Linguistic Gap Analysis
06 — Linguistic Gap Analysis: Philemon (English → Manipuri)
Purpose and Scope
This document executes PRD Phase 1 Step 8 for the Philemon curriculum. It builds directly on 08_core_glossary.md, assets/bible_term_registry.json, and the Romans baseline Language Package, and does not contradict any established rendering. Its purpose is to name, in one place, where Manipuri (Meiteilon, Bengali script) vocabulary is missing (no attested term exists and a compound/paraphrase must be engineered), where it is crowded (a native term exists but is already occupied by Sanamahi or Gaudiya Vaishnava meaning and must be fenced with explicit teaching), where transliteration is the safer strategy than translation, and — because Philemon is a single, dense, rhetorically compressed chapter — which ambiguities carry the highest doctrinal risk for Phase 2 segment translation.
Philemon is one chapter, 25 verses. Full-book coverage is therefore full-letter coverage. All three structural sections are reviewed below:
- Opening (1:1–7): salutation, thanksgiving, commendation of Philemon’s love and faith — reviewed, contributes new vocabulary (see §1.2, §1.3).
- Core passage (1:8–21): the appeal itself — reviewed, theological anchor, contributes the majority of Critical/High items.
- Closing (1:22–25): travel plans, greetings, benediction — reviewed, contributes low-risk vocabulary plus one notable exception (πνεῦμα in 1:25, see §2.2) and one grace-wordplay item (χαρίζομαι in 1:22).
No chapter or section is silently omitted; the closing in particular is explicitly noted here as reviewed and judged to introduce no new Critical or High risk items beyond those already carried from the core passage.
Section 1: Doctrine Vocabulary Matrix
For each of the five assigned doctrines, this matrix records the available Manipuri vocabulary (reused-baseline and newly proposed), its specific weaknesses, and the recommended handling strategy for Phase 2.
1.1 Forgiveness and Reconciliation
| Available Manipuri terms | Weakness | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|
| ঐগী ঋণ ওইনা ইকপা (ellogaō, “charge to my account”) | No existing single Manipuri word covers the legal-ledger sense; the compound is provisional and reads as commercial/financial unless anchored | Retain compound; mandatory cross-reference footnote to baseline’s imputed_righteousness doctrine (পীথোকপা অচুম্বা চৎনবিরাক) every occurrence, per registry. Theologian review, every occurrence. |
| অন্যায় তৌরবা (wronged) | Adequate; general moral-wrong vocabulary, no collision | Use as recorded; low fencing need. |
| ঋণ থাবা / হেন্না ঋণ লৈবা / হন্দোকপা (owe / owe besides / repay) | Adequate literal debt vocabulary; risk is only that readers may hear these as purely financial and miss the theological weight Paul places on them | Native-speaker review to confirm the debt-vocabulary cluster reads coherently as one legal transaction across 1:18-19. |
| খায়দোকপা / ফাওবা / মপুং ফাবা ফংবা (separated / forever / have in full) | Adequate; no collision | Standard low-risk handling. |
| তেংবাং মপুনা পীগনি (charizomai, “grant as a favor”) | Weak: this is a provisional paraphrase of a wordplay on χάρις; a Manipuri reader will not hear “grace” echoed here the way a Greek reader hears χαρίζομαι echo χάρις | Preserve as a translator-commentary note (“thematic echo of grace”) rather than expect the pun to survive in the running text; do not force an artificial pun into the translation itself. |
Doctrine-level gap: Manipuri has no settled forensic/legal-crediting register for theology (the same gap the baseline already flagged for imputed_righteousness in Romans). Philemon 1:18-19 is this curriculum’s second and most concrete embodiment of that same gap — here enacted between two named individuals rather than stated abstractly — and should be taught as a worked example of the doctrine, not a separate concept.
1.2 Christian Brotherhood across Social Status
| Available Manipuri terms | Weakness | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|
| ইচিল-ইনাউ (brother) | Crowded, not missing: the term is a live, concrete Meitei kinship category bound to yumnak (clan) descent and real inheritance claims. Applying it to a former slave is not a “neutral” translation choice — it is itself a doctrinal claim the source text is making | Retain ইচিল-ইনাউ (no softer alternative should be substituted); require explicit teaching that Paul is making a deliberate, radical kinship claim, not using a polite courtesy title. Theologian review. |
| ইচেল (sister) | Provisional, unconfirmed for spiritual (non-blood) address | Native-speaker confirmation required before wide deployment; flag in Phase 2. |
| নুংশিবা / নুংশিরাবা (love / beloved) | Crowded: same root is the ordinary word for prema-bhakti’s Krishna-Radha romantic-devotional love as enacted in Ras Lila | Retain (no alternative exists that is not itself worse); mandatory fencing note distinguishing covenantal, self-giving, action-expressed ἀγάπη from romantic-devotional longing, every occurrence in the core passage. Theologian review. |
| থাজবগী লোইনবা / লোইনবা মীওই (partner / partnership of faith) | Adequate but must be checked against a “conditional welcome” misreading | Native-speaker review to confirm the compound reads as full equal-partner status, not qualified tolerance. |
| থবক লোইনবা / লান্মী লোইনবা (fellow worker / fellow soldier) | Adequate metaphors; low risk | Standard handling. |
| যুমদা লেপ্পা কলিসিয়া (house church) | Adequate; must not be pictured as a fixed ritual site | Reuse baseline’s church-vs-temple/sacred-grove fencing language. |
Doctrine-level gap: there is no existing Manipuri register for “spiritual kinship overriding social/legal hierarchy” — Meitei kinship categories are inherently birth- and status-linked. This is a genuine missing-concept gap, not merely a crowded-word problem, and needs to be taught as new content, using the existing kinship words as vehicles under explicit new instruction.
