Linguistic Gap Analysis
Linguistic Gap Analysis: Philemon (English/Koine Greek → Konkani)
Purpose and Method
This document executes PRD Phase 1 Step 8 for the Philemon curriculum. It identifies where Konkani (Devanagari-script, Bible Society of India/Goa Official Language Act standard) has no ready-made vocabulary for a source concept (“missing vocabulary”), where it has too much competing vocabulary already carrying incompatible religious freight (“crowded semantic neighborhoods”), where transliteration is preferable to paraphrase, and ranks the letter’s highest-risk ambiguities for Phase 2 review routing. It extends, and never contradicts, the Romans baseline package and the Philemon 08_core_glossary.md / bible_term_registry.json already produced.
Philemon is short (25 verses) but doctrinally dense and rhetorically compressed — nearly every clause carries legal, financial, or household-status metaphor language layered with theological freight. This makes gap analysis unusually load-bearing for a one-chapter book: there is no “low-density” filler chapter to note as reviewed-with-no-new-terms. Every verse is analyzed below (see coverage table, §5).
1. Doctrine Vocabulary Matrix
For each of the five assigned curriculum doctrines: available Konkani terms, their weaknesses, and the recommended mitigation strategy.
1.1 Forgiveness and Reconciliation
| Available Konkani terms | Weaknesses | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|
| क्षमा (kṣamā) — ordinary “forgiveness” | Generic; does not carry the specific commercial/legal “charge-to-account” (imputation) sense central to 1:18. Using क्षमा alone would flatten Paul’s argument into simple pardon and erase the imputation echo. | Reserve क्षमा for general forgiveness contexts (none occur explicitly as a standalone noun in Philemon, though the concept undergirds the whole letter). For 1:18’s ἐλλογέω, use आरोपित करणें (already fixed in the core glossary), never क्षमा करप्. |
| आरोपित करणें (āropit karaṇẽ) — “charge to one’s account” | Newly coined for this curriculum by extending the baseline’s आरोपित नीतिमत्ता root; not yet attested as ordinary Konkani idiom for bookkeeping, so may read as unusually formal/legal to ordinary readers. | Retain deliberately — the formality is a feature, not a bug: it signals this is theological technical language, directly cross-referencing Romans 4:3’s imputed righteousness. Add a translator’s note at first occurrence explaining the accounting metaphor. |
| स्वीकार करणें (svīkār karaṇẽ) — “receive/welcome” (προσλαμβάνω, 1:17) | Can be read minimally as mere non-hostile tolerance (“accept” in the weak sense of “not reject”) rather than full equal welcome. | Reinforce with an explicit equality marker in surrounding teaching material: “जशें म्हाका स्वीकारता तशें” (welcome him as you would welcome me) — the comparative clause already present in the source text must never be trimmed in translation. |
| मेळप/परत मेळप (restoration sense, used for χαρίζομαι at 1:22) | Risk of reading as a purely personal/circumstantial “getting something back” (Paul’s release) disconnected from the reconciliation theme. | Keep कृपेन (graciously) attached whenever this verb is used, to keep the grace-frame visible even in the incidental closing request. |
Overall risk for this doctrine: Critical, driven entirely by ἐλλογέω/आरोपित करणें (1:18), because this is the single clause in the letter that most directly enacts substitutionary theology in miniature. No other available Konkani term carries both the financial-metaphor precision and the imputation echo simultaneously.
