Linguistic Gap Analysis
Linguistic Gap Analysis — Revelation, English → Indonesian
This document executes Phase 1 Step 8 of the TRI pipeline for the Revelation curriculum (destination language: Indonesian). It builds directly on 08_core_glossary.md and the extended bible_term_registry.json for Revelation, and treats the baseline Romans translation_memory.json / bible_term_registry.json as the non-negotiable language authority. Nothing here contradicts a baseline decision; where Revelation intensifies a baseline risk (e.g. Injil, rasul, Anak Allah, menyembah) that intensification is noted as an extension, not a new decision.
Scope: full book, Revelation 1–22, with the core passage (21:1-8) treated as the theological anchor for the worked ambiguity analysis in Section E, not as the boundary of coverage.
Purpose
Identify, for the Revelation curriculum specifically:
- Where Indonesian’s existing theological vocabulary is adequate but must be fenced against collision with Islamic-majority religious vocabulary (per the baseline’s established risk methodology).
- Where Indonesian has no ready equivalent at all and a compound phrase, loanword, or explanatory circumlocution is required.
- Where transliteration is preferable to paraphrase, and vice versa, for Revelation’s distinctive apocalyptic vocabulary.
- The highest-risk ambiguities specific to this letter/book that Phase 2 segment translation must be pre-armed against.
Method
Each doctrine named in the curriculum parameters was cross-referenced against:
- The baseline Romans
translation_memory.json(terms that must simply be reused), - The Revelation-specific
bible_term_registry.jsonextension (terms newly defined for this book), - Known Indonesian religious-vocabulary collision points documented across both baseline artifacts (Quranic loanwords, Sufi/Islamic technical terms, folk-religious cosmology, and colonial-era missionary connotations).
Gaps are classified into three categories, consistent with baseline methodology:
- Adequate-but-crowded: a good Indonesian rendering exists, but the same word/root is claimed by a competing religious framework and must be fenced with a teaching note.
- Missing/no-equivalent: no single Indonesian word carries the concept; a compound phrase or explanatory circumlocution is required, and that phrase must be locked into translation memory so it is never re-invented.
- Transliteration-preferred: the safest strategy is a proper-noun-style loanword/transliteration precisely because paraphrase would import unwanted associations.
A. Doctrine Vocabulary Matrix
| Doctrine (curriculum parameter) | Available Indonesian term(s) | Weaknesses / collision risk | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| The Return and Reign of Christ | kedatangan Kristus yang kedua, Kerajaan Kristus, Anak Domba, Raja segala raja | No single Indonesian word covers “parousia” as a technical return-event; risk of collapsing it into a vague “coming” (kedatangan) indistinguishable from the incarnation. Also risk of political-triumphalist misreading of “reign” (pemerintahan/kerajaan) as an earthly regime change agenda, sensitive in Indonesia’s religiously plural political context. | Use the compound phrase kedatangan Kristus yang kedua consistently (never bare kedatangan) and pair Kerajaan language always with Kristus/Anak Domba as subject, never with a nationalist referent. Reuse baseline Kerajaan Allah fencing note. |
| The Sovereignty of God over History | kedaulatan Allah, pemeliharaan Allah (baseline), Yang Mahakuasa (pantokratōr) | Yang Mahakuasa overlaps closely with Al-Qadir/Al-Qawiyy, standard Islamic divine attributes; without anchoring, a hearer may affirm the sentence as shared common ground rather than as a Trinitarian sovereignty claim (the throne-room scenes apply this title to both Father and the slain Lamb). | Retain Yang Mahakuasa but require a teaching note at every Critical/High occurrence naming the Triune referent explicitly, especially where applied to Christ (1:8, 1:17-18). Reuse baseline pemeliharaan Allah, never takdir. |
| Perseverance and Faithful Witness under Persecution | ketekunan, kesabaran, kesaksian, saksi, yang menang | Two distinct collision risks converge here: (1) kesaksian/saksi drifting toward syahid (Islamic martyrdom doctrine, classically tied to dying in armed jihad with guaranteed paradise) once the semantic range extends to death for testimony (6:9, 17:6); (2) yang menang (“overcomer”) read through regional triumphalist-conquest religious-political rhetoric. | Never render “martyr” with syahid/mati syahid; use martir (loanword) or the circumlocution yang mati karena kesaksiannya tentang Yesus. Every occurrence of yang menang requires a note clarifying nonviolent, Christ-secured overcoming (12:11), not overcoming by the believer’s own struggle or force. |
