Linguistic Gap Analysis: Amos (English → French)

1. Purpose and Method

This document performs the PRD Phase 1 gap analysis for the Amos curriculum: it identifies where French vocabulary is missing (no ready lexical equivalent), where French vocabulary is crowded (an available term already carries strong competing associations that must be fenced off), and where a transliteration vs. paraphrase decision is required. It closes with a ranked list of the curriculum’s highest-risk ambiguities for Phase 2 routing.

This analysis assumes the entire book of Amos (chapters 1–9) as scope, with Amos 5:18–24 as the theological anchor passage, per the five assigned doctrines:

1. Social Justice and Care for the Poor
2. Judgment on Empty Religious Ritual
3. God’s Sovereignty over All Nations
4. The Day of the Lord as Judgment
5. The Restoration of David’s Fallen Tent (Messianic Hope)

All findings are consistent with, and extend, 08_core_glossary.md and the Amos additions already staged in bible_term_registry.json. No baseline Romans term is altered.

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2. Doctrine Vocabulary Matrix

Doctrine	Available French Terms	Weaknesses of Available Terms	Recommended Strategy
Social Justice and Care for the Poor	justice (mishpat), droiture (tsedaqah), le pauvre / le nécessiteux, opprimer, balances fausses, orgueil, vaches de Basan, maisons d’ivoire, la porte (de la ville)	(a) “justice” collides with the baseline’s Romans rendering of δικαιοσύνη (“righteousness”), a different Hebrew/Greek source word entirely — same French surface form, two source terms, two doctrines. (b) “le pauvre” in contemporary French social-policy discourse (la lutte contre la pauvreté, les minima sociaux) reads as a secular welfare-state category, stripping Amos’s covenantal claim that oppressing the poor is an offense against God himself (2:7; 5:12). (c) “la porte” without a gloss reads as pure architecture, losing the ancient civic-legal-forum sense.	Fence “justice” (mishpat) explicitly from “droiture” (tsedaqah) in every teaching note so the 5:7/5:24 word-pair is never collapsed. Pair “le pauvre / le nécessiteux” with an explanatory frame (“l’oppression du pauvre est un péché contre Dieu, pas seulement un problème social”) on first major occurrence per lesson. Gloss “la porte de la ville” as the ancient tribunal site at first use.
Judgment on Empty Religious Ritual	holocauste(s), offrande(s), sacrifice(s) d’actions de grâces, fête(s), assemblée(s) solennelle(s), chercher, Sikkuth/Kiyyun, par la vie de ton dieu	(a) “holocauste” is semantically correct and traditional but in post-1945 French is first read as the Shoah — a severe, unavoidable cultural collision requiring mandatory footnoting, not mere caution. (b) “offrande” doubles as the modern word for a church collection basket, risking a domesticated, low-stakes reading. (c) “fête” and “assemblée solennelle” sound neutrally festive/civic in French unless explicitly tied back to Leviticus 23’s divinely prescribed calendar. (d) “chercher” (darash) is a common, low-intensity verb in ordinary French and does not by itself convey exclusive, urgent covenant inquiry.	Mandatory footnote on first occurrence of “holocauste(s)” in every lesson file, every time the term recurs across chapters (5:22 and any cross-reference), not just once curriculum-wide — recurrence in new lesson contexts resets reader exposure. Teach the offering/feast cluster (#12-16 in glossary) as a set, explicitly naming them as God’s own prescribed worship now rejected only for its severance from justice — this is the doctrinal point, not incidental cultic detail. Intensify “chercher” contextually (“chercher l’Éternel” as fixed collocation, never generic “chercher” alone).
God’s Sovereignty over All Nations	l’Éternel, le Seigneur/l’Éternel, transgression, rugir, les nations, les Éthiopiens, Israël, Dieu	(a) “l’Éternel” as the Tetragrammaton rendering is textually correct (Segond-aligned) but must be fenced from the baseline’s “Seigneur” (NT κύριος confessional title) so students moving between Romans and Amos material do not conflate the covenant name with the NT Lordship confession. (b) “les nations” is the safer choice already selected over “païens,” but risk remains that French readers import the NT missiological “unreached nations” framing rather than Amos’s forensic “nations under moral accountability” framing. (c) “les Éthiopiens” risks anachronistic collapse onto the modern nation-state of Ethiopia.	Maintain strict lexical separation: “l’Éternel” / “le Seigneur, l’Éternel” for YHWH/Adonai YHWH; reserve “Seigneur” (unqualified) for any NT cross-reference material only, and flag any co-teaching of Romans and Amos for this distinction explicitly. Frame “les nations” each time with the forensic frame (“les nations jugées par Dieu pour leurs crimes historiques,” not “les peuples non atteints par l’Évangile”). Add a one-line geographic/historical note wherever “les Éthiopiens” (9:7) appears.
The Day of the Lord as Judgment	le jour de l’Éternel, Malheur à…, rugir, fil à plomb, renoncer à (cela) / revenir sur sa décision, corbeille de fruits d’été, une famine… d’entendre les paroles de l’Éternel	(a) “le jour de l’Éternel” is grammatically ordinary French (“jour” = calendar day) and risks being heard as calendrically neutral, losing its climactic, proper-noun force — this is the single highest-stakes rendering in the whole curriculum since it anchors the core passage (5:18-20). (b) “Malheur à…” can be misheard in casual register as sympathetic (“quel malheur,” “pauvre lui”) rather than judicial pronouncement. (c) “renoncer à / revenir sur sa décision” for God’s relenting (nacham) must never drift toward Segond’s literal “se repentit,” which would imply God sinned. (d) the qayits/qets pun (8:1-2) is untranslatable; French has no equivalent near-homophone pair for “summer fruit” and “end.”	Treat 5:18-20 as a fixed, verbatim-consistent anchor rendering across every lesson file in the curriculum (parallel to the baseline’s mandated consistency for Romans 1:16-17, 8:28, 10:9-10). Teach “le jour de l’Éternel” with an explicit contrast note: Israel expected vindication, Amos redefines it as judgment on Israel itself — this reversal is the doctrinal payload and must never be left implicit. Forbid “se repentit” for God in every occurrence of #22; use only the approved circumlocution. Mandatory translator note on the qayits/qets wordplay explaining the lost pun every time 8:1-2 recurs.
The Restoration of David’s Fallen Tent (Messianic Hope)	le reste, la tente de David, planter… ne seront plus jamais arrachés, David, vision	(a) “la tente de David” risks confusion with the unrelated modern French festival vocabulary for Souccot (Feast of Booths, les cabanes/les tentes de la fête), an incidental but real homographic distraction. (b) “le reste” in ordinary French can carry a diminished, negative “leftover” sense (ce qui reste, les restes = table scraps) rather than a positive remnant-theology term. (c) the permanence clause (“ne seront plus jamais arrachés”) must be defended against softening into a conditional promise — French subordinate-clause habits can inadvertently introduce a conditional register if not carefully rendered as an absolute future.	Always co-teach “la tente de David” (9:11-12) with its Acts 15:16-17 citation and the baseline’s “descendance de David” / “Messie” entries so the Davidic-messianic line is visible across Testaments. Explicitly frame “le reste” as hope-bearing preservation, not table scraps, on first occurrence per lesson. Keep the “ne…plus jamais” absolute negation construction intact in every recurrence of the planting/restoration promise — do not paraphrase into a softer “pourront demeurer” construction.