1.2 Christian Brotherhood across Social Status
| Available Konkani terms | Weaknesses | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|
| भाव / भयण (bhāv/bhayaṇ) — “brother/sister” | Lexically simple and unambiguous, but Konkani (like the source culture) has strong existing social registers in which kinship terms are not extended across master-servant or caste lines in ordinary speech; a literal rendering risks being read as merely polite address rather than an ontological status claim. | Retain भाव/भयण exactly, but flag 1:16 in teaching notes as the doctrinal climax where this ordinary kinship word is applied in a socially radical way — the naturalness of the Konkani word is precisely what makes the countercultural claim recognizable; do not “upgrade” to a more formal or hedged term. |
| प्रभूंत (prabhūnt) — “in the Lord” (ἐν κυρίῳ) | Compound postpositional forms (नाम + अंत) can read as merely locative (“inside the Lord”) to readers unfamiliar with Pauline “in Christ” idiom, rather than as a participatory/union concept. | Consistent reuse across curriculum (matching future ख्रिस्तांत occurrences) plus a standing translator’s note the first time “in the Lord” appears, cross-referencing the baseline’s christian_identity_in_christ doctrine family. |
| सहभागी (sahabhāgī) — “partner” (κοινωνός, 1:17) | Could be misread in commercial contexts as “business partner,” especially since Konkani speakers may also encounter भागीदार in trade/legal usage. | Retain सहभागी deliberately (not भागीदार) because it shares its root with the baseline’s सहभागिता (fellowship), keeping the gospel-partnership sense visible over the commercial one. |
Overall risk for this doctrine: High. The vocabulary itself is not scarce; the risk is that Goa’s own status-consciousness (caste distinctions among Hindu communities, and residual social stratification within Goan Catholic communities from the colonial period) may cause readers to under-read the radicalism of 1:16 rather than over-read it. Teaching material, not lexical substitution, is the main mitigation tool here.
1.3 Slavery and the Gospel’s Transforming Power
| Available Konkani terms | Weaknesses | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|
| दास (dās) | Crowded semantic neighborhood (see §2 below): collides with the honored, voluntary Varkari bhakti self-designation “dev-das.” Philemon 1:16 names involuntary chattel bondage — the near-opposite social reality. | Use दास (established Bible-tradition term) but pair every occurrence with an explicit social/legal qualifier: सामाजिक दास (socially bonded slave) or बंधनांतलो दास (one bound in servitude). Never leave दास unqualified in this letter. |
| गुलाम (gulām) — Perso-Arabic loan | Unambiguous chattel-slavery sense, avoiding the bhakti collision entirely — but it is a loanword absent from the existing Konkani Bible-translation tradition, and its Perso-Arabic/Islamicate register may itself feel foreign to the target register (Goa Official Language Act Devanagari standard, Hindu-background-facing audience). | Flag as a field-test alternative; recommend theologian + native-speaker adjudication before Phase 2 lock rather than deciding now. Do not silently substitute without review, given दास’s centrality to the Romans-baseline-adjacent translation memory. |
| दासापरस चड (dāsāparas caḍ) — “more than a slave” (ὑπὲρ δοῦλον) | No independent weakness beyond inheriting दास’s collision risk; the phrase itself is compositional and clear. | Never generalize to a vaguer “valued helper” gloss — this is the letter’s doctrinal center for this theme and must retain its ontological force (a changed status, not merely improved treatment). |
| निरुपेगी/उपेगी (nirupegī/upegī) — “useless/useful” wordplay on Ὀνήσιμος | Konkani has no name meaning “useful,” so the paronomasia (Onesimus ~ “useful one”) is structurally untranslatable; a plain rendering loses all rhetorical wit. | Compensate with a required translator’s note at 1:11 (and echoed at 1:20’s ὀναίμην wordplay) explaining the Greek name-pun rather than attempting a forced Konkani pun. |
Overall risk for this doctrine: Critical. This is the sharpest genuine lexical gap in the entire curriculum: Konkani’s only well-established Bible-tradition word for “slave” is also a term of devotional honor in a religious tradition still actively practiced in the target region (Varkari pilgrimage devotion, itself connected to the Pandharpur tradition also referenced in the baseline’s सहभागिता/संत notes). This is not a hypothetical collision — दास appears in ordinary devotional Konkani/Marathi hymnody in a positive sense within living memory and practice.