1.3 Slavery and the Gospel’s Transforming Power
| Available Manipuri terms | Weakness | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|
| দাস (slave) | CRITICAL, crowded: দাস is a prestigious, actively used Vaishnava devotional self-designation (dasya-bhava) and a common devotional name-suffix. This is the single highest-collision-risk term in the entire curriculum | Retain দাস for the literal social/legal category (no viable substitute exists); mandatory theologian-reviewed fencing note at every occurrence distinguishing Onesimus’s real, painful, legally-enforced bondage from a devotional honorific. Never allow দাস to be read as praise. |
| অকানবা / কানবা (useless / useful) and কানবা ফংবা (benefit) | Weakness is literary, not doctrinal: the Ὀνήσιμος name-pun cannot be reproduced in Manipuri | Footnote-only strategy; do not attempt to force a Manipuri name-pun. Medium risk, native-speaker review. |
| হাক্চাংগী মতাংদা (flesh, social sense) | New introduction, no baseline precedent; risk that a later Pauline-corpus curriculum could import the “sinful nature” sense of σάρξ into this term by association | Flag explicitly in translator training as this curriculum’s sense only (ordinary social/familial sphere); do not let it silently absorb the sinful-nature sense. |
| থবক তৌবা (minister/serve) | Adequate once সেবা is excluded | Reuse baseline’s forbidden-substitution logic (সেবা is Vaishnava ritual devotional service); no new fencing needed beyond restating the existing rule. |
| মচা / পোকহনবা (spiritual child / begotten) | Weakness: risk of conflation with the baseline’s formal adoption doctrine (মচা ওইনা লৌবা), a different legal-theological category | Native-speaker review to confirm the two are held distinct in running text; teach as related-but-different metaphors (spiritual fatherhood vs. legal adoption). |
Doctrine-level gap: Manipuri has no vocabulary that names “transformed social status without denying the reality of the prior legal status” — the culture’s available categories (দাস as devotional honor, or plain servitude) do not include a term for “was truly a slave, is now truly a brother, both descriptions remain true and named.” This must be built through explicit teaching rather than assumed from any single word.
1.4 Intercession and Appeal on Behalf of Another
| Available Manipuri terms | Weakness | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|
| বন্দী (prisoner, δέσμιος) | Adequate but must be visibly distinguished from দাস despite Paul’s own intentional rhetorical echo between the two | Theologian review; explicit fencing note every occurrence that Paul’s বন্দী-status is voluntary gospel-suffering, not legal bondage, even though the letter plays on the parallel. |
| হায়নবগী মথৌ চাউবা (parrēsia, boldness to command) | Weak: this is a constructed descriptive phrase with no settled precedent; risk of collapsing into general “authority” language and losing the specifically-declined-right sense | Native-speaker/theologian confirmation that the phrase reads as “a right Paul has and sets aside,” not “a right Paul lacks.” Never substitute শক্তি (forbidden). |
| য়াথাং পীবা (epitassō, command) | Adequate; built on baseline’s য়াথাং root | Must remain visibly contrasted with হায়জবা (appeal) in the same verse-pair (1:8-9); flag for consistency check. |
| হায়জবা (parakalō / proseuchē, entreaty / general prayer) | Adequate; baseline already governs context-sensitivity | Reuse baseline rule exactly; confirm which of the two senses (entreaty vs. general prayer) governs each occurrence (1:4, 1:6, 1:9-10, 1:22). |
| থাজরিবা (peithō, confident/persuaded) | Adequate; shares root with থাজবা but context disambiguates | Low risk; monitor that “saving faith” is not accidentally implied in 1:21. |
| ইনবা (hypakoē, interpersonal obedience) | High: must be kept distinct from থাজবগী ইনবা (obedience of faith) yet visibly derived from the same love (ἀγάπη) already described in the letter, not from either compulsion or bhakti-style সেবা | Theologian review; explicit three-way fencing note distinguishing ইনবা here from (a) soteriological obedience of faith, (b) compelled duty, (c) devotional merit-service. |
| লোইনবা বন্দী (fellow prisoner) | Adequate | Low risk. |
Doctrine-level gap: none structurally missing; the primary risk here is not absent vocabulary but under-differentiated vocabulary — several Manipuri terms in this cluster (বন্দী/দাস, ইনবা/থাজবগী ইনবা, হায়জবা’s two senses) sit close enough together that Phase 2 segment translation must actively hold them apart rather than assume context alone will do the work.
1.5 Grace-Motivated Obedience
| Available Manipuri terms | Weakness | Recommended strategy |
|---|---|---|
| নিজমখাদগী (hekousion, voluntary) | High: doctrine-defining positive pole; risk of collapsing into সেবা-adjacent “devoted service” framing if not paired tightly with its negative-pole contrast | Theologian review; must always appear in the same segment as, or with explicit reference to, চেৎনা ইনবা (compulsion) to preserve the ἑκούσιον/ἀνάγκη contrast. |
| চেৎনা ইনবা (anankē, compulsion) | High: negative pole; risk of being softened to “difficulty” rather than “compelled/forced” | Theologian review; same pairing requirement as above. |
| মায়োক্নবা (consent) | Adequate | Low risