2 Timothy — Linguistic Gap Analysis (PRD Phase 1, Step 8)

Purpose

This document identifies where the Javanese language has no natural equivalent for a 2 Timothy doctrinal term (a gap), where it has a natural term that is already occupied by a competing religious framework (a crowded semantic neighborhood requiring fencing), and where transliteration rather than translation is the safer strategy. It produces the doctrine vocabulary matrix and ranked ambiguity list that ground the core glossary (Step 08) and the bible term registry entries already drafted for this curriculum. All findings are constrained by the Romans baseline translation_memory.json — no established rendering is revisited here; this analysis addresses only the new lexical territory 2 Timothy opens.

2 Timothy is Paul’s final pastoral charge, written to a named disciple facing institutional decay and personal danger. Its dominant register is custodial and forensic (guarding a deposit, being tried and rewarded) rather than Romans’ dominant register of forensic-soteriological argument. This shifts the linguistic risk profile: 2 Timothy’s hardest problems cluster around transmission/guardianship metaphors, eschatological-decline vocabulary, and martyrdom/reward imagery — three semantic zones barely touched by the Romans baseline and each abutting a strong, independent Javanese cultural system (kejawen mysticism, Jayabaya prophecy, and slametan/sajen ritual practice, respectively).

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1. Doctrine Vocabulary Matrix

For each of the seven curriculum doctrines: the Javanese terms available (reused from baseline or newly proposed), the specific weaknesses of the natural vocabulary, and the recommended handling strategy.

1.1 Inspiration and Sufficiency of Scripture

Aspect	Detail
Available terms	Kitab Suci (sacred writings/Scripture — shared root, generic); kawedharan (a revealing/disclosing, root available); ilham (natural loanword for “inspiration”); baseline suci (holy).
Weaknesses	(1) Kitab Suci is denominationally neutral vocabulary used identically for the Qur’an in Indonesian/Javanese Islamic usage — it signals “a holy book” as a category, not this specific, exclusively authoritative OT-to-NT canon. (2) Ilham is the single most dangerous available word: in both the surrounding Islamic tradition and in kejawen mysticism, ilham names a subjective flash of insight granted to a wali, kyai, or ascetic through personal spiritual attainment — a repeatable, distributed phenomenon available to many holy people, not a unique, once-for-all, comprehensive act of God producing a fixed, inerrant text. Using ilham for θεόπνευστος would functionally teach that the Bible is one more product of the same mystical-insight category Javanese religious culture already recognizes and grants to many figures. (3) Wahyu (already forbidden elsewhere in the baseline for grace/calling/glory) carries the same danger here in an intensified form, since wahyu is specifically the mandate-light that legitimizes a single chosen figure — precisely the “great man received a revelation” framing 2 Timothy 3:16 must avoid for a text given to the whole church.
Recommended strategy	Never use bare ilham or wahyu. Coin a transparent compound anchoring the divine Author explicitly: kawedharan saking Gusti Allah piyambak (“disclosure from God Himself”), forcing the reader past the mystical-insight category toward a direct-authorship claim. Retain Kitab Suci for “sacred writings” / “Scripture” generically, but require a contextual anchor (explicit OT-to-Christ referent) at first occurrence in each unit to prevent generic “holy book” drift. Mandatory theologian review at every occurrence of θεόπνευστος; native-speaker review for ordinary uses of Kitab Suci.

1.2 Perseverance under Suffering

Aspect	Detail
Available terms	nandhang kasangsaran (endure suffering); kasabaran (patience); panganiaya (persecution); isin (shame, honor-shame register); kajirihan (cowardice); baseline sih-rahmat, panguwaosipun Gusti Allah.
Weaknesses	Javanese ethical vocabulary for hardship is dominated by nrimo (passive, fatalistic acceptance of one’s lot) — already flagged Critical-adjacent in the baseline’s providence doctrine. Left unqualified, “enduring suffering” could be absorbed into nrimo ing pandum, a resigned acceptance of impersonal fate, rather than active, hope-fueled perseverance grounded in a personal God’s purpose and future reward. Similarly, isin (shame) is a socially load-bearing honor/shame term in Javanese culture generally tied to loss of face before one’s community or elders; 2 Timothy narrows it specifically to shame over association with a suffering, imprisoned apostle and his gospel — a much more specific referent than ordinary social disgrace.
Recommended strategy	Always pair endurance vocabulary with an explicit purposive/relational clause (God’s own pepesthenipun, the coming ganjaran/reward, union with a Person) so the passage cannot collapse into nrimo-style fatalism. Anchor isin explicitly to “association with the gospel / with a prisoner for Christ,” never left as free-floating social shame. Native speaker review sufficient except where cowardice/shame passages intersect with calling/providence language (theologian review).