1.4 Intercession and Appeal on Behalf of Another
| Available Konkani terms | Weaknesses | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|
| विनवणी करप् (vinavaṇī karap) — “appeal/entreat” (παρακαλέω, entreaty sense) | Konkani has an available higher-register alternative (विनंती) closer to formal petition language, which could read as more socially deferential/status-marked (a social inferior petitioning a superior) than Paul’s actual rhetorical stance (an apostle voluntarily setting aside authority). | Retain विनवणी (not विनंती) as already fixed in the core glossary; add a note that this is voluntary humility from a position of authority, not petition from a position of social inferiority — the reverse of ordinary Konkani petition registers. |
| आज्ञा करणें (āj̈ñā karaṇẽ) — “command” (ἐπιτάσσω, 1:8) | Shares the आज्ञा root with religious/guru-disciple command language common in regional devotional practice, risking a reading where Paul’s rejected option (command) sounds like ordinary spiritual-authority discourse. | Keep the shared root deliberately — the whole rhetorical point of 1:8-9 is the contrast between what Paul could do (आज्ञा करणें, command) and what he chooses to do (विनवणी करप्, appeal); the shared-root family makes the contrast legible rather than obscuring it. |
| बंदी (bandī) — “prisoner” (δέσμιος) | Bare बंदी reads as an ordinary criminal-imprisonment term (कैदी is the more colloquial synonym, also criminal-coded); without qualification, either could imply wrongdoing. | Always pair with ख्रिस्ताखातीर (for Christ’s sake), as already fixed in the core glossary; never let बंदी stand alone in 1:1, 1:9. |
| अंतःकरण (antaḥkaraṇ) — “inmost affection” (σπλάγχνα) | Formally correct but loses the vivid physicality of the Greek “bowels” idiom; काळीज (heart/innards, more visceral) is available but less standard in formal register. | Retain अंतःकरण for register consistency across the 1:7/1:12/1:20 inclusio; this is a register trade-off (formality over vividness), acceptable given the letter’s otherwise formal epistolary register. |
Overall risk for this doctrine: Medium-High, concentrated less in missing vocabulary than in the risk that available Konkani terms carry status/authority connotations (petition-from-below, guru-command patterns) that could quietly invert Paul’s actual rhetorical posture (authority voluntarily laid aside) if not actively taught against.
1.5 Grace-Motivated Obedience
| Available Konkani terms | Weaknesses | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|
| सक्ती (saktī) — “compulsion” (ἀνάγκη, 1:14) | None lexically; the risk is entirely contextual-historical: सक्ती is the exact register in which Goa’s inquisition-era coercive conversion history would be discussed. | This is a feature for this curriculum, not a defect — Paul’s explicit rejection of सक्ती as a motive gives the translation team a direct biblical anchor for the baseline’s own invitational, anti-coercive principle. Highlight, do not soften. |
| स्वखुशीन (svakhuśīn) — “voluntary” (ἑκούσιον, 1:14) | Adverbial-leaning form; some reviewers may prefer a more noun-like form for doctrinal emphasis in headings/teaching titles. | Retain स्वखुशीन in-text (matches natural clause structure); permit a nominalized gloss (“स्वखुशेची कृती,” a voluntary act) in headers/titles only, not in the verse rendering itself. |
| आज्ञाधारकता (āj̈ñādhārakatā) — “obedience” (ὑπακοή, 1:21) | Risk of collapsing into the baseline’s distinct compound विश्वासाची आज्ञाधारकता (“obedience of faith,” Romans 1:5/16:26), which names a different, more technical soteriological category. | Use the bare आज्ञाधारकता for Philemon 1:21 and explicitly teach the distinction: here it is obedience flowing from love and free confidence toward a fellow believer, not the Romans-technical phrase describing gospel-response obedience. Never silently merge the two entries. |
| संमती (sammatī) — “consent” (γνώμη) | No major weakness; low ambiguity. | Retain as is; reinforces the सक्ती/स्वखुशीन contrast as a three-term consent cluster. |
Overall risk for this doctrine: High, but favorably so: unlike the slavery vocabulary problem (§1.3), this doctrine’s key terms (सक्ती/स्वखुशीन) are not scarce or collision-prone — they are precise and, if anything, usefully charged by regional history in a way that reinforces rather than undermines the intended doctrine.