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3. Missing Vocabulary (True Gaps)

These are concepts for which French has no single ready lexical equivalent, requiring compound phrases, calques, or explanatory strategies rather than a one-word substitution:

Concept	Why It’s a Gap	Strategy Adopted
Famine of the word (8:11-12)	French has no fixed idiom for “withdrawal of prophetic revelation as judgment”; “famine” alone reads as literal food scarcity.	Compound phrase “une famine… d’entendre les paroles de l’Éternel,” always with an explicit teaching gloss distinguishing this from information/media scarcity.
Qayits/qets wordplay (8:1-2)	No French homophone pair maps onto “summer fruit”/“the end.”	Render the image plainly (“corbeille de fruits d’été”) and supply a mandatory translator’s note reconstructing the lost Hebrew pun for the reader; treat the note as doctrinally load-bearing, not optional trivia.
Mishpat/tsedaqah word-pair (5:7, 5:24)	French “justice” cannot simultaneously carry two distinct source-word senses the way Hebrew’s fixed word-pair does; there is no single French pair with the same idiomatic weight as the Hebrew doublet.	Deliberate two-term fence: “justice” (mishpat) / “droiture” (tsedaqah), documented as a mandatory cross-curriculum divergence from the Romans baseline’s “justice” = righteousness (δικαιοσύνη) mapping.
Nacham as applied to God (7:3, 7:6)	French “repentir” is unavailable (forbidden) for a non-sinning divine subject, but there is no single alternate French verb carrying exactly “genuinely reconsider a stated judgment without moral fault.”	Circumlocution: “renoncer à (cela) / revenir sur sa décision,” always with a theologian’s note explaining why “se repentir” is excluded.
Solemn assembly / atzarah (5:21)	No single French word names this specific closing-convocation cultic technical term; “assemblée” alone is too generic.	Qualifying compound: “assemblée(s) solennelle(s),” parallel to the baseline’s own qualifying-gloss convention for “communion fraternelle.”
Ga’own’s dual valence (6:8 vs. positive uses elsewhere)	French has separate words for the positive and negative senses (majesté/gloire vs. orgueil), but the same Hebrew word covers both; translators must actively disambiguate by context every time, since no single French word spans both senses the way the Hebrew root does.	Context-driven binary choice; “orgueil” mandated for 6:8 specifically, with an explicit note that this is a deliberately negative sense-selection, not a general dictionary equivalence.

