Linguistic Gap Analysis
Linguistic Gap Analysis — 1 Timothy | English → French
Purpose
This document executes Phase 1 Step 8: a systematic gap analysis between the English source text of 1 Timothy and the French destination language, for the eight curriculum doctrines (Sound Doctrine versus False Teaching; Qualifications for Church Leadership; Christ as the One Mediator; Public Worship and Prayer; The Church as Pillar of Truth; Godliness and Contentment; Care for Widows and the Household of Faith; Guarding the Deposit of Faith), anchored on the core passage 1 Timothy 3:1-13 but spanning all six chapters. It builds directly on 08_core_glossary.md and the updated bible_term_registry.json, and never contradicts the Romans baseline (translation_memory.json, bible_term_registry.json, doctrine_risk_registry.json).
Four analytical tasks are executed below:
- Doctrine Vocabulary Matrix — available French terms, weaknesses, recommended strategy, per doctrine.
- Missing Vocabulary vs. Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods — lexical gaps requiring periphrasis, and French words already saturated with competing senses that must be “fenced” (bounded with glosses) rather than borrowed freely.
- Transliteration vs. Paraphrase Decisions — a working table of concrete choices.
- Ranked List of Highest-Risk Ambiguities — the letter’s most consequential translation decision points, in priority order for Phase 2 review routing.
A full-book coverage note (Section E) confirms every chapter of 1 Timothy has been reviewed, including chapters/verses that contribute no new terminology beyond what is already documented.
A. Doctrine Vocabulary Matrix
| Doctrine | Key Source Terms | Available French Term(s) | Weaknesses / Collision Risk | Recommended Strategy |
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| Sound Doctrine versus False Teaching | sound doctrine, teach a different doctrine, myths/endless genealogies, deceitful spirits/teachings of demons, sick with disputes, seared conscience, forbidding marriage/foods, falsely called knowledge | saine doctrine / saines paroles; enseigner une autre doctrine; fables et généalogies sans fin; esprits séducteurs / doctrines de démons; malade de disputes; conscience marquée au fer rouge; connaissance faussement ainsi nommée | ”Doctrine” in secular French skews toward political/military ideology (“doctrine militaire”); demonology language risks either secular dismissal or charismatic over-literalization; “gnose” is historically loaded but useful | Retain the medical (sain/malade) and light/darkness metaphors literally — French supports both idiomatically. Gloss “doctrine” on first use as “enseignement apostolique.” Frame demonic-teaching language with balanced pastoral notes, neither sensationalized nor rationalized away. |
| Qualifications for Church Leadership (Elders and Deacons) | overseer/bishop, office of overseer, elder, council of elders, deacon, husband of one wife, women/wives of deacons, above reproach, sober-minded, self-controlled, recent convert | évêque; charge d’évêque; ancien; collège des anciens; diacre; mari d’une seule femme; les femmes / leurs femmes; irréprochable; sobre; réfléchi/modéré; nouveau converti | Single most collision-dense doctrine in the book: “évêque” imports the Catholic diocesan office; “diacre” imports the sacramental order; “presbytère” is a false-friend trap for πρεσβυτέριον; “novice” is a false-friend trap for νεόφυτος; “les femmes” (3:11) sits on a live ecclesiological fork | Mandatory glosses at every occurrence of évêque/diacre distinguishing Paul’s local-congregation office from later sacramental orders. NEVER “prêtre,” “presbytère,” or “novice.” Document (not silently resolve) the 3:11 women/deaconesses fork with an explicit translator note. Human theologian review at every occurrence per the term registry. |