1.3 Guarding Sound Doctrine

Aspect	Detail
Available terms	reksa (custodial guarding); piwulang (teaching); piwulang ingkang saras (sound/“healthy” teaching); piwulang leres ingkang kapitadosaken (the good deposit); guru (teacher).
Weaknesses	This doctrine is 2 Timothy’s most distinctive contribution and has no ready-made Javanese equivalent as a unified concept — Javanese has vocabulary for guarding property, for teaching, and for health, but no existing idiom that fuses “a fixed body of content entrusted to a custodian, to be kept intact and unaltered across generations” the way παραθήκη does. This is a genuine vocabulary gap, not a crowded neighborhood. Compounding the difficulty, the most natural word for “teacher,” guru, sits inside a live, prestigious Javanese religious category: the guru-murid (master-disciple) lineage central to kejawen mysticism and pesantren tradition, in which a guru often personally mediates or attains authority rather than merely transmitting a fixed, closed deposit received from someone else.
Recommended strategy	Build the deposit-concept as a compound legal/custodial phrase (piwulang leres ingkang kapitadosaken, echoed by reksa for the verb “guard”) and use it with total internal consistency across 1:12, 1:14, 2:2, 2:14, so the reader learns the phrase as a fixed technical term rather than ordinary vocabulary. Never leave guru bare; always qualify with a phrase anchoring the teacher’s authority in the already-completed apostolic deposit (guru ingkang ngajar piwulang leres saking Gusti Allah), explicitly blocking a personally-attained-authority reading. Theologian review for all deposit/guard-vocabulary and for every bare-vs-qualified guru occurrence.

1.4 Faithful Transmission of the Gospel

Aspect	Detail
Available terms	Same deposit-root as above (parathēkē); pitadosaken dhateng tiyang-tiyang ingkang kapitadosan (entrust to faithful men); baseline Injil, utusan, tedhak turune Dawud.
Weaknesses	The multi-generational handing-on mechanism (2:2 — Paul to Timothy to faithful men to others also) has no single-word Javanese equivalent; the risk is not a competing framework but under-specification, i.e., translating it merely as “teach others,” which loses the explicit chain-of-custody structure that is the doctrine’s whole point. A secondary risk: Javanese guru-murid lineage transmission (see 1.3) actually offers a superficially similar chain-of-custody image, but one built on personally-mediated authority rather than a fixed, unchanging deposit — so any translation that leans on that cultural image for felt naturalness risks smuggling in the wrong transmission model even while solving the “how to render handing-on” problem.
Recommended strategy	Render explicitly as a multi-party, multi-generational handing of a content deposit (not a personal mantle), reusing the same deposit vocabulary from 1.3 rather than inventing a separate metaphor. Do not borrow guru-murid lineage language even loosely, even for felt naturalness. Theologian review required wherever the deposit-root recurs.

1.5 The Charge to Preach the Word

Aspect	Detail
Available terms	wara-warakna (proclaim/herald); juru wara-wara (herald); Pangandika (the Word/message); kula dhawuhaken kanthi tarik seksi (solemnly charge).
Weaknesses	Javanese has adequate vocabulary for public proclamation (wara-wara is the traditional term for a public town-crier announcement, a genuinely useful and unforced fit for κῆρυξ/κηρύσσω). The risk here is not gap or collision but under-strength substitution: a translator under stylistic pressure might soften kēryxon (“preach!”) into wulangna (“teach”) for smoothness, quietly losing the herald’s public, delegated, non-optional authority — precisely 2 Timothy 4:2’s rhetorical force set against a Judge who is watching (4:1).
Recommended strategy	Reserve wara-warakna exclusively for the authoritative-proclamation sense; do not let it drift toward or merge with ordinary piwulang/wulangna vocabulary. Keep Pangandika (capitalized, deposit-anchored) rather than a generic “message” word for τὸν λόγον in 4:2, tying it back to the 1:14/2:2 deposit vocabulary. Native speaker review for register-fidelity; theologian review specifically for 4:1-2 given the Judge-of-living-and-dead framing.

