Linguistic Gap Analysis
Linguistic Gap Analysis — Mark (English → Nepali)
Purpose
This analysis identifies where Nepali’s existing religious and general vocabulary is adequate, inadequate, or actively dangerous for translating the Gospel of Mark, with the core passage (Mark 10:35–45, the Ransom saying) as the theological anchor and every chapter of Mark 1–16 in scope. It extends the baseline Romans translation_memory.json / bible_term_registry.json without contradicting any established rendering, and it supplies the linguistic reasoning that underlies the term choices already recorded in 08_core_glossary.md and the updated bible_term_registry.json entries for Mark-specific vocabulary. Where this document and those artifacts differ in emphasis, the glossary and registry govern; this document explains why those choices were made and flags residual risk for Phase 2 reviewers.
Four outputs are produced below, per the Phase 1 Step 8 mandate:
- A doctrine vocabulary matrix for the eight curriculum doctrines.
- A crowded-neighborhood vs missing-vocabulary map, with fencing recommendations.
- A transliteration-vs-paraphrase decision log.
- A ranked list of Mark’s highest-risk ambiguities.
A. Doctrine Vocabulary Matrix
| Doctrine | Available Nepali term(s) | Weaknesses of available terms | Recommended strategy |
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| Jesus as the Suffering Servant and Son of God | सेवक (servant) + दुःखभोग (suffering) + परमेश्वरका पुत्र (baseline, reused) | No existing single Nepali collocation joins “suffering” and “servant” into one recognized messianic title, unlike the Hebrew ebed YHWH tradition. सेवक alone drifts toward bhakti guru-seva or caste-duty service; दुःखभोग alone can read as generic misfortune (also resonant with dukkha, the first Noble Truth of Buddhism, which frames suffering as a metaphysical condition to be escaped rather than a voluntary redemptive act). | Coin the compound दुःखभोगी सेवक (“suffering servant”) only with an explanit Isaiah 53 gloss on first use; never let सेवक stand alone as a title without anchoring to Christ’s voluntary self-giving (10:45). Keep परमेश्वरका पुत्र exactly as in baseline — do not merge the two titles lexically; teach them as two converging strands (humiliation + deity) that meet at the cross. |
| The Kingdom of God Breaking In | परमेश्वरको राज्य (baseline, reused); नजिक आएको छ (“has drawn near,” 1:15) | परमेश्वरको राज्य is doctrinally safe (established), but Nepali verb aspect for “has drawn near” can default to a completed/arrived sense (आएको छ, perfect aspect) OR a still-approaching sense (नजिकिँदै छ, progressive), and Mark’s “already/not yet” inaugurated-but-not-consummated tension has no single fixed Nepali aspectual convention. | Use आएको छ (perfect: the reign has now broken in, decisively, in Christ’s person) for 1:15, but supplement teaching material with explicit explanation that the kingdom is present in Jesus yet awaits future consummation (9:1; 13:26); do not resolve the tension by softening the verb toward “will come soon” (future only) or “has fully arrived” (present only, no future dimension). |
| Faith and Discipleship amid Fear | विश्वास (baseline, reused) / अविश्वास / डर, भय | No lexical gap; risk is exegetical, not lexical. भय can carry a positive “reverential awe” sense in Nepali religious register (as in ईश्वर-भय, “fear of God” in a devotional sense) which could blunt Mark’s frequently negative, faith-opposing use of φόβος (4:41; 5:36; 9:32). | Retain डर/भय but require context-sensitive glossing distinguishing (a) negative fear that faith must displace (4:40; 5:36) from (b) any awe-response to a theophany (9:6; 16:8, where terror before the divine is itself narratively significant and should not be flattened into ordinary anxiety). |
| The Necessity of the Cross | क्रूस (transliterated loanword, safe); बहनु (to bear/carry) | क्रूस carries no indigenous religious collision (a genuine linguistic gap filled cleanly by loanword adoption), but आवश्यकता (“necessity”) applied to suffering risks reading as fatalistic destiny (compare भाग्य/नियति, already forbidden elsewhere in the baseline for calling/election) rather than the Father’s redemptive purpose. | Frame necessity language (8:31, “must suffer,” Greek δεῖ) with परमेश्वरको इच्छा/योजनाअनुसार (“according to God’s will/plan”) rather than a bare word for fate; never let अनिवार्य (“unavoidable/mandatory”) stand alone without that divine-purpose anchor. |