| Christ as the One Mediator | mediator, ransom, Savior, good confession, appearing, King of kings/Lord of lords, immortality, unapproachable light | médiateur; rançon; Sauveur; belle/bonne confession; avènement/manifestation; Roi des rois et Seigneur des seigneurs; immortalité; lumière inaccessible | ”Médiateur” directly confronts Marian/saints-mediation piety (“Médiatrice de toutes les grâces”); “rançon” carries kidnapping-news register; “Sauveur” defaults to Jesus-only in reader intuition though 1 Timothy applies σωτήρ to the Father too; “épiphanie” is a forbidden false-friend for ἐπιφάνεια | Preserve Paul’s double “one” (un seul Dieu, un seul médiateur) without softening or overstating into anti-Catholic polemic. Frame “rançon” against its costliness, not its crime-drama connotation. Explicitly teach the Father-as-Savior texts (1:1; 2:3; 4:10) alongside the Christ-as-Savior confession. NEVER “épiphanie.” |
| Public Worship and Prayer | prayer types (four terms), holy hands, modest attire, quietness/exercising authority, saved through childbearing | prières, supplications, intercessions, actions de grâce; mains saintes/pures; tenue, pudeur, maîtrise de soi; tranquillité / exercer une autorité (illégitime); sauvée par la maternité | ἔντευξις overlaps the baseline’s “intercession des saints” concern in a new corporate-prayer context; modesty language reads as culturally dated/patriarchal to secular French readers; αὐθεντέω and 2:15 are among the most exegetically contested verses in the NT with real complementarian/egalitarian consequences | Reinforce that 2:1’s intercession is congregational prayer for rulers, not saintly intercession. Frame modesty teaching around humility/non-ostentation, the passage’s own contrast term. Mandatory human theologian review and documented interpretive-tradition disclosure for 2:11-12 and 2:15 — do not silently resolve either into one tradition without a note. |
| The Church as Pillar of Truth | pillar and foundation of truth, household of God, mystery of the faith, mystery of godliness | colonne et appui de la vérité; maison de Dieu; mystère de la foi; mystère de la piété | 3:15 sits exactly on the Catholic-magisterium vs. Protestant sola-scriptura fault line (church as truth’s support vs. truth’s source); “le mystère de la foi” is the verbatim Catholic Mass acclamation (mysterium fidei) — near-certain misreading for Catholic/lapsed-Catholic readers | Frame the church consistently as upholding and displaying revealed truth, not generating or authoritatively defining it. Mandatory teaching note at every occurrence of “mystère de la foi” (3:9) and “mystère de la piété” (3:16) distinguishing the Pauline sense from the liturgical acclamation. |
| Godliness and Contentment | godliness, mystery of godliness, contentment, love of money/not lover of money, root of all evils, godliness as means of gain, trained for godliness | piété; mystère de la piété; contentement; amour de l’argent / non attaché à l’argent; racine de toute sorte de maux; considérant la piété comme une source de profit; s’entraîner à la piété | ”Piété” over-narrows to devotional PRACTICES (prières, images pieuses) rather than Paul’s comprehensive God-oriented life-category; the qualitative “πάντων τῶν κακῶν” crux at 6:10 is routinely over-quoted in absolute form; 6:5’s prosperity-gospel critique is textually explicit and live in francophone Africa/metropolitan France charismatic circles | Gloss “piété” at first occurrence as covering belief AND conduct across all of life, not devotional acts alone. Render 6:10 qualitatively (“une racine de toute sorte de maux”), never absolutely. Frame the 6:5 critique pastorally, without naming contemporary movements. |