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4. Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods (Fencing Required)

These are cases where French does have a ready word, but that word is already “occupied” by a strong competing association that must be actively fenced off in teaching material:

French Term	Competing Occupant of the Semantic Space	Fencing Strategy
holocauste(s)	The Shoah (dominant, almost exclusive modern referent since 1945)	Mandatory footnote at every recurrence (not just first use in the whole curriculum, but first use per lesson file) clarifying the ancient cultic sacrificial referent; never use the term without contextual anchoring to Leviticus-style sacrificial vocabulary. Never juxtapose casually with unrelated modern usage.
justice	(1) Baseline Romans “righteousness” (δικαιοσύνη, forensic salvation status); (2) French civil/criminal justice system (la justice, le système judiciaire)	Fence from both: explicitly distinguish Amos’s mishpat-justice (social/legal right order, vindication of the powerless) from Romans’ imputed-righteousness “justice,” and from the modern courts. A dedicated cross-curriculum glossary note is required for any reviewer working across Romans and Amos material.
les saints, l’Église (baseline terms recurring if any NT cross-references are drawn into Amos lessons, e.g., Acts 15 citation of 9:11-12)	Baseline’s own documented High-risk collisions (canonized-intercessor reading; institutional-Church reading)	If Amos lessons cite Acts 15:16-17, re-apply the baseline’s existing fencing rules for “Église” and any incidental “saints” language rather than re-deriving new rules — inherit, do not duplicate.
le reste	Ordinary French “leftovers/scraps” (les restes du repas)	Always pair with a positive modifier or explanatory clause (“le reste fidèle,” “ce noyau préservé par grâce”) to prevent a diminished reading.
l’Éternel / le Seigneur	Baseline’s “Seigneur” = NT κύριος confessional title (Romans 10:9, “Jésus est Seigneur”)	Absolute lexical separation required: never use bare “le Seigneur” alone for YHWH in Amos material without the “l’Éternel” pairing; never let students infer that Amos’s “Seigneur” and Romans’ “Seigneur” are interchangeable without the explicit cross-curriculum note already flagged in the term registry.
fête(s) / assemblée(s) solennelle(s)	Purely secular/civic festival vocabulary (fête nationale, assemblée générale)	Always anchor to the Leviticus 23 festival calendar in the surrounding teaching text so the divine origin of the rejected rituals is not lost.
naziréen	Near-homograph “Nazaréen” (of Nazareth; historically applied to Jesus in older French Gospel/Acts translations)	Mandatory clarifying gloss on first occurrence distinguishing the Numbers 6 consecrated-vow office from the geographic epithet for Jesus.
par la vie de ton dieu (lowercase “dieu”)	Baseline’s capitalized “Dieu” (the true God)	Preserve the capitalization distinction rigorously in every proof and edited output; a copy-editing slip capitalizing this “dieu” would silently erase the idolatry-critique point of 8:14.
les nations	Baseline caution on “païens” (pejorative drift) transferred by proximity; also risk of NT missiological “unreached peoples” framing	Reserve “païens” only for explicit idol-worship emphasis contexts (paired with Sikkuth/Kiyyun material); default to “les nations” everywhere else, framed forensically (nations under judgment), not missiologically.