1.6 Apostasy and False Teachers in the Last Days

Aspect	Detail
Available terms	dinten-dinten wingking (the last days); guru-guru (teachers, plural — same collision as 1.3); dongeng-dongeng gubahan (myths); tukang goroh saha tukang tenung (evil men/impostors); kabektèn dhateng Gusti Allah / wangunanipun kabektèn (godliness/form of godliness); sampun ora lulus ing pitados (disqualified regarding the faith).
Weaknesses	This is the single most crowded doctrinal zone in the letter. Every key term collides with a distinct, independently prestigious Javanese cultural system: (a) “the last days” abuts the cyclical jaman kalabendu (“age of calamity”) framework of Ranggawarsita’s Serat Kalatidha and the broader Jayabaya prophetic tradition, which expects moral decay as a recurring phase awaiting a restorer-figure (Satrio Piningit/Ratu Adil) rather than a linear, once-for-all era; (b) “godliness” (eusebeia) has no dedicated Christian-neutral Javanese word and must borrow from bekti, the deeply live vocabulary of filial and ancestral devotion (bekti marang leluhur); (c) “myths” abuts the prestigious, quasi-sacred Javanese babad/mitos/wayang literary heritage that carries real moral and genealogical authority in Javanese self-understanding; (d) “impostors”/γόητες abuts dhukun, the socially significant folk-healer/diviner role, risking either validating real occult power (forbidden by the baseline’s power-of-God doctrine) or unfairly libeling folk healers; (e) “disqualified” abuts kafir/kapir, an entirely different, heavily loaded Islamic legal-religious category. None of these are simple vocabulary gaps — Javanese is not short of words here; the problem is that every available word is already fully occupied by a competing, coherent worldview.
Recommended strategy	Fence, do not avoid: keep the natural, recognizable Javanese words (they are necessary for comprehension) but attach a mandatory clarifying note at first occurrence in each unit that explicitly excludes the competing framework — linear vs. cyclical eschatology for “last days”; divine object required and grammatically explicit for “godliness”; contemporary, invented, truth-competing narrative (not Javanese heritage) for “myths”; moral/doctrinal deception, not real occult power, for “impostors”; internal doctrinal failure, not an external religious-legal category, for “disqualified.” This entire doctrine requires human theologian review at every occurrence, with no exceptions, given the density and independence of the five separate collision risks stacked within a few verses (3:1–13; 4:3–4).

1.7 Assurance of Reward

Aspect	Detail
Available terms	kaesokaken kados kurban unjukan (poured out like a drink offering); makuthaning kabeneran (crown of righteousness); badhe maringi ganjaran (the Lord will award); tresna dhateng rawuhipun (loved his appearing); baseline sih-rahmat, Gusti, kamulyan.
Weaknesses	(a) The libation image (4:6) collides directly with sajen (ritual offerings poured out at a shrine, grave, or crossroads) and tumbal (a sacrificial offering made to ward off calamity or appease unseen forces) — both live practices within the same slametan-adjacent worldview the baseline already flags for kaslametan. A careless rendering could make Paul’s death sound like a ritual appeasement-offering rather than the completion of a life already accepted by God through Christ’s finished work. (b) Makutha (crown) is overwhelmingly a royal/keraton term in Javanese — a monarch’s diadem, palace regalia — which risks entangling στέφανος (an athletic victor’s wreath) with the same royal imagery already carefully bounded for Kratoning Gusti Allah, and risks implying Paul anticipates political rule rather than a race-completion honor. (c) “The Lord will award” sits near the baseline’s grace-versus-utang budi caution: if the reward reads as an independently earned wage, it re-imports the reciprocal social-debt framework grace was defined against.
Recommended strategy	Retain the natural, vivid Javanese images (they carry real rhetorical force) but require mandatory translator notes at each: libation language is Paul’s total self-giving already accepted by God, not a ritual securing protection; the crown is a victor’s garland for finishing a race, not a monarch’s crown of political rule; the reward is a gift of grace to the faith-united, taught alongside the Grace doctrine, not a wage owed for merit. Theologian review for the libation and crown images given their direct intersection with two already-Critical baseline doctrines (salvation-ritual collision, grace-versus-debt); native speaker review for the reward-verb passages generally.