| Care for Widows and the Household of Faith | widow/widow indeed, denied the faith, enrolled (widows’ list), double honor, rebuke (gentle vs. public), two or three witnesses | veuve / veuve authentique; a renié la foi; être inscrite; double honneur; réprimander [durement] / réprimander publiquement; deux ou trois témoins | The ὄντως-qualifier’s restrictive force is easily lost in French, either over-obligating the church to all widows or under-emphasizing family responsibility; “double honneur” alone sounds merely ceremonial, losing the 5:18 financial-support sense; two rebuke-verbs must not collapse into one French verb | Preserve “authentique/véritablement veuve” as a load-bearing qualifier, not decorative. Explicitly connect “double honneur” to 5:18’s wage-citation in teaching material. Keep the two rebuke registers (private/gentle vs. public/formal) lexically distinct. |
| Guarding the Deposit of Faith | guard the deposit, falsely called knowledge, laying on of hands, spiritual gift (singular), fight the good fight | le dépôt; connaissance faussement ainsi nommée; l’imposition des mains; le don; combattre le bon combat | ”Le dépôt” (depositum fidei) is genuinely shared ecumenical vocabulary but risks importing an institutional-Magisterium framing onto a text addressed to an individual minister; “imposition des mains” is the exact Catholic ordination-rite term, risking ex-opere-operato sacramental import | Calibrate rather than avoid the depositum fidei parallel: acknowledge the shared vocabulary explicitly, then clarify the individual (Timothy-personal) referent. Frame “imposition des mains” as commissioning/recognition of a Spirit-given gift already present (4:14), not the conferral of grace itself. |
B. Missing Vocabulary vs. Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods
B.1 Missing Vocabulary (lexical gaps requiring periphrasis)
French has no single lexeme for several Greek terms in 1 Timothy; these require multi-word renderings, and consistency of that periphrasis across occurrences is itself a risk-management task:
| Greek concept | Gap | Chosen periphrasis | Consistency requirement |
|---|---|---|---|
| δίλογος (double-tongued) | No single French adjective for “saying contradictory things to different people” | sans duplicité de langage | Use identically at every future occurrence in this curriculum family |
| μιᾶς γυναικὸς ἄνδρα (husband of one wife) | No French idiom captures the literal ambiguity (fidelity character trait vs. marital-history rule) in one phrase | mari d’une seule femme | Preserve literal, non-resolving form; do not add interpretive words like “actuellement” or “jamais divorcé” |
| αὐτάρκεια (contentment/self-sufficiency) | French “contentement” is closer but lacks the Stoic self-sufficiency resonance | contentement (+ teaching note on Stoic background) | Supplement with a teaching-note gloss, not a lexical change |
| νομίζοντες πορισμὸν εἶναι τὴν εὐσέβειαν (godliness as means of gain) | No single French verb-phrase | considérant la piété comme une source de profit | Full periphrasis retained across all uses |
| ὄντως χήρα (widow indeed) | French has no single adjective distinguishing “genuinely/actually” widowed in the technical support-eligibility sense | veuve authentique / véritablement veuve | Must appear whenever ὄντως modifies χήρα (5:3,5,16); never drop the qualifier |
| τὴν παραθήκην φύλαξον (guard the deposit) | “Dépôt” alone is adequate lexically but under-specifies the individual-custodial sense without added phrasing | garder le dépôt [qui t’a été confié] | Bracketed expansion recommended at first occurrence |
| σεμνότης applied across 4 distinct referents (2:2 civic life; 3:4 household; 3:8, 3:11 personal character) | “Dignité” is available but must do double duty across register-different contexts | dignité (uniform) | Use one word consistently rather than varying by context, to preserve the intra-book thread Paul is weaving |
B.2 Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods (French words carrying competing prior senses that must be fenced with glosses)
These are not lexical gaps but the opposite problem: available French words are already “occupied” by strong prior associations (Catholic sacramental/liturgical vocabulary, secular-political vocabulary, or contemporary social-ethics vocabulary) that will color the reader’s first impression before any gloss is applied.