2. Missing Vocabulary vs. Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods
2.1 Missing Vocabulary (no adequate existing Konkani term)
| Concept | Gap description | Resolution adopted |
|---|---|---|
| ἐλλογέω (charge to account, 1:18) | No single Konkani word names the specific legal/commercial act of transferring a debt to a third party’s account; general “forgive” vocabulary does not carry this sense. | Compound phrase आरोपित करणें, built on the existing आरोपित root (baseline imputed_righteousness), functions as a compositional coinage rather than a single lexical item — matching the baseline’s own precedent of using compound phrases where no single word suffices (cf. नीतिमान ठरवणें for justification). |
| Onesimus name-pun (ἄχρηστος/εὔχρηστος ~ Ὀνήσιμος) | Konkani has no name etymologically meaning “useful,” so the wordplay cannot be reproduced lexically at all. | Not resolved lexically; resolved via mandatory translator’s note (paraphrase-as-explanation) rather than forced substitute pun. This is flagged, not silently dropped. |
| ὀναίμην (1:20, “let me benefit/have joy of you” — another Onesimus-name echo) | Same underlying gap as above; a second, weaker instance of the same pun. | Same resolution: translator’s note referencing the 1:11 note rather than a second independent coinage. |
| προσοφείλω (owe besides/owe one’s very self, 1:19) | Konkani has ordinary “owe” (ऋणी आसप) but no equally compact idiom for the escalated “owe even yourself” rhetorical move. | Resolved compositionally: वयर देणें आसप (“owe on top of / owe in addition”), flagged for teaching emphasis on the spiritual-debt (Philemon’s own conversion) implication rather than left as a bare financial idiom. |
2.2 Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods (too many existing terms, wrong connotations)
These are cases where Konkani/Marathi-family religious vocabulary is not scarce but is already occupied by Goan Hindu (or, in one case, Goan Catholic Romi-register) usage that must be actively fenced off.
| Concept | Competing Konkani/Marathi terms already in religious use | Fencing strategy |
|---|---|---|
| δοῦλος (slave, 1:16) | दास — already the standard positive Varkari bhakti self-designation (“dev-das,” servant of God); also दासबोध (a major Marathi devotional-philosophical text by Samarth Ramdas) reinforces दास’s devotional prestige in the wider linguistic region. गुलाम — unambiguous but foreign-coded loanword, absent from existing Bible-translation precedent. | Mandatory qualifier fencing: दास must never stand bare in this letter; always सामाजिक दास or बंधनांतलो दास. Flag गुलाम for field-test comparison. This is the single highest-priority fencing item in the whole curriculum (see §4, rank #1). |
| ἀγάπη (love, throughout) | भक्ती — devotional passion directed at a chosen temple deity (Shantadurga, Mangueshi, Mahalasa); प्रेम — correct sense but a Marathi, not authentic Konkani, lexical choice, per the baseline’s general preference for Konkani-proper vocabulary over Marathi loans where alternatives exist. | Use मोग exclusively (already fixed in the core glossary); every occurrence in teaching material should include a one-line distinguishing note (“selfless love for a fellow believer, not devotional feeling toward a deity”) at least at first occurrence (1:5). |
| ἐπιτάσσω / ἀνήκον (command / duty, 1:8) | कर्तव्य — risks a dharma-adjacent cosmic-duty register, the same concern the Romans baseline already raised for धर्म (rejected for both “law” and “righteousness”). | कर्तव्य explicitly rejected for ἀνήκον; योग्य (“fitting/proper”) adopted instead, deliberately avoiding any word built on the dharma root. |
| δέσμιος (prisoner, “of Christ,” 1:1/1:9) | कैदी/बंदी — both carry ordinary-criminal connotation in everyday Konkani usage. | Not a devotional-collision case but a connotation-collision case: fence with ख्रिस्ताखातीर every time, per §1.4 above. |
| γεννάω (beget spiritually, 1:10) | पुनर्जन्म-adjacent जल्म vocabulary risks drifting toward reincarnation associations, the same concern already flagged for baseline’s “resurrection” entry. | Use जल्म दिवणें but require an explicit translator’s note distinguishing one-time spiritual fathering (a pastoral/conversion metaphor) from the cyclical rebirth doctrine — same logic, lower stakes than resurrection itself since this is Paul’s own metaphor rather than a core Christological claim, but the root-level collision risk is structurally identical. |
| θεός / κύριος (God/Lord, throughout salutation and closing) | Already documented at length in the Romans baseline (देव’s generic-deity ambiguity; the established mitigation of exclusivity-marking). | No new fencing strategy needed; Philemon’s salutation/closing formulas must simply apply the baseline’s existing एकच खरो देव marking convention consistently at 1:3-4, 1:25. |