| Servanthood versus Worldly Greatness | सेवक / दास (both new for Mark, see glossary) vs महान् (great) / शासन गर्नु, हुकुम चलाउनु (lord it over) | This is the single most crowded semantic neighborhood in the curriculum (see Section B): सेवक/सेवा collides with bhakti guru-seva and Hindu temple-seva merit-devotion; दास collides with Nepal’s own documented history of caste-linked bonded servitude (kamaiya, abolished only in the 20th century). | Present सेवक/दास consistently as Jesus’ own voluntary self-description (10:43-45), never a status imposed on others or a merit-generating devotional practice; keep शासन गर्नु/हुकुम चलाउनु/अधिकार जनाउँछन् (10:42) strictly separated from प्रभु-rooted vocabulary so worldly domination and Christ’s Lordship never share a lexical root. |
| The Messianic Secret | रहस्य (“mystery/secret,” baseline-adjacent, new for Mark); चुप लाग्नु/नबताउनु (silence commands) | रहस्य is the standard Nepali term for “mystery” but in Nepal’s Tantric Hindu and Vajrayana Buddhist traditions (both practiced in the Kathmandu Valley) रहस्य denotes esoteric teaching permanently restricted to initiates — the opposite of Mark’s pattern, where the secret is provisional and destined for eventual proclamation (4:22; 9:9; 13:10). | Coin मसीहत्वको रहस्य (“the secret of his Messiahship”) as the doctrine’s proper name, and pair every silence-command occurrence (1:34,44; 3:12; 5:43; 7:36; 8:30; 9:9) with explicit teaching-note language that this secrecy is temporary and strategic, tied to the cross’s proper timing, not a permanently sealed esoteric teaching. |
| Jesus’ Authority over Sickness, Sin, and Nature | अधिकार (authority, new for Mark) + रोग (sickness) + पाप (sin, reused) + प्रकृति (nature) | अधिकार and रोग/पाप are safe. प्रकृति (“nature”) is a serious, previously unflagged crowded-neighborhood risk: in Nepali philosophical/religious register प्रकृति is the technical Samkhya term for primal cosmic matter, paired with पुरुष (spirit/consciousness) as one of Hindu philosophy’s two fundamental principles — an abstract metaphysical category entirely foreign to Mark’s concrete narrative sense (wind, sea, storm). | Avoid the abstract noun प्रकृति when describing Jesus’ authority over creation; use concrete descriptive language instead — बतास र समुद्र (wind and sea, 4:39-41), पानीमाथि हिँड्नु (walking on water, 6:48-51) — reserving any abstract summary label for teacher’s-guide material only, with an explicit note that this is not the Samkhya प्रकृति/पुरुष category. |
| The Ransom for Many | फिरौती (ransom, new for Mark; the theological center of the core passage) | फिरौती itself is a genuine, well-chosen linguistic gap-fill: a doctrinally neutral, economically concrete Nepali word for a hostage/captive ransom, with no inherited religious connotation. The risk is not the noun itself but the surrounding sentence architecture: Nepali’s …को सट्टामा (in place of) construction and का निम्ति (for the sake of / on behalf of) construction must both appear correctly to preserve the substitutionary AND representative dimensions of 10:45 and 14:24 together. | Retain फिरौती exactly; ensure translators building 10:45 and 14:24 sentences test both prepositional constructions (सट्टामा for exchange-logic; का निम्ति/निम्ति for “for the benefit of”) against a back-translation check before finalizing, since collapsing either construction weakens the doctrine of penal/representative substitution. |
B. Missing Vocabulary vs. Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods
B.1 Crowded neighborhoods requiring active fencing
These are cases where Nepali has a plausible-looking word, but that word is already heavily occupied by a competing Hindu, Buddhist, Tantric, or caste-historical concept, so it must be actively “fenced” — restricted in scope, paired with an anchor word, or avoided outright — to prevent syncretistic bleed.