| French term | Competing occupant sense | Fencing strategy |
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| évêque | Roman Catholic/Orthodox diocesan bishop (multi-parish, sacramental, apostolic-succession office) | Mandatory bracketed gloss every occurrence: “évêque (l’ancien/le responsable local, à distinguer de l’évêque diocésain catholique)“ |
| diacre | Catholic sacramental diaconate order (ordained by a bishop) | Teaching-note gloss distinguishing Paul’s congregational service office from the later sacramental order; do not gloss inline at every verse (register would become clinical), but flag at first occurrence per document |
| presbytère | Parish priest’s rectory (a BUILDING) — false friend for πρεσβυτέριον | Absolute prohibition; use “collège des anciens” exclusively |
| novice | Catholic monastic/religious-order postulant — false friend for νεόφυτος | Absolute prohibition; use “nouveau converti” exclusively |
| le mystère de la foi | The Roman Catholic Mass’s post-consecration acclamation (mysterium fidei) | Mandatory teaching note at 3:9 and thematically-linked 3:16 distinguishing Paul’s revealed-doctrine sense from the liturgical acclamation |
| médiateur | Not itself occupied by a French false-friend, but its THEOLOGICAL FIELD is occupied by Marian/saints mediation piety (“Médiatrice de toutes les grâces,” intercession des saints) | Teach 2:5 in explicit, respectful contrast with (not polemic against) that piety tradition; preserve the double “one” (εἷς…εἷς) |
| imposition des mains | The precise term for the Catholic ordination sacramental gesture | Frame as commissioning/public recognition of a gift already given by the Spirit (4:14), not the sacramental conferral of grace itself |
| le dépôt | Catholic depositum fidei, magisterially guarded doctrine | Acknowledge the parallel explicitly, then re-anchor to the INDIVIDUAL, Timothy-personal referent of 6:20 |
| piété | Devotional practices (la piété populaire, images pieuses) rather than a comprehensive life-category | First-occurrence gloss: “la piété : une disposition et une conduite tournées vers Dieu dans tous les domaines de la vie, non seulement des pratiques de dévotion” |
| élection (baseline, recurring risk) | Political/democratic elections | Not newly introduced by 1 Timothy but relevant wherever calling/election language recurs in teaching cross-references; reuse baseline fencing |
| soumission (children in submission, 3:4) | Contemporary domestic-authority/abuse-awareness discourse | Explicit note anchoring the referent to PARENTAL authority over minor children only, not conjugal submission |
| conscience | Secular Enlightenment “autonomous individual conscience” | Anchor as gospel-informed, not self-referential; consistent with baseline’s general caution about secular flattening of theological vocabulary |
| doctrine | Political/military/ideological “doctrine” (doctrine militaire, doctrine Monroe) | Gloss at first occurrence as “enseignement apostolique reçu, non une idéologie” |
| rançon | Contemporary kidnapping/hostage-crisis news register | Frame toward costliness of payment, with explicit teaching note distinguishing from criminal register |
| esclaves / joug | Colonial and post-colonial slavery history in francophone contexts | Explicit historical-contextualization note: pastoral instruction for believers within an existing first-century institution, not a divine endorsement of slavery |
C. Transliteration vs. Paraphrase Decisions
| Term | Decision | Rationale |
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| ἐπίσκοπος (overseer) | Neither pure transliteration nor pure paraphrase — established loanword “évêque” retained, heavily glossed | No French alternative avoids the Catholic-office association entirely (“surveillant” is available but sounds clinical/security-guard register and breaks continuity with established French Bible tradition, which does use “évêque” at this verse in most major translations). Retain the standard term; manage risk by mandatory gloss, not by lexical substitution. |
| Ἀββά-style Aramaic/Hebrew terms | Not present in 1 Timothy — no new transliteration decision required (contrast Romans’ “Abba”). | Noted for completeness; no action needed. |
| μυστήριον (mystery) | Paraphrase-resistant; retain “mystère” as transliteration-adjacent loanword, fence with teaching note | ”Mystère” is the historically correct and stable rendering across all French Bible traditions (Segond, TOB, Jérusalem); the risk is not the word itself but its adjacent liturgical phrase. Do not invent an alternative like “vérité cachée” that would break consistency with the wider French Bible tradition and other Pauline mystery-texts. |
| αὐθεντέω | Paraphrase required; no transliteration option; interpretive choice must be flagged, not resolved by fiat | A NT hapax legomenon with no French loanword tradition; French must choose among competing paraphrases (“exercer une autorité,” “dominer,” “usurper l’autorité”). This curriculum documents the choice and the rejected alternative per the Ambiguity Handling protocol of the AI Translation Requirements. |