3. Transliteration vs. Paraphrase Decisions
| Item | Decision | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| Proper names (Paul, Philemon, Apphia, Archippus, Onesimus, Timothy, Epaphras, Mark, Aristarchus, Demas, Luke) | Transliterate, using established or newly-fixed Devanagari forms (§4 of the core glossary). | Standard Bible-translation practice; no theological content to paraphrase, and transliteration preserves cross-reference searchability against the wider NT curriculum (Mark, Luke, Acts, etc. already in scope per this pipeline’s curriculum list). |
| ἀββα-style intimacy terms | N/A in Philemon (no Aramaic term of address occurs in this letter) — noted for completeness since the baseline’s अब्बा entry does not recur here. | Confirms no action needed; recorded to demonstrate full-book term-by-term review was performed. |
| ἐλλογέω (charge to account) | Paraphrase (compound phrase आरोपित करणें), not transliteration. | No Greek-derived loanword tradition exists in Konkani for this concept; a compositional Konkani phrase carrying the existing आरोपित root is more transparent to the target reader than any transliterated form would be. |
| Onesimus name-pun | Paraphrase via translator’s note, not attempted phonetic wordplay reconstruction. | Forcing an artificial Konkani pun (e.g., inventing a name meaning “useful”) would falsify the text’s actual proper name; better to transliterate the name faithfully (ओनेसिम) and explain the pun’s meaning separately. |
| ἀνάγκη / ἑκούσιον (compulsion/voluntary) | Paraphrase using existing plain Konkani words (सक्ती/स्वखुशीन), not transliteration or coinage. | These are ordinary abstract-noun concepts with perfectly good existing Konkani equivalents; no gap exists here beyond connotation management (already addressed in §1.5/§2). |
| δοῦλος (slave) | Established-term reuse with mandatory qualifier, i.e., neither pure transliteration nor a newly coined word, but the existing Bible-tradition term दास with obligatory fencing language attached. Loanword गुलाम remains a flagged, not-yet-adopted transliteration-style alternative. | This is the one genuinely unresolved decision in the whole analysis; see §4 rank #1. Recorded here as “pending,” not “decided,” pending joint theologian/native-speaker review before Phase 2 lock, exactly as the core glossary already flags. |
| πρεσβύτης/πρεσβευτής (old man/ambassador, 1:9) | Translate the more probable sense (ज्येष्ठ मनीस, “elder/old man”) but flag the textual variant, not resolve by transliteration. | This is a textual-criticism question, not a lexical-gap question; transliteration would not help since both readings are ordinary Greek words with ordinary Konkani equivalents. Recorded for reviewer awareness, not as a translation strategy decision per se. |
4. Ranked List of Highest-Risk Ambiguities in Philemon
Ranked by combined doctrinal weight and probability of misreading given Konkani’s specific semantic environment.
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δοῦλος / “more than a slave” (1:16) — Critical. दास’s collision with the honored Varkari “dev-das” devotional self-designation is the single sharpest ambiguity in the letter: an unqualified reading could invert Paul’s whole argument, making Onesimus’s former bondage sound like a spiritually praiseworthy status rather than the involuntary social wrong the gospel now overturns. Requires mandatory qualifier language at every occurrence and joint theologian/native-speaker adjudication on दास vs. गुलाम before Phase 2 lock.
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ἐλλογέω / “charge to my account” (1:18) — Critical. The single clause most directly enacting substitutionary imputation in the letter; a generic “forgive” rendering would erase the doctrinal echo of Romans 4:3 entirely. Requires the fixed compound आरोपित करणें and an explicit cross-reference note in teaching material.
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δικαιοσύνη-adjacent “duty” language / ἀνῆκον (1:8) — High. The word Paul explicitly sets aside (duty-based compliance) sits one root away from धर्म, the baseline’s own flagship rejected term for “law” and “righteousness.” A translator defaulting to कर्तव्य here would accidentally reintroduce, in a new letter, the exact dharma-adjacent risk the Romans baseline worked hard to fence out.
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ἀδελφός applied across the master-slave divide (1:16) — High. Lexically simple, but the single most countercultural social claim in the letter; risk is under-translation (readers mentally softening the force of “brother” back into a merely polite honorific) rather than mistranslation of the word itself.