| Judgment of the Wicked and Vindication of the Saints | penghakiman, takhta putih yang besar, kematian yang kedua, lautan api | Indonesian has no ready equivalent for “second death” as a technical eschatological category distinct from ordinary physical death; risk of readers hearing it as mere repetition or intensified punishment rather than final, decisive, distinct judgment. Also risk that “great white throne” judgment is heard through an Islamic deeds-weighed-against-mercy verdict framework, since both traditions share vivid final-judgment imagery. | Lock in the compound kematian yang kedua with a mandatory explanatory gloss at every occurrence (reused from bible_term_registry.json). For takhta putih yang besar, the teaching note must state explicitly: deeds are revealed/confirmed at this judgment, but final standing is determined by inclusion in the Lamb’s book of life through faith, not the weight of deeds against mercy. |
| The New Heaven and New Earth | langit yang baru dan bumi yang baru, kota kudus, Yerusalem baru | Baru (new) does not by itself distinguish kainos (new in kind/quality) from neos (new in time/sequence); an unmarked rendering risks being heard as “a replacement” or “a repair” of the old order rather than qualitative re-creation. Also, “no more sea” (21:1) risks a mundane geographic misreading if the symbolic function (removal of chaos) is not flagged. | Pair baru with an explicit qualitative gloss in teaching material (“baru secara hakikat, bukan sekadar baru secara waktu”). Flag laut (sea) at 21:1 for a symbolic-function note distinguishing it from a literal geographic claim. |
| The Church as Bride of Christ | pengantin perempuan, mempelai, perkawinan Anak Domba | Mempelai (bride/groom, gender-neutral in modern usage) is available as an alternative to pengantin perempuan but is less standard in Indonesian Bible tradition; both terms carry residual risk of being read as individual-marital-status language rather than corporate/covenantal imagery, and of implying a literal spousal claim about God. | Retain pengantin perempuan (per registry) with a mandatory corporate/covenantal framing note at every occurrence (19:6-9; 21:2, 9; 22:17): the whole believing community, not an individual’s marital status, and not a literal spouse for the Father. |
| Worship of the Lamb | menyembah, sujud menyembah, layak | Menyembah is the strongest available Indonesian verb for worship/prostration and correctly conveys total submission — but this is precisely the risk: repeatedly directing menyembah at the Anak Domba alongside God on the throne (5:13-14; 7:9-10) is read by an Islamic-formed hearer as textbook shirk (associating a created being with Allah in worship due to him alone). | Do not soften to a weaker term (e.g., menghormati, “to honor”) to reduce friction — the doctrinal preservation rule from the baseline requires retaining the full force. Every occurrence must carry a theologian-reviewed note stating this is a deliberate, repeated NT claim to Christ’s full deity, not devotional exaggeration. |
| Symbolic and Apocalyptic Interpretation | lambang, simbol, penglihatan, nubuat | Indonesian has adequate general vocabulary for symbol/vision, but no established interpretive-genre marker equivalent to “apocalyptic literature” as a technical category; risk that numeric and symbolic figures (144,000; 3.5 years; 1,000 years; Armageddon) are taught with flat literalism by both effort-to-be-faithful lay teachers and, from the other direction, dismissed as “just symbolic” in a way that denies any real future referent. | Require an explicit interpretive-frame teaching note wherever a number/symbol appears (see Section C), stating the number’s symbolic function while still affirming a real, future, God-ordained culmination — avoiding both extremes. |
| Assurance of God’s Final Victory over Evil | kepastian kemenangan Allah, Iblis, Setan, naga, ular tua | Iblis is not a neutral loanword in Indonesian — it is the specific proper name and origin-narrative (a jinn who refused to prostrate before Adam) for Satan in mainstream Islamic teaching, a different account of his nature and fall than Genesis/Revelation’s fallen-angel narrative, even though both traditions agree he is the ultimate adversary. | Retain Iblis/Setan (established, unavoidable in Indonesian Christian usage) but require a distinguishing note on the differing origin-accounts wherever the identification chain (dragon = ancient serpent = Devil = Satan, 12:9, 20:2) is taught, so the Quranic backstory is not silently imported. |
B. Missing Vocabulary — No Ready Indonesian Equivalent
These concepts have no existing single Indonesian word or established Bible-translation phrase; a compound/circumlocution must be created, locked into translation memory, and used identically everywhere in the curriculum.