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2. Missing Vocabulary vs. Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods

A key methodological distinction for this letter: some 2 Timothy terms have no natural Javanese word at all (true gaps, solved by coinage/compounding), while others have several natural, well-established Javanese words, all already claimed by a competing system (crowded neighborhoods, solved by fencing with qualifiers and notes, never by inventing an artificial substitute). Confusing the two leads to bad strategy: coining an unfamiliar word for a crowded-neighborhood term produces stilted, unreadable text without actually solving the collision risk; fencing a true gap with a note alone, without providing any usable target-language phrase, leaves the translator with nothing to write.

2.1 True Gaps (require compounding/coinage, not borrowed vocabulary)

Term	Why no natural Javanese equivalent exists	Strategy
παραθήκη / the good deposit	Javanese has words for property, teaching, and trust individually, but no fused idiom for “a fixed, unalterable content held in trust for another and due to be returned/passed on intact.”	Compound: piwulang leres ingkang kapitadosaken.
θεόπνευστος / God-breathed	No Javanese word names “originating directly from God’s own breath” as a unique, singular act distinct from ordinary inspiration/insight.	Compound with explicit divine-self qualifier: kawedharan saking Gusti Allah piyambak.
ἐπιφάνεια in its second-coming sense	Javanese lacks a term for a single, future, decisive divine manifestation that is neither cyclical nor tied to an awaited human restorer-figure.	Compound rooted in rawuh (“to arrive/come,” an honorific verb of arrival) with an explicit “will come again” qualifier: rawuhipun Gusti Yesus ingkang badhe rawuh malih.
ἀδόκιμος περὶ τὴν πίστιν / disqualified regarding the faith	No native metallurgical-assay idiom survives in ordinary Javanese religious vocabulary for “failed the test of genuineness” applied to a person’s profession of faith.	Plain descriptive compound: sampun ora lulus ing pitados (deliberately avoiding any loaded religious-category term).
ὑγιαίνουσα διδασκαλία / sound (healthy) doctrine as a running metaphor	Javanese has saras for bodily health but no established habit of applying health-vocabulary to doctrine as a sustained image across a whole document.	Establish the compound piwulang ingkang saras early and hold it rigidly consistent at every occurrence so the metaphor becomes learnable within the document itself.

2.2 Crowded Neighborhoods (require fencing, not avoidance)

Term	Competing occupants of the semantic space	Strategy
εὐσέβεια / godliness	bekti (ancestor/elder/ruler devotion)	Keep bekti (it is the only natural word carrying the right relational-devotion register) but require the divine object grammatically explicit every time: kabektèn dhateng Gusti Allah, never bare bekti.
μῦθος / myths	babad, mitos, wayang cosmology	Use a term marked as fabricated and current (dongeng-dongeng gubahan — “invented tales”) rather than the dignified literary-heritage words, with a note excluding any implication about Javanese narrative tradition generally.
γόης / impostor-deceiver	dhukun	Avoid dhukun as the primary term (risks validating real occult power or defaming folk healers); use tukang goroh saha tukang tenung with a note that the referent is moral/doctrinal deception.
ἐσχάται ἡμέραι / the last days	jaman kalabendu, Jayabaya/Satrio Piningit cyclical expectation	Keep the plain compound dinten-dinten wingking (avoiding any Kawi/prophetic-literary vocabulary that would invoke Ranggawarsita directly) with a mandatory linear-eschatology note at first occurrence.
διδάσκαλος / teacher	guru (kejawen guru-murid lineage; pesantren guru)	Keep guru (unavoidable — it is simply the word for “teacher”) but never leave it unqualified; always attach the apostolic-deposit-anchoring phrase.
δοῦλος κυρίου / the Lord’s servant	abdi (keraton court-servant/subject hierarchy)	Use abdinipun Gusti but consistently teach it as total voluntary devotion, not social/feudal rank, paralleling the baseline’s priyayi/wong cilik caution.
στέφανος / crown	makutha (royal/keraton crown)	Keep makutha (no substitute reads naturally as “crown” at all) but require the athletic-victor clarifying note at every occurrence.
σπένδομαι / poured out like a libation	sajen, tumbal	Keep the vivid pouring-out image (kaesokaken kados kurban unjukan) but require the ritual-appeasement-exclusion note every time.
ἱερὰ γράμματα / sacred writings	Kitab Suci also used of the Qur’an	Keep Kitab Suci (unavoidable, standard) but anchor to the OT-fulfilled-in-Christ referent explicitly at first occurrence per unit.

