-style intimacy terms | N/A in this letter (no direct parallel occurrence) | Noted for completeness; 2 Thessalonians contains no Aramaic loanword requiring this treatment. |
| Day of the Lord | Paraphrase (periphrastic compound): प्रभोः दिनम् | No transliteration is possible (this is not a proper name); no single native noun exists (see A.1); building a transparent genitive phrase from already-fixed baseline प्रभुः is safest. |
| Man of Lawlessness / lawless one | Paraphrase (compound built on native root): अधर्मपुरुषः / अधर्मी | Transliterating “anomia” would produce an opaque neologism with zero interpretive traction for the intended scholarly/liturgical readership; a native compound, despite the Gītā 4.7 collision, is more intelligible and the collision is manageable through mandatory annotation rather than avoidable through transliteration. |
| Traditions (paradosis) | Paraphrase: उपदेशाः (never सम्प्रदायः/परम्परा) | Transliterating “paradosis” was considered and rejected: unlike Satan or Messiah, this is not a proper name or unique person, and an opaque transliteration would forfeit the chance to teach the concept using an intelligible (if still-anchored) native word. |
| Restrainer (to katechon) | Paraphrase (coined compound): निवारकम्/निवारकः | No proper name is present to transliterate; coinage from a plain root (√vṛ) is safer than reaching into either Yoga or bhakti restraint-vocabulary. |
| Sign of authenticity (sēmeion, 3:17) | Paraphrase: चिह्नम् | Ordinary, non-technical noun; no transliteration warranted. |
General decision rule for this curriculum: transliterate only proper names and titles tightly bound to a specific historical person/figure with no native equivalent (यीशुः, ख्रीष्टः, मसीहः, शैतानः, पौलः); paraphrase everything else, even at the cost of building doctrinally “loaded” compounds, because the intended scholarly/liturgical audience benefits more from an intelligible, correctly-annotated native compound than from an opaque transliteration that would require its own separate explanation regardless.
Part D — Ranked List of Highest-Risk Ambiguities in This Letter
Ranked by combined severity (doctrinal centrality × collision specificity × frequency in the core passage 2:1-12):
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The Man of Lawlessness / adharmapuruṣaḥ vs. Bhagavad Gītā 4.7-8’s avatāra-trigger logic. The single highest risk in the letter: a reader trained in Gītā theology could reflexively read “adharma rises → the Lord acts” as confirming, rather than contradicting, avatāra doctrine, precisely inverting Paul’s argument that Christ’s return is a unique, final, already-guaranteed event, not a responsive new descent triggered by adharma’s rise. Every occurrence in 2:3-12 requires the Gītā 4.7-8 citation explicitly, not by allusion.
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Parousia (आगमनम्) rendering both the true and counterfeit “coming” (2:1, 8-9) while resisting avatāra-descent assimilation. The deliberate Pauline mimicry (same Greek word for Christ’s coming and the lawless one’s coming) must be reproduced in Sanskrit, but this doubles the avatāra-collision surface: two occurrences of the same word in close proximity, both vulnerable to the same misreading, in the letter’s most theologically dense paragraph.
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Day of the Lord vs. pralaya/yugānta cyclical-time cosmology (2:1-2). Distinct from #1 and #2 in that the danger here is not a rival agent (an avatāra) but a rival shape of time itself (cyclical vs. linear). A reader could accept every other point in the passage and still silently reframe “the Day” as one more turn of an eternally recurring cosmic wheel — a subtler and arguably harder-to-detect error than the avatāra-collision, because it does not require any single mistranslated word, only an unexamined background assumption about time’s structure.
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Working of delusion / भ्रान्तिः (2:11) vs. the shared cross-school khyāti-vāda (error-theory) apparatus. Nyāya, Mīmāṃsā, and Advaita each have fully worked-out theories of erroneous cognition; Yoga Sūtra 1.8 explicitly defines viparyaya as mithyā-jñānam. Because no available Sanskrit term for “delusion/error” is fully free of this weight, this ranks high not because a clean solution exists and might be missed, but because no clean solution exists at all — the residual risk is structural, not merely a matter of translator diligence.
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Traditions / उपदेशाः (2:15; 3:6) losing its apostolic anchor across a long multi-document curriculum. Ranked lower than 1-4 because the initial choice (upadeśāḥ over sampradāya/paramparā) is sound and low-collision in itself; the risk is a downstream consistency failure — later documents abbreviating the mandatory anchoring phrase and thereby silently re-opening the guru-lineage reading the initial choice was designed to close.
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God’s temple / मन्दिरम् (2:4) colliding with baseline’s own रुल for “church.” Ranked lower because the collision is internal to this Language Package rather than with an external classical system: baseline explicitly forbids मन्दिरम् for ekklēsia, and this passage is the sole place where मन्दिरम् is doctrinally correct (for the lawless one’s idolatrous self-enthronement). The risk is translator/reviewer confusion about which rule applies where, solvable by a clear cross-reference note rather than by any deeper doctrinal ambiguity.
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God (सर्वेश्वरः) appearing inside the lawless one’s false self-deification claim (2:4). Ranked lower still because this is a tightly bounded, single-occurrence exception already explicitly flagged in the term registry with mandatory framing language (“this is a lie being quoted”); the risk is narrow and already well-fenced, but included here because failure to apply the framing note would be a Critical-tier error (appearing to affirm, rather than quote-and-reject, a false claim to deity).
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Love / प्रेम (2:10; 3:5) vs. Gauḍīya Vaiṣṇava rasa-hierarchy. Ranked lowest among the Critical/High-tier ambiguities because, unlike ambiguities 1-3, this collision is general background theological vocabulary rather than something unique to this letter’s core argument; it requires the same standing redefinition discipline baseline already applies to other terms, with no additional 2 Thessalonians-specific complication.
Part E — Summary Recommendations for Phase 2
- Treat ambiguities #1-#3 above (Man of Lawlessness, parousia, Day of the Lord) as a single coordinated annotation package for the core passage (2:1-12), since they share the same underlying cyclical-time/avatāra rival-system root; do not annotate them as three unrelated footnotes.
- Add a standing “Patañjali exclusion list” (Neighborhood 3, Part B.2) to the pre-flight checklist alongside the existing forbidden-substitution list, since its members are scattered across four unrelated doctrines and are therefore easy to miss in a single spot-check.
- Flag “traditions” (उपदेशाः) for every-occurrence consistency audit, not just first-occurrence footnoting, given its downstream-drift risk identified in Part A.5 and ranked ambiguity #5.
- No new forbidden-substitution terms beyond those already logged in the curriculum’s
bible_term_registry.jsonare required at this stage; this analysis confirms rather than expands that registry’s existing fences, with the single addition of दीक्षा (initiation) as a proactively fenced near-neighbor of “traditions” (Part B.2, Neighborhood 5), which should be added totranslation_memory.json’s rejected-alternatives list for thetraditionsentry at the next version increment.