| Nepali root | Competing occupant(s) of the semantic space | Mark passages affected | Fencing strategy |
|---|---|---|---|
| आत्मा | Holy Spirit (पवित्र आत्मा); unclean/evil spirits (अशुद्ध आत्मा); Hindu Vedantic ātman (the eternal individual self, identical with Brahman) | 1:8,10,12,23; 3:29; 5:2-13; 7:25; 9:17-29; 13:11 | आत्मा must never stand alone as a noun for “soul/self” (use ज्यान instead, per glossary); every occurrence must carry its qualifying adjective (पवित्र / अशुद्ध / दुष्ट) with zero exceptions — the bare noun is never doctrinally safe in isolation. |
| गुरु | Hindu guru-shishya paramparā; Tibetan Buddhist guru-lama lineage tradition (relevant to Nepal’s Himalayan communities) | 4:38; 9:5; 10:17,20,35,51; 12:14,19,32 | Retain गुरु as the natural address (rejecting an artificial substitute would sound stilted and evasive), but require every teaching unit using this title to reiterate Christ’s unique, ultimate authority (अधिकार) rather than one-teacher-among-a-lineage status. |
| सेवक / सेवा | Bhakti guru-seva; temple seva as meritorious religious offering; caste-linked service obligation | 9:35; 10:43,45 | Never let सेवा/सेवक appear as a general ethical ideal detached from 10:45’s specific cross-shaped model; anchor every occurrence to Jesus’ own voluntary example, never to merit accumulation or social duty. |
| दास | Nepal’s own legally-abolished caste-linked bonded servitude and slavery (formal abolition only 1924/1926; kamaiya bonded labor persisted into the late 20th century) | 10:44 | Present exclusively as Jesus’ deliberate self-description, never as a description of any human social relationship the curriculum endorses; add an explicit note distinguishing this from any commentary on historical Nepali servitude. |
| रहस्य | Tantric Hindu/Vajrayana Buddhist esoteric teaching restricted permanently to initiates | 4:11; (broader Messianic Secret motif throughout 1:34-9:9) | Fence with explicit “provisional, not permanent” framing (see doctrine matrix above); never describe रहस्य as something the reader/hearer must be specially initiated to access. |
| करुणा (avoided) | Buddhist brahmavihāra (the four immeasurables): a detached, universally-cultivated meditative virtue | 1:41; 6:34; 8:2 | Already resolved in glossary by preferring दया; retained here as a fencing note so no Phase 2 translator reintroduces करुणा for stylistic variation. |
| शक्ति (avoided) | Newar Tantric Shakta tradition; the living-goddess (Kumari) cult, concretely practiced in the Kathmandu Valley | 5:30; 6:2,5,14; 9:1 | Already resolved by baseline (सामर्थ्य only); reaffirmed for every Markan miracle-power passage. |
| नरक (gloss-only) | Cyclical, karma-driven hell-realm within Hindu/Buddhist rebirth cosmology (a temporary, not final, state) | 9:43-48 | गेहेन्ना (transliteration) is primary; नरक may appear only as a one-time explanatory gloss, never as the standing term. |
| पूजाहारी (in प्रधान पूजाहारी) | Hindu pujari (temple priest performing puja) | 14:53-65 | Never used alone; always बound to प्रधान (chief) and explicit Sanhedrin/high-priest institutional context. |
| प्रकृति (new flag, this document) | Samkhya cosmological principle (primal matter, paired with पुरुष) | 4:35-41; 6:45-52 | See doctrine matrix above — avoid the abstract noun; use concrete nouns (बतास, समुद्र, पानी) instead. |
| सति/स्मृति-adjacent watchfulness vocabulary (avoided) | Buddhist meditative mindfulness (sati/smṛti) as a self-cultivated mental discipline | 13:33-37 | जागा रहनु/सतर्क रहनु (already in glossary) reaffirmed; never substitute भावना/स्मृति-rooted “mindfulness” vocabulary, since Mark’s watchfulness is hope directed at Christ’s return, not a self-generated meditative state. |
| तपस्या/तप (avoided) | Hindu/Buddhist ascetic merit-generating self-discipline | 1:4,15 (repentance); 8:34 (self-denial) | पश्चाताप and आफूलाई इन्कार गर्नु (already in glossary) reaffirmed; these must never be glossed using तप-rooted vocabulary even for stylistic explanation. |
B.2 Genuine missing vocabulary (true gaps, not crowded neighborhoods)
These are concepts for which Nepali has no existing lexical item at all — crowded or otherwise — requiring either loanword transliteration, compound coinage, or paraphrase-with-gloss.