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3. Transliteration vs. Paraphrase Decisions

Term	Decision	Rationale
Χριστός → Kristus	Transliterate	Standard Indonesian-archipelago Bible form; already the Romans baseline transliteration standard; no natural Javanese paraphrase exists or is desirable — the proper title must remain recognizably foreign/proper, not descriptive.
διάβολος → Iblis	Transliterate (shared Christian-Islamic Indonesian usage)	Deliberately avoids paraphrasing into any Javanese folk-spirit category (dhemit, lelembut, memedi, banaspati), which would demote a singular personal adversary into a class of unseen folk beings. Iblis is already a cross-tradition proper term in the surrounding religious environment, giving the reader an existing, correctly singular mental category.
Ἰάννης καὶ Ἰαμβρῆς → Yanes lan Yambres	Transliterate, with mandatory footnote	Proper names from an extrabiblical Jewish tradition the Javanese reader has no independent access to; paraphrase is impossible (they are names), and the footnote supplies the missing background rather than attempting to fold it into the text itself.
θεόπνευστος	Paraphrase (compound), never transliterate an Arabic/Islamic-adjacent loanword	Ilham is available as a loanword but is doctrinally dangerous (see §1.1); the compound kawedharan saking Gusti Allah piyambak is a paraphrase built entirely from safe, already-vetted roots (kawedhar = disclosed/revealed; Gusti Allah; piyambak = Himself), deliberately avoiding any single-word loan solution.
παραθήκη / the good deposit	Paraphrase (compound)	No proper name or transliterable original exists; must be built from custodial/trust vocabulary already native to Javanese legal and commercial usage.
ἐπιφάνεια (2nd-coming sense)	Paraphrase, anchored to honorific arrival verb rawuh	Transliterating as a loanword (e.g., “epifani”) would be unintelligible and would forfeit the chance to use the honorific-arrival register Javanese already reserves for a respected, awaited personage — while a bare native paraphrase without the “will come again” qualifier risks assimilation to Satrio Piningit expectation (see §2.2).
μῦθος	Paraphrase, not the cognate loanword mitos	Indonesian/Javanese already has the cognate loanword mitos, but using it directly would trigger the exact heritage-narrative collision this analysis flags; the descriptive paraphrase dongeng-dongeng gubahan (“fabricated tales”) is chosen specifically to avoid the cognate.
Proper names generally (Demas, Titus, Erastus, etc.)	Transliterate per established Indonesian-archipelago Bible name forms	Consistent with baseline precedent (Dawud, Musa, Yesaya); no doctrinal content to paraphrase.
Sang Mesias (already baseline)	N/A — reused unchanged	Not a new decision for this curriculum; flagged here only to confirm no 2 Timothy passage reopens or modifies it.

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4. Ranked List of Highest-Risk Ambiguities in 2 Timothy

Ranked by (a) doctrinal centrality to the letter, (b) severity of potential syncretism if mishandled, and (c) density of independent collision points converging on a single verse or short unit.

1. θεόπνευστος / “God-breathed” (3:16) — Critical. The single word underwriting both Inspiration and Sufficiency of Scripture; the natural loanword ilham would collapse a unique, comprehensive divine authorship claim into the same mystical-insight category Javanese religion already grants to many holy figures. Highest-stakes single term in the letter.

2. The resurrection-already-happened heresy (2:18) — Critical. A false teaching whose shape (a spiritual reality already, quietly, non-bodily accomplished) superficially echoes titisan’s claim of a persisting spiritual essence carried into a later bearer — even though historically unrelated. A careless refutation could accidentally sound like it concedes the very continuation-of-spirit idea it is meant to deny. Requires the most carefully worded translator’s note in the entire curriculum, distinguishing three concepts at once (true future bodily resurrection / the false “already happened” claim / unrelated titisan).

3. σπένδομαι / poured out like a libation (4:6) — Critical. Direct collision with sajen/tumbal ritual-offering practice; risks making Paul’s martyrdom sound like a protective ritual act rather than a completed, already-accepted self-giving.

4. ἐσχάται ἡμέραι / the last days (3:1) and the surrounding apostasy catalogue (3:1–9, 4:3–4) — High, but ranked near the top for density: five independent collision points (cyclical eschatology, bekti, babad/mitos, dhukun, kafir) converge within roughly fifteen verses, making this the highest-density risk zone even though no single term here is individually Critical-tier.

5. διδάσκαλος / teacher, both positive (1:11) and negative (4:3) senses — High. The guru-murid mystical-lineage collision runs through the entire letter’s transmission theology; an unqualified guru in either sense risks importing personally-mediated authority into a doctrine built entirely on a fixed, received deposit.

6. παραθήκη / the good deposit and its guarding (1:12, 1:14, 2:2, 2:14) — High. A true vocabulary gap with no existing Javanese idiom; if the compound phrase is not held rigidly consistent across all four occurrences, the letter’s central stewardship metaphor simply disappears from the translation.

7. ἐπιφάνεια, second-coming sense (4:1, 4:8) — High. Sits directly next to the already-Critical messianic-promise/Satrio Piningit exclusion; a cyclical-restorer reading here would quietly reopen a door the baseline worked hard to close for “messiah.”

8. εὐσέβεια / godliness and its counterfeit “form” (3:5, 3:12) — High. Bekti’s ancestor-devotion gravity is strong enough that omitting the divine-object qualifier even once in a teaching unit risks the whole doctrine drifting toward filial/ancestral piety.

9. στέφανος τῆς δικαιοσύνης / crown of righteousness (4:8) — Medium-High. Royal-crown (makutha) imagery risks bleeding into the Kingdom-of-God keraton caution already carefully bounded in the baseline; without the athletic-victor note, readers may expect political reward rather than a race-completion honor.

10. γόητες / impostors (3:13) and dhukun-adjacent vocabulary — High. Genuine two-sided risk: validating real occult power (forbidden to the power-of-God doctrine) on one side, defaming folk healers unfairly on the other.

11. ἀδόκιμοι περὶ τὴν πίστιν / disqualified regarding the faith (3:8) — Medium-High. Proximity to kafir/kapir is a live danger given the term’s heavy, precise loading in the surrounding Islamic-majority context; must stay a purely descriptive Javanese phrase.

12. δοῦλος κυρίου / the Lord’s servant (2:24) — Medium-High. Abdi’s feudal-court connotation risks flattening Paul’s paradoxical dignity-through-total-belonging into ordinary social rank language.

13. μῦθοι / myths (4:4) — Medium-High. Risk of appearing to condemn Javanese literary heritage wholesale if the cognate loanword mitos is used instead of the deliberately distancing paraphrase.

14. ἀποδώσει μοι ὁ κύριος / the Lord will award (4:8) — Medium. Must stay tethered to the Grace doctrine so the reward does not read as a merit-wage re-importing utang budi.

15. ἀνυπόκριτος πίστις / God remains faithful vs. human faith, same root doing double duty (1:5; 2:13) — Medium. Both English “faith” senses map onto the same pitados root; 2:13’s statement about God’s own character risks being misread as ordinary human trust language unless disambiguated in context.

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5. Forward Recommendations

• All Critical/High items above require the review routing already established in the Romans baseline doctrine_risk_registry.json framework (theologian review for Critical/High; native speaker for Medium; automated for Low) and should be carried into the 2 Timothy doctrine risk registry with the same tiering discipline.
• Every “crowded neighborhood” term in §2.2 must ship with its clarifying note as a non-optional field in the term registry entry, not an optional footnote — omission is itself a translation error for these terms, not a stylistic choice.
• The five-collision density of the apostasy/last-days unit (§4, item 4) means Phase 2 segment routing should treat 2 Timothy 3:1–13 and 4:3–4 as a single high-density review block rather than scoring each verse independently, since the cumulative syncretism risk of the passage exceeds the sum of its individually scored terms.
• No new proper-name transliteration conventions are required beyond those already established in the Romans baseline and confirmed in §3 above.