| Concept | Gap | Locked rendering | Notes |
|---|---|---|---|
| Second death (ὁ θάνατος ὁ δεύτερος) | No Indonesian word distinguishes final eschatological death from physical death; kematian alone is ambiguous. | kematian yang kedua (+ mandatory gloss) | Already fixed in registry; every occurrence needs the explanatory note, never a bare rendering. |
| First resurrection (ἡ ἀνάστασις ἡ πρώτη) | The two-resurrection structure (20:5-6) has no parallel category in ordinary Indonesian eschatological vocabulary (Christian or Islamic), where a single general resurrection is expected. | kebangkitan yang pertama (+ mandatory gloss distinguishing it from a “second”/general resurrection) | Confusable with baseline kebangkitan; needs explicit numbering language every time. |
| Eternal gospel (εὐαγγέλιον αἰώνιον) | “Eternal” as a qualifier on Injil has no precedent in the baseline; risks being heard as a claim about an eternally pre-existing scripture-text, competing with Quranic claims about the Injil given to Isa. | Injil yang kekal (+ mandatory gloss anchoring “eternal” to the message’s unchanging content, not a claim about an eternal physical text) | Compounds two Critical risks (Injil + “eternal” qualifier); treat as its own registry entry, not as a simple modification of Injil. |
| Kingdom climactic announcement (11:15) | No existing Indonesian liturgical/doctrinal phrase for the specific double-kingdom formula (“kingdom of our Lord and of his Christ”). | Kerajaan Allah dan Kerajaan Kristus-Nya | Requires the same verbatim-consistency treatment as Romans’ thesis verses; do not vary the wording across documents. |
| Wrath of the Lamb (ὀργὴ τοῦ ἀρνίου) | Indonesian murka (wrath) exists, but pairing it with Anak Domba (Lamb) has no precedent — the paradox of a sacrificial victim exercising judicial anger is linguistically counter-intuitive and can read as a translation error rather than deliberate theological paradox. | murka Anak Domba (+ note flagging the deliberate paradox) | Must not be smoothed into a less jarring phrase; the jarring quality is the theological point. |
| Tabernacling/dwelling (σκηνόω, echoing John 1:14) eschatologically fulfilled | No single Indonesian verb captures both the OT tabernacle-image and its Incarnation echo simultaneously. | akan berdiam bersama-sama / akan tinggal bersama-sama (21:3), cross-referenced explicitly to the baseline’s Firman yang menjadi manusia | Requires a teaching note bridging Incarnation (Christ dwelling among us in flesh) and its eschatological completion (God dwelling among his people forever). |
| Marriage/wedding of the Lamb as corporate consummation | Indonesian perkawinan/pernikahan defaults to an individual, two-person marriage; no existing phrase marks it as corporate-covenantal without explanation. | perkawinan Anak Domba (+ mandatory corporate framing note, shared with pengantin perempuan) | See doctrine matrix above (Bride of Christ). |
| ”Book of Life” inclusion as the determinant of final standing (contrasted with deeds-weighing) | Indonesian has buku kehidupan / kitab kehidupan as an adequate literal rendering, but no existing phrase contrasts it against the deeds-weighing framework without an explicit doctrinal note. | kitab kehidupan (+ mandatory contrastive gloss at every Critical-risk judgment-scene occurrence, 20:12, 20:15, 21:27) | Should be added as a new registry entry; currently only implied through the Great White Throne entry. |
C. Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods Needing Fencing
These are cases where an adequate, even excellent, Indonesian rendering exists — but the same word or root is simultaneously claimed by a dominant non-Christian religious framework in Indonesia, requiring every occurrence to be “fenced” with context or a teaching note rather than replaced.