| ἐπιφάνεια (appearing) | Paraphrase mandatory; transliteration explicitly forbidden | ”Épiphanie” exists as a French loanword but is fixed to a specific liturgical feast (January 6, Christ’s first manifestation to the Magi) — using it here would misdate the event described (Christ’s second coming). Use “avènement” or “manifestation” instead. |
| νεόφυτος (recent convert) | Paraphrase mandatory; transliteration/false-cognate explicitly forbidden | ”Novice” exists as a French word derived from the same conceptual field (newness/probation) but has migrated to mean specifically a Catholic monastic postulant. Use “nouveau converti.” |
| πρεσβυτέριον (council of elders) | Paraphrase mandatory; near-homograph “presbytère” explicitly forbidden | ”Presbytère” underwent semantic drift in French to mean the priest’s residence (a building). Use “collège des anciens.” |
| παραθήκη (deposit) | Loanword-adjacent term “dépôt” retained with calibration note, not paraphrased away | ”Dépôt” is the correct commercial/legal register match and the existing ecumenical theological vocabulary point (depositum fidei); paraphrasing it away (e.g., “ce qui t’a été confié” alone) would sacrifice a valuable shared cross-tradition term. Retain, but calibrate the institutional/individual referent explicitly. |
| Χριστός, Ἰησοῦς | Established transliteration retained exactly per baseline | Christ = Christ; Jésus = Jésus. No new decision; reuse Romans baseline exactly. |
| ἀντίλυτρον (ransom) | Paraphrase via existing French word “rançon,” register managed by teaching note rather than avoided | No better French alternative exists; “rançon” is lexically correct. The kidnapping-register risk is managed through framing, not through lexical substitution. |
D. Ranked List of Highest-Risk Ambiguities
Ranked by combined severity of (a) doctrinal consequence if mismanaged and (b) probability of the risk materializing given ordinary French reader assumptions. This ranking drives Phase 2 Step 16-17 review-priority routing, consistent with the baseline’s Critical/High/Medium/Low escalation framework.
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1 Timothy 2:15 — “saved through childbearing” (διὰ τῆς τεκνογονίας σωθήσεται). Highest risk: a plain-sense French rendering appears to contradict the letter’s own soteriology (2:4-6) and the entire Romans-baseline doctrine of salvation by grace through faith apart from works. Mandatory human theologian review; translator note required regardless of interpretive choice.
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1 Timothy 2:11-12 — ἡσυχία / αὐθεντέω (quietness / exercising authority). Highest risk alongside #1: no neutral French rendering exists; the choice directly determines eligibility interpretation for the offices described in the core passage (3:1-13) and carries live complementarian/egalitarian consequences. Mandatory human theologian review; must document, not silently resolve, the interpretive fork.
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1 Timothy 3:11 — γυναῖκας (women/wives of deacons). Critical ecclesiological fork (deaconesses vs. deacons’ wives) sitting inside the core passage itself; “leurs femmes” resolves the ambiguity the Greek deliberately (or at least genuinely) leaves open. Mandatory human theologian review.
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1 Timothy 3:2 — ἐπίσκοπος rendered “évêque”. Near-certain misreading (not merely possible) for any French reader, Catholic or secular, who will default to the diocesan-bishop picture; sits at the heart of the core passage. Mandatory gloss at every occurrence; human theologian review.
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1 Timothy 3:9 — “mystère de la foi”. Near-certain collision with the Catholic Mass’s post-consecration acclamation; high probability of activation for the target French readership (practicing/lapsed Catholic majority per the register profile). Mandatory teaching note at every occurrence.
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1 Timothy 3:15 — “colonne et appui de la vérité”. Sits precisely on the historic Catholic-Protestant ecclesiological fault line (church as truth’s support vs. truth’s magisterial source); within the same chapter as the core passage’s leadership qualifications, compounding its teaching weight. Human theologian review required.
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1 Timothy 2:5 — μεσίτης (“médiateur”). Direct textual confrontation with a living, majority-tradition devotional practice (Marian/saints mediation) in the target culture; must be taught with pastoral precision, not polemic. Human theologian review.
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1 Timothy 6:10 — “root of all evils” absolute vs. qualitative rendering. High public-quotation frequency multiplies the consequence of an overclaiming French rendering; native-speaker and theologian review recommended given the verse’s visibility.