| Concept | Gap type | Resolution adopted |
|---|---|---|
| λύτρον (ransom, 10:45) | No existing Nepali religious term for substitutionary payment; the closest word (फिरौती) exists only in the secular hostage/kidnapping domain | Import फिरौती from its secular domain deliberately — a rare case where a non-religious gap-fill is safer than any available religious vocabulary, precisely because it carries no prior doctrinal baggage. |
| ὁ υἱὸς τοῦ ἀνθρώπου (Son of Man) | No existing fixed Nepali collocation combining “human being” + “son” as a titular phrase | Compound coinage मानिसका पुत्र, deliberately parallel in structure to परमेश्वरका पुत्र but never interchangeable with it. |
| ἐγώ εἰμι (divine self-declaration echo, 6:50; 14:62) | Nepali म हुँ is grammatically ordinary; no way to encode the Exodus 3:14/Isaiah 43:10 echo lexically | Cannot be solved at the word level — resolved paratextually (translator/teacher’s note only, not in-text alteration), a genuine “vocabulary gap that vocabulary cannot fix.” |
| βδέλυγμα τῆς ἐρημώσεως (abomination of desolation) | No existing single Nepali term for this Danielic technical phrase | Compound coinage विनाशको घिनलाग्दो थोक with mandatory Daniel-background gloss. |
| Suffering Servant as a fused title | No existing Nepali collocation joins दुःखभोग and सेवक into a recognized title | Coin दुःखभोगी सेवक (see doctrine matrix, Section A) with mandatory Isaiah 53 gloss. |
| ”The Messianic Secret” as a scholarly/doctrinal label | Not a biblical-text phrase but a doctrine name needed for curriculum headings | Coin मसीहत्वको रहस्य for curriculum/teaching-material use only (heading-level, not verse-level translation). |
| Aramaic performative speech (Talitha cumi, Eloi Eloi lama sabachthani, Corban, Abba) | No Nepali equivalent exists or should exist — these are foreign-language quotations within the Greek text itself | Preserve as transliteration + gloss in every case (see Section C); this is the correct linguistic move, not a failure to translate. |
C. Transliteration vs. Paraphrase Decision Log
| Term/phrase | Decision | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| Ταλιθα κουμ (Talitha cumi, 5:41) | Transliterate (तालिथा कूमी) + gloss | Foreign-language quotation within the source text itself; Mark preserves the Aramaic deliberately for narrative vividness. Paraphrasing would erase a feature of the inspired text. |
| Ἐλωΐ Ἐλωΐ λαμὰ σαβαχθανί (15:34) | Transliterate (एलोई, एलोई, लमा साबखथानी) + gloss + Psalm 22:1 cross-reference | Same rationale; additionally this is a direct Scripture quotation (Ps 22:1) and must be recognizable as fulfillment, not paraphrased into plain Nepali speech. |
| אַבָּא / Ἀββά (Abba, 14:36) | Transliterate (अब्बा) + gloss, per baseline precedent | Preserves the filial intimacy already established as untranslatable-by-substitution in the Romans baseline (Rom 8:15). |
| κορβάν (Corban, 7:11) | Transliterate (कोरबान) + gloss | Technical legal/ritual vow term with no Nepali equivalent; a one-time gloss suffices since the term does not recur. |
| Βεελζεβούλ (Beelzebul, 3:22) | Transliterate (बेल्जबूल) + gloss (“prince of demons”) | Proper noun/title; paraphrase would lose its identity as a specific accusation rather than a generic insult. |
| λύτρον (ransom, 10:45) | Paraphrase via existing secular word (फिरौती), not transliterated, not coined | A workable native word already exists in a non-religious domain; transliterating a Greek loanword here would be unnecessary and would forfeit फिरौती’s advantage of built-in comprehensibility. |
| ὁ υἱὸς τοῦ ἀνθρώπου (Son of Man) | Compound-coin (मानिसका पुत्र), not transliterated | A calque/compound built from existing Nepali words communicates the title’s sense; transliterating the Greek/Aramaic original (bar enash) would be opaque and unprecedented in Nepali Bible tradition. |