| Indonesian term | Competing framework claiming the same word/root | Fencing requirement |
|---|---|---|
| Wahyu (Revelation, book title) | Core Islamic term for divine revelation transmitted to a prophet, culminating and closing in the Qur’an to Muhammad. | Every reference to the book’s title or genre must be anchored to “the unveiling of the risen, reigning, returning Jesus Christ given to the apostle John” — never left as a generic label for “a revelation given to a prophet.” |
| Iblis / Setan | Islamic proper name (Iblis) with a distinct jinn-refusal-to-prostrate origin narrative, differing from the biblical fallen-angel account. | Fence with a note on the differing origin/fall accounts wherever the dragon/serpent/Devil/Satan identification chain (12:9, 20:2) is taught. |
| Menyembah (worship) directed at the Lamb | Islamic prohibition on worship (ibadah) of any but Allah (tawhid); direct shirk concern. | Fence every Lamb-directed occurrence with a theologian-reviewed note (see Doctrine Matrix, Worship of the Lamb). |
| Rasul (apostle), including dua belas rasul Anak Domba | Islamic closed-prophetic-line doctrine culminating in Muhammad as final rasul. | Reuse baseline fencing note at every occurrence, including the new 21:14 foundation-stones image. |
| Nabi / nabi palsu | Islamic closed line of true prophets ending with Muhammad; Revelation’s own true/false prophet contrast is a different axis of meaning that must not be read as commentary on, or competition with, the Islamic doctrine. | Fence with a note that Revelation’s true-vs-false-prophet contrast is an internal NT category (Spirit-given vs. satanically empowered), distinct from the Islamic prophetic-succession question. |
| Umat (people, λαός) | Generic Indonesian sociological term for any registered religious community’s adherents (umat Islam, umat Kristen, umat Hindu). | Fence every occurrence (18:4, 21:3) as God’s own unique covenant people, not one umat among several parallel, socially-registered religious communities. |
| Roh jahat / setan-setan (demons) | Indonesian folk-religious cosmology (jin, hantu, roh halus) with extensive ritual practice of appeasement/consultation. | Fence with a note that Revelation’s demons are hostile powers to be resisted under Christ’s authority, never consulted, appeased, or treated as neutral local spirits. |
| Kesaksian / saksi drifting toward “martyr” | Syahid / mati syahid, the Islamic martyrdom doctrine tied to death in armed jihad with guaranteed paradise. | Never use syahid root; use martir (loanword) or the full circumlocution. Fence every death-for-testimony occurrence (6:9, 12:11, 17:6, 20:4). |
| Yang Mahakuasa (Almighty) | Shared attribute-vocabulary with Islamic Al-Qadir/Al-Qawiyy. | Fence by naming the Triune referent explicitly wherever applied, especially to Christ (1:8, 1:17-18). |
| Yang menang (overcomer) | Regional religious-political “victory/jihad” rhetoric valorizing conquest by force. | Fence with a note on nonviolent, Christ-secured overcoming (12:11) at every occurrence in the seven letters and 21:7. |
| Kerajaan (kingdom) language applied to Christ’s reign | Risk of being heard as commentary on, or endorsement/critique of, actual national political structures in a religiously plural nation-state. | Fence by keeping Kerajaan consistently paired with Allah/Kristus/Anak Domba as subject; never let it stand as unqualified political-kingdom language. |
D. Transliteration vs Paraphrase Decisions
| Term | Decision | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| Ἀρνίον (Lamb) | Paraphrase/translate: Anak Domba | A transliteration would strip the sacrificial-animal imagery entirely; the compound noun already exists and is theologically load-bearing (both “child” and “sheep” senses combine). No gap. |
| Ἁρμαγεδών (Armageddon) | Transliterate: Harmagedon | A symbolic place-name; paraphrasing (e.g., “the great final battlefield”) would lose the proper-noun texture and its OT geographic echo (Megiddo), while transliteration correctly signals “this is a name,” inviting the necessary non-literalist teaching note rather than false familiarity. |
| Ἄλφα καὶ τὸ Ὦ (Alpha and Omega) | Transliterate: Alfa dan Omega | Already established Indonesian Bible practice; a paraphrase (“the first and the last”) exists in the text itself as an explanatory apposition (1:8, 22:13) and should be retained alongside the transliteration, not substituted for it — both together preserve the merism’s rhetorical force. |