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1 Timothy 3:8, 3:12 — “diacre”. High-probability importation of the Catholic sacramental diaconate order onto Paul’s congregational service office; compounds risk #4 within the same core passage.
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1 Timothy 5:3-16 — ὄντως χήρα qualifier. High risk of practical, not merely theoretical, consequence: mistranslation directly changes how a French-reading congregation might apply the church’s financial-support obligations.
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1 Timothy 6:20 — “le dépôt”. Genuinely useful shared ecumenical vocabulary but carries institutional-Magisterium import risk that could shift 6:20’s individual-minister address into a Church-authority statement.
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1 Timothy 4:14 / 5:22 — “imposition des mains”. Positive shared vocabulary with the Catholic ordination rite, but risk of importing sacramental ex-opere-operato efficacy into a commissioning/recognition text.
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1 Timothy 4:1 — “esprits séducteurs / doctrines de démons”. Bidirectional risk: secular dismissal on one side, charismatic over-literalization on the other; requires balanced framing rather than a single lexical fix.
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1 Timothy 2:9 — modesty/dress instructions. Contemporary cultural-sensitivity risk (patriarchy critique) rather than a denominational-collision risk; requires careful pastoral framing keyed to the passage’s own ostentation contrast.
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1 Timothy 6:1-2 — “esclaves sous le joug”. Contemporary ethical-sensitivity risk tied to francophone colonial/post-colonial history; requires explicit historical contextualization, not lexical substitution (no better French term exists for δοῦλος in this context).
E. Full-Book Coverage Confirmation
All six chapters of 1 Timothy have been reviewed for this gap analysis, consistent with the PRD’s full-book coverage mandate:
- Chapter 1 (greeting, Paul’s charge to Timothy, the false teachers, Paul’s testimony, the “sound doctrine” and “mystery” vocabulary): fully covered above (Sound Doctrine matrix row; missing-vocabulary and crowded-neighborhood entries for “doctrine,” “fables et généalogies,” “livré à Satan”).
- Chapter 2 (prayer for all people, the one Mediator, worship instructions, women’s conduct): fully covered above (Public Worship and Prayer, Christ as the One Mediator matrix rows; ranked risks #1, #2, #7, #14).
- Chapter 3 (the core passage, 3:1-13, plus the Church-as-pillar/Christ-hymn material of 3:14-16): fully covered above and constitutes the density center of this analysis (Qualifications for Church Leadership, Church as Pillar of Truth matrix rows; ranked risks #3-6, #9, #12).
- Chapter 4 (false asceticism, demonic teachings, training for godliness, the gift and laying on of hands): fully covered above (Sound Doctrine, Godliness, Guarding the Deposit matrix rows; ranked risks #12, #13).
- Chapter 5 (widows, elders, honor and discipline, household relations): fully covered above (Care for Widows and the Household of Faith matrix row; ranked risks #10; also the elder age-vs-office dual-sense disambiguation, and the two-verb rebuke distinction).
- Chapter 6 (slaves, false teachers and gain, godliness and contentment, the charge to Timothy, closing doxology and warnings): fully covered above (Godliness and Contentment, Guarding the Deposit of Faith matrix rows; ranked risks #8, #11, #15; also King of kings/Lord of lords, immortality, and unapproachable-light doxological vocabulary).
No chapter or major pericope of 1 Timothy has been silently omitted from this gap analysis. Sections of narrower lexical novelty (e.g., the closing personal/procedural material of 6:17-19 on rich believers, and the doxological material of 6:15-16) are addressed within the Godliness and Contentment, and Christ as the One Mediator, matrix rows respectively, having been assessed as contributing consistency requirements rather than new collision-class risks beyond what is already documented above.
End of 06 Linguistic Gap Analysis. This document informs Phase 2 translation memory updates and must be read alongside 08_core_glossary.md, the updated bible_term_registry.json, and the Romans baseline package, which remains authoritative and unmodified by this analysis.