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5. Transliteration vs. Paraphrase Decisions

Term	Decision	Rationale
YHWH (יְהוָה)	Paraphrase via established convention: “l’Éternel”	Not transliterated; French Bible tradition (Segond) has a fixed, theologically established rendering. Transliterating as “Yahvé” (a viable BJ-tradition alternative) is noted but not adopted, to keep this curriculum’s register internally consistent and to avoid a third divine-name form alongside “l’Éternel” and “Dieu.”
Sikkuth / Kiyyun (סִכּוּת / כִּיּוּן)	Transliterate, with mandatory footnote	No French cultic or mythological equivalent exists; these are proper names of obscure astral deities. Silently harmonizing to the LXX “Moloch” (Acts 7:43) reading would overwrite the Masoretic text without disclosure. Transliteration + footnote is the only responsible option.
Nazir (נָזִיר)	Paraphrase via established convention: “naziréen”	Established French Bible-translation term already exists (unlike Sikkuth/Kiyyun); no need to invent a transliteration, but the near-homograph collision with “Nazaréen” requires a clarifying gloss rather than a rendering change.
Abba-type intimacy terms	N/A for Amos	No Amos equivalent exists; noted here only to confirm no analogous untranslated-term decision is required for this book, unlike the baseline’s “Abba” retention in Romans.
Qayits / Qets pun (קָיִץ / קֵץ)	Paraphrase the image, transliterate nothing, footnote the wordplay	The Hebrew sound-play cannot be reproduced by any French near-homophone pair for “summer fruit” and “end”; transliterating the Hebrew words themselves would not communicate anything to a French reader. The correct strategy is a plain-sense image translation plus a mandatory explanatory note, not transliteration.
Cush / Cushites (כּוּשׁ)	Paraphrase via established convention, with named alternative: “les Éthiopiens” (Segond) vs. “les Koushites” (TOB/BJ)	Both are established French Bible-tradition options (not novel transliterations); flagged for reviewer/theologian choice, with a mandatory geographic-historical note either way to prevent modern-Ethiopia anachronism.
Anakh / plumb line (אֲנָךְ)	Paraphrase: “fil à plomb”	Standard, well-established French technical term for the actual physical tool; no transliteration warranted, but a brief modern-reader gloss on the construction-trade metaphor is recommended since fewer readers today have hands-on trade familiarity.
Idolatrous oath formula (8:14)	Paraphrase: “par la vie de ton dieu”	A natural French oath-formula equivalent exists; transliterating the Hebrew “Eloheikha” would communicate nothing and is unnecessary since this is a common noun (a local deity), not a proper name.
Sukkat David (סֻכַּת דָּוִיד)	Paraphrase via established convention: “la tente de David”	Fixed, traditional French Bible rendering (Segond and others); transliterating “sukkat” would sever the passage from its established French intertextual link to Acts 15’s citation, which itself uses “tente” in French Bible tradition.

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6. Ranked List of Highest-Risk Ambiguities for This Curriculum

Ranked by combined doctrinal weight, likelihood of misreading by the target audience (practicing/lapsed Catholics, small Reformed/evangelical minority, secular biblically-unchurched readers — per the baseline’s stated audience profile), and centrality to the core passage (5:18-24):

1. “Le jour de l’Éternel” read as a calendrically neutral day, not a climactic proper-noun judgment event. (Core passage, 5:18-20.) Highest risk: this is the thesis phrase of the entire curriculum, structurally parallel to the baseline’s mandated Romans 1:16-17 consistency requirement, and French grammar offers the reader an easy, wrong “ordinary day” escape hatch. Mandatory human theologian review at every occurrence.

2. “Holocauste(s)” triggering an immediate Shoah association (5:22, core passage). Second-highest risk because it occurs inside the anchor passage itself and because the collision is not a subtle drift but the dominant modern meaning of the French word. Mandatory theologian + native-speaker cultural review; footnote non-negotiable.

3. Collapse of the mishpat/tsedaqah word-pair into a single French “justice” (5:7, 5:24, core passage). Destroys Amos’s central rhetorical structure (justice “rolling down like waters,” righteousness “like an ever-flowing stream”) if both Hebrew terms are rendered identically. Mandatory theologian sign-off; cross-curriculum documentation required given the Romans “justice” = righteousness precedent.

4. “L’Éternel” / “le Seigneur” conflated with the baseline’s NT “Seigneur” (κύριος, Romans 10:9 confession). Cross-curriculum risk: a student who has studied Romans first may import the NT confessional Lordship register into Amos’s covenant-name usage, or vice versa. Flag for native speaker + theologian review in any co-taught or sequenced curriculum context.