| Ἀλληλουϊά (Hallelujah) | Transliterate: Haleluya | Established liturgical loanword across Indonesian Christian tradition; paraphrasing (“praise the Lord”) would flatten a recognized worship-exclamation into an ordinary sentence. |
| Ἀποκάλυψις (Revelation, title) | Transliterate with mandatory fencing: Wahyu | No viable paraphrase exists as a book-title (Indonesian Bible tradition is fixed); the risk is not the transliteration itself but its unanchored use — hence Section C’s fencing requirement rather than a different rendering strategy. |
| θηρίον (Beast) | Paraphrase: binatang itu | A transliterated Greek loanword would be opaque and lifeless; the existing Indonesian common noun with the demonstrative “itu” correctly signals “this specific, symbolically loaded creature,” inviting the necessary apocalyptic-literalism caution in teaching material rather than in the word choice itself. |
| χάραγμα (Mark of the beast) | Paraphrase: tanda [binatang itu] | Same rationale as Beast; “tanda” (mark/sign) is the correct semantic register (mark of ownership/allegiance) and needs no loanword. |
| καιρὸν καὶ καιρούς καὶ ἥμισυ καιροῦ (time, times, and half a time) | Paraphrase (literal calque): satu masa, dua masa, dan setengah masa | A transliteration is nonsensical for a numeral-idiom; the literal calque preserves the deliberately opaque, numerically-patterned original phrasing better than any smoothing paraphrase (“three and a half years”) would, which would falsely imply calendrical precision. |
| μαρτυρία / μάρτυς (Testimony/Witness, including martyrdom sense) | Paraphrase/loanword hybrid: kesaksian / saksi, with martir (loanword from Greek via English/Dutch, NOT from Arabic syahid) for the death-for-testimony sense | Deliberately avoids the Arabic-rooted syahid even though it is the “natural” Indonesian word reflexively reached for; martir is a safer loanword precisely because it lacks the specific jihad/guaranteed-paradise doctrinal payload. |
| Ναός (temple/sanctuary) | Paraphrase: Bait Suci / Bait Allah | Established Indonesian Bible vocabulary; no gap, no transliteration needed. |
| Ἰσραήλ, Δαυίδ, and other proper names | Transliterate (established forms only): Israel, Daud | Reuse baseline forms exactly; never re-derive from Arabic-Islamic proper-name traditions (e.g., not Daud rendered as if from Nabi Dawud framing). |
| θάλασσα in “no more sea” (21:1) | Paraphrase: laut, with mandatory symbolic-function note | No transliteration applicable; the risk lies entirely in unflagged literal-geographic reading, addressed by a teaching note rather than a different lexical choice. |
General principle derived: transliteration is preferred exactly where (a) the term is already a fixed, established Indonesian Bible proper noun/loanword, or (b) paraphrase would either be nonsensical (idiomatic numeral phrases) or would strip essential, deliberately-retained ambiguity/opacity (apocalyptic symbols meant to signal “this requires interpretation,” not plain-sense description). Paraphrase is preferred wherever an adequate, semantically rich Indonesian common noun or compound already exists and a loanword would only add opacity without corresponding theological benefit.
E. Ranked List of Highest-Risk Ambiguities in Revelation
Ranked by combined severity (doctrinal centrality × collision risk × frequency), with the core passage (21:1-8) noted where directly implicated.
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Worship (προσκυνέω) directed at the Lamb alongside God (5:13-14; 7:9-10; cf. 22:9’s angel-refusal contrast) — the single highest-stakes ambiguity in the book: an unfenced menyembah addressed to a created-seeming figure reads as textbook shirk to an Islamic-formed hearer, yet softening the verb betrays the entire Christological argument of Revelation 4-5. Highest risk in the book.
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“He will be my son” (21:7) extending filial language to believers, immediately adjacent to the book’s strongest exclusive-deity claims (21:6’s Alpha/Omega) — within the core passage itself. Risk of readers either (a) collapsing believers’ adoptive sonship into Christ’s unique eternal Sonship, diluting Critical-risk Anak Allah doctrine, or (b) recoiling from anak language for humans-before-Allah entirely, given the same Quranic denial that grounds the baseline’s Bapa/Anak Allah cautions. Requires the adoption/sonship distinction to be taught in the same breath as it is stated, precisely because both risks sit in one verse of the anchor passage.