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ἀνάγκη / ἑκούσιον (1:14) — High, but a favorable risk: Goa’s Inquisition-era history gives सक्ती unusual rhetorical force in exactly the direction Paul intends. Ranked here mainly because reviewers must be briefed that this loaded resonance is deliberate and desirable, not a translation problem to be smoothed over.
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ἐν κυρίῳ / ἐν σαρκί contrast (1:16) — Medium-High. Two prepositional phrases in the same verse (देहान vs. प्रभूंत) carry the entire theological weight of “no longer merely as a slave… but… as a brother… both in the flesh and in the Lord.” Konkani postposition-based renderings risk reading as flatly parallel rather than contrastively stacked (ordinary social relation elevated, not replaced, by spiritual relation). Requires explicit syntactic attention in Phase 2, not just lexical fidelity.
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γεννάω spiritual fathering (1:10) — Medium. Root-level proximity to जल्म vocabulary carries a smaller-scale version of the same rebirth/reincarnation collision the baseline documents for “resurrection,” though the doctrinal stakes here (a human pastoral metaphor, not a Christological claim) are lower.
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σπλάγχνα inclusio consistency (1:7, 1:12, 1:20) — Medium. Not a doctrinal-content risk but a structural-fidelity risk: if अंतःकरण is rendered inconsistently across the three occurrences (e.g., swapped for काळीज in only one instance), the deliberate literary inclusio binding the letter’s opening, middle, and closing becomes invisible to the Konkani reader.
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Onesimus wordplay (1:11, 1:20) — Medium. Purely a rhetorical-force loss, not a doctrinal risk, since the underlying concept (Onesimus’s transformed usefulness) is still stated plainly elsewhere in the verse; mitigated fully by a translator’s note.
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πρεσβύτης/πρεσβευτής textual variant (1:9) — Low-Medium. Affects rhetorical self-presentation (old man vs. ambassador) but not core doctrine either way; flagged for reviewer awareness only.
5. Full-Book Coverage Confirmation
Every verse of Philemon 1:1–25 was reviewed for this analysis. Verses not separately discussed above (1:2 co-recipients and house-church note; 1:3 salutation formula; 1:4-6 thanksgiving frame; 1:12-13 narrative logistics; 1:15 relational permanence; 1:21-25 closing confidence, travel plans, and greetings) were reviewed and determined to introduce no additional gap-analysis items beyond those already catalogued in the core glossary and term registry — their vocabulary is either Low-risk standard Bible language (धन्यवाद, प्रार्थना, नमस्कार धाडणें, पावणेखोली) or reuses items already analyzed above (मोग, सहभागिता, प्रभू, देव, ख्रिस्त). This satisfies the full-book coverage mandate: no chapter or verse span was silently skipped, and the single chapter’s every verse has been either analyzed in depth above or explicitly noted here as reviewed with no new gap-analysis findings.
6. Summary Recommendations for Phase 2 Preparation
- Lock आरोपित करणें, दासापरस चड, and the सक्ती/स्वखुशीन pair into translation memory exactly as recorded in the core glossary — no further deviation permitted without theologian sign-off.
- Escalate the दास vs. गुलाम decision for Philemon 1:16 to joint theologian + native-speaker review before Phase 2 segment translation begins; this is the one open lexical decision this analysis does not consider fully resolved.
- Require translator’s notes (flagged for review, not shown to end readers) at: 1:10 (γεννάω/जल्म दिवणें), 1:11 and 1:20 (Onesimus wordplay), 1:16 (ἐν σαρκί/ἐν κυρίῳ contrast), and 1:18 (ἐλλογέω/आरोपित करणें cross-reference to Romans 4:3).
- Carry forward every Section 1 (baseline-reused) term from the core glossary unchanged; this analysis introduces no proposed deviations from the Romans
translation_memory.json. - Feed the ranked ambiguity list (§4) directly into the Philemon-specific
doctrine_risk_registry.jsonextension (subsequent PRD step) so review routing matches these findings.
This document extends, and does not contradict, the Romans baseline Language Package. All terms marked “established” or “reused” above are drawn verbatim from translation_memory.json v1 and must not be altered without a formal version increment.