| βδέλυγμα τῆς ἐρημώσεως (abomination of desolation, 13:14) | Compound-coin + gloss (विनाशको घिनलाग्दो थोक), not transliterated | No proper-noun character to transliterate; this is a descriptive Danielic phrase requiring sense-for-sense compound construction. |
| Γολγοθᾶ / Γεθσημανί / λεγιών (Golgotha, Gethsemane, Legion) | Transliterate (गल्गथा, गेतसमनी, लेजियन), no gloss required beyond brief context | Proper nouns (place names, a self-given demonic name); established convention across Bible translation practice generally. |
| ῥαββί / διδάσκαλος (Rabbi/Teacher) | Paraphrase using existing word (गुरु), not transliterated | Transliterating “Rabbi” (रब्बी) would be foreign and distancing for a Nepali audience with no synagogue-culture referent; गुरु is the natural, warm equivalent, fenced per Section B.1. |
| Ὡσαννά (Hosanna, 11:9-10) | Transliterate (होसाना) + gloss connecting to उद्धार root | Liturgical acclamation with no natural Nepali equivalent; transliteration is standard across Bible translation tradition and allows the उद्धार-root connection to be taught explicitly. |
| πάσχα (Passover) | Paraphrase/hybrid (निस्तार-चाड / पास्का) | Neither pure transliteration nor pure paraphrase alone suffices without an Exodus-background gloss; a hybrid allows both the festival’s proper name and its “deliverance” meaning to surface. |
| Φαρισαῖοι / γραμματεῖς / Σαδδουκαῖοι (Pharisees/Scribes/Sadducees) | Transliterate (फरिसी / शास्त्री / सदुकी) | Established convention; group identity is proper-noun-like and resists paraphrase without becoming clumsy (“a member of a Jewish religious-political party that…”). |
D. Ranked List of the Highest-Risk Ambiguities for Mark
Ranked by combined doctrinal severity and likelihood of mistranslation, with special weight given to the core passage (Mark 10:35–45).
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λύτρον / ransom (10:45) — Critical. The theological center of the core passage. Any drift toward मुक्ति/मोक्ष-rooted vocabulary (even indirectly, through a poorly chosen paraphrase) would import Hindu liberation-from-rebirth theology into the single verse the whole curriculum is built around.
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διάκονος/δοῦλος — servant/slave vocabulary in the core passage (10:43-45) — Critical. सेवक/दास sit inside Nepal’s most heavily occupied semantic neighborhood (bhakti seva, caste-linked bonded servitude). A single unanchored occurrence could be read as endorsing either devotional merit-service or historical caste servitude rather than Christ’s voluntary self-lowering.
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κατακυριεύω vs. κύριος — “lord it over” vs. “Lord” (10:42) — High, core-passage-adjacent. These two ideas sit only one verse apart in the source text (10:42 vs. implicit throughout). Any lexical bleed between them (a प्रभु-rooted verb used for worldly domination) would blur the sharp moral contrast Jesus is drawing.
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αἷμα… διαθήκης / ransom-blood theology (14:24) vs. 10:45 — Critical. These two atonement statements must read as a single coherent theology (substitution + covenant-inauguration). Divergent prepositional handling (ἀντί vs. ὑπέρ) rendered inconsistently in Nepali would fracture the doctrine into two unrelated ideas.
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ὁ υἱὸς τοῦ ἀνθρώπου vs. υἱὸς θεοῦ — Son of Man vs. Son of God — Critical. Structurally near-identical Nepali phrases (मानिसका पुत्र / परमेश्वरका पुत्र) risk conflation by inattentive readers/hearers despite being theologically distinct titles (humiliation-and-vindication vs. eternal deity).