5. “Se repentir” (forbidden) creeping into the rendering of God’s relenting (nacham, 7:3, 7:6). Risk of implying divine moral fault. Lower probability than #1-4 because the forbidden term is explicitly named, but consequence severity if it slips through (implying God sinned) is extremely high. Mandatory automated forbidden-term check plus theologian spot-review.

6. “Les nations” drifting into an NT missiological “unreached peoples” frame rather than Amos’s forensic “nations under judgment” frame (chs. 1-2; 9:7,9). Risk is subtle (no wrong word chosen, but wrong frame absorbed) and affects the Sovereignty-over-Nations doctrine’s core argument that God judges Gentile nations by the same moral standard as Israel. Native speaker review recommended at chapter 1-2 oracle sequence.

7. “Le reste” read as diminished leftovers rather than hope-bearing remnant theology (5:15; 9:8-12). Risk is moderate; French idiom pulls toward the negative sense by default. Consequential for the Restoration doctrine’s emotional and theological arc from judgment to hope. Native speaker review.

8. “La tente de David” confused with modern Souccot/Feast-of-Booths vocabulary, or paraphrased toward “maison/royaume de David” and losing the humility imagery (9:11-12). Directly affects the Messianic Hope doctrine and its NT linkage via Acts 15. Mandatory theologian review, co-taught with the Acts 15 citation.

9. Qayits/qets pun (8:1-2) taught as decorative wordplay rather than the vision’s central theological claim (“Israel is ripe/at its end”). If the mandatory translator’s note is omitted or treated as optional trivia rather than doctrinal content, the entire point of the vision is lost in French. Native speaker + curriculum-writer review to ensure the note is retained in every derived lesson.

10. “Le pauvre” absorbed into secular French socio-economic policy discourse, losing the covenantal claim that oppressing the poor defiles God’s own name (2:7). Affects the Social Justice doctrine’s theological (not merely ethical) framing throughout the book. Native speaker review; recommend explicit doctrinal framing sentence at first occurrence per lesson.

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7. Chapter-by-Chapter Coverage Confirmation

All nine chapters of Amos were reviewed for this gap analysis. Coverage status:

Chapter	New Gaps/Fencing Identified	Status
1	Nations/goyim framing (#27); “roar” (#17); transgression/pesha oracle formula (#8)	Reviewed — addressed above
2	Nazirite near-homograph risk (#23); Law/Torah rejection (#9); poor/oppress cluster (#10-11)	Reviewed — addressed above
3	”Roar” continuation (#17); Sovereign LORD title density (#2)	Reviewed — no new gaps beyond #2/#17 above
4	Cows of Bashan (#33); shuv/“return” refrain (#19); offering vocabulary anticipates ch. 5	Reviewed — addressed above
5 (core passage 5:18-24)	Day of the LORD (#3); Woe (#4); mishpat/tsedaqah pair (#5-6); burnt/grain/peace offerings (#12-14); feast/solemn assembly (#15-16); seek (#20); gate (#34); Sikkuth/Kiyyun (#35)	Reviewed in depth — highest-density chapter, addressed above
6	Pride/ga’own dual valence (#31); ivory houses (#32); woe (#4) continuation	Reviewed — addressed above
7	Plumb line (#21); relent/nacham (#22); prophet/navi vocation tension (#39)	Reviewed — addressed above
8	Qayits/qets wordplay (#24); false scales (#25); famine of the word (#26); idolatrous oath (#36)	Reviewed — addressed above, highest concentration of High-risk new terms outside ch. 5
9	Cushites (#28); tent of David (#29); planting/restoration (#30); remnant (#18)	Reviewed — addressed above, doctrinally climactic chapter for Messianic Hope

No chapter was found to contribute zero new terms or doctrinal weight; every chapter is explicitly accounted for above.

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8. Summary Recommendation for Phase 2 Routing

• Items ranked #1–5 above require mandatory human theologian review at every occurrence, matching baseline doctrine_risk_registry.json Critical/High routing conventions.
• Items ranked #6–8 require native speaker review, consistent with the baseline’s Medium-risk routing.
• Item #9 requires a structural safeguard (ensuring translator notes survive downstream lesson generation) rather than a linguistic fix per se.
• Item #10 requires native speaker review with a mandated doctrinal framing sentence, not a term change.
• All findings in this document should be carried forward into Phase 1 Step 9 (doctrine risk registry extension) and Phase 1 Step 11 (AI translation requirements extension) without contradiction to the baseline Romans Language Package.