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“Injil yang kekal” (14:6, eternal gospel) — compounds two Critical baseline risks (Injil’s Quranic-collision + an “eternal” qualifier that could be heard as a truth-claim about scriptural preservation, directly engaging the Quranic doctrine that the Injil given to Isa was corrupted/lost). High frequency of catechetical use in evangelism contexts raises the stakes further.
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Second death vs. ordinary physical death (20:6,14; 21:8) — within the core passage’s immediate context (21:8’s vice-list culminates in “the second death”). No Indonesian lexical equivalent exists; if the compound phrase’s mandatory gloss is dropped even once in translated teaching material, readers may hear only “death” and miss the entire distinct eschatological category the term names.
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“Overcomer” (ὁ νικῶν) climaxing at 21:7 — inside the core passage. The single verse most susceptible to being read through a regional victory/conquest religious-political lens (a real and present homiletical temptation), precisely at the point where the text is asserting the opposite: inheritance is given to the one who endures nonviolently, on the basis of grace already secured (12:11), not achieved by struggle.
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“Iblis”/“Setan” identification chain (12:9, 20:2) — the differing origin-narratives (jinn-refusal vs. fallen-angel) are easily conflated by hearers who assume shared vocabulary means shared backstory; risk compounds because both traditions genuinely agree on Satan’s status as ultimate adversary, making the areas of real disagreement easy to overlook.
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“Great white throne” judgment vs. Islamic deeds-weighing (20:11-15) — structurally similar imagery (books opened, deeds recorded) makes this the doctrine most likely to be assimilated wholesale into a hearer’s existing judgment-day framework unless the book-of-life/faith-basis distinction is stated explicitly at every occurrence.
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Numeric/symbolic apocalyptic figures generally (144,000; 3.5 years; 1,000 years; 7 spirits; 24 elders) — lower doctrinal centrality individually, but collectively the largest volume of segments at risk of flat over-literalization (numerological date-setting, census-counting) or, in reaction, dismissive under-literalization that denies any real future referent — a besetting risk of popular apocalyptic teaching specifically, distinct from the interfaith-collision risks above.
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“Kerajaan Allah dan Kerajaan Kristus-Nya” (11:15) and “Raja segala raja dan Tuan di atas segala tuan” (19:16) — risk is primarily stylistic/political rather than doctrinal-collision: repeated Tuhan-stacking or unqualified kerajaan language could be heard as a claim about earthly political structures in Indonesia’s religiously plural constitutional context if not visibly and consistently anchored to Christ as sole referent.
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“Umat” (people of God, 18:4, 21:3) — lowest-ranked here only because it is a fencing issue rather than a doctrinal-collision issue; still requires consistent anchoring so “umat” is never read as merely one sociologically-registered religious community’s adherents among several.
F. Downstream Recommendations for Phase 2
- All ten ambiguities in Section E must carry mandatory translator/teaching notes in Phase 2 segment output, per the escalation rules already established in
12_ai_translation_requirements.md; this analysis recommends adding items 3, 4, and 5 above explicitly to that document’s “Escalation Rules for Human Review” list when the Revelation-specific instruction set is finalized in a later step. - The locked renderings in Section B (kematian yang kedua, kebangkitan yang pertama, Injil yang kekal, Kerajaan Allah dan Kerajaan Kristus-Nya, murka Anak Domba, akan berdiam bersama-sama, perkawinan Anak Domba, kitab kehidupan) must be entered into the Revelation extension of translation memory before any Phase 2 segment translation begins, consistent with the baseline’s “record before completing the segment” rule.
- The fencing table in Section C should be operationalized as a standing checklist item in the Phase 2 validation rules table (parallel to the baseline’s forbidden-substitution checklist), specifically checking for the presence of the required distinguishing note, not merely the correct word choice.
- Given the very high concentration of Critical-risk ambiguities inside the core passage (21:1-8) itself — items 2, 4, and 5 above all sit within these eight verses — this passage should receive priority theologian review sequencing in Phase 2 Step 17, ahead of other chapters of comparable length.