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πνεῦμα throughout — Holy Spirit / unclean spirit / soul — Critical. The single root आत्मा governs three theologically incompatible referents across Mark; a single dropped adjective (पवित्र or अशुद्ध) anywhere in the text changes the doctrine of the sentence entirely.
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μυστήριον τῆς βασιλείας / the Messianic Secret motif — High. रहस्य’s occupation by Tantric/Vajrayana initiatory-secrecy connotation risks recasting Jesus’ strategic silence as a permanent esoteric teaching reserved for initiates rather than a temporary, historically-bounded delay of proclamation.
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σῴζω — save/heal dual sense (5:23,28,34; 10:52) — High. Mark’s deliberate ambiguity (is she healed, or saved?) cannot be carried by one Nepali word; splitting it into निको हुनु/बचाउनु (physical) vs. उद्धार गर्नु (soteriological) is necessary but forecloses the wordplay Mark intends readers to notice, especially in 10:52 immediately before the Jerusalem approach.
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ἐγώ εἰμι — the invisible divine-name echo (6:50; 14:62) — Critical for 14:62 specifically. म हुँ carries none of the Exodus 3:14 resonance without an explicit teaching note; without that note, the high priest’s blasphemy charge in 14:64 becomes inexplicable to a Nepali reader.
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κοινός / ritual purity vs. moral defilement (7:2-23) — High. अशुद्ध/भ्रष्ट directly intersects Nepal’s own historically codified caste-purity law (the Muluki Ain, in force until 1963). A softened or vague rendering here would blunt one of Mark’s most socially explosive teachings for precisely this audience.
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σπλαγχνίζομαι — compassion (1:41; 6:34; 8:2) — High. दया vs. करुणा: an inattentive translator substituting करुणा for stylistic variation would silently import Buddhist brahmavihāra detachment into passages depicting God’s visceral, personal mercy.
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παραδίδωμι — betray/hand over (14:10,18,21,41) — High. A single Nepali verb choice must carry both Judas’s culpable treachery and the Father’s sovereign purpose without collapsing either sense; Nepali’s aspect/voice system makes this harder to hold together in one clause than the Greek.
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βασιλεία τοῦ θεοῦ — kingdom “already/not yet” aspect (1:15; 9:1; 13:26) — Medium-High. Verb-aspect choice around “has come near” risks resolving Mark’s deliberately unresolved inaugurated eschatology into either pure-present or pure-future readings.
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μετεμορφώθη — Transfiguration (9:2-8) — High. रूपान्तरण भयो risks being read through the lens of Hindu avatar-form-change or Tantric Buddhist wrathful/peaceful deity-transformation iconography (both visually and conceptually present in Kathmandu Valley religious culture) unless explicitly taught as an unveiling of pre-existing glory, not an assumption of new form.
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γρηγορέω — watchfulness (13:33-37) — Medium. Risk of conflation with Buddhist meditative mindfulness (sati/smṛti) is lower in severity than items above but pervasive across the entire Olivet Discourse and its associated parables, warranting sustained vigilance across many verses rather than a single high-stakes verse.
Summary and Forward Recommendation
No entry in this analysis contradicts the baseline Romans Language Package; every reused baseline term (उद्धार, धार्मिकता, अनुग्रह, परमेश्वर, पवित्र आत्मा, प्रभु, परमेश्वरका पुत्र, पुनरुत्थान, करार, व्यवस्था, पाप, विश्वास, दया-adjacent baseline concepts, etc.) is carried forward unchanged. The gaps and crowded neighborhoods identified here — especially the आत्मा multi-sense collision, the सेवक/दास caste-and-bhakti neighborhood, the रहस्य Tantric-secrecy neighborhood, and the newly flagged प्रकृति Samkhya-cosmology risk — should be treated as the primary fencing targets for the Core Glossary (Step/Document 08) and the updated Bible Term Registry, and should receive explicit escalation-to-theologian routing in the forthcoming Doctrine Risk Registry update for Mark, consistent with the baseline’s Critical/High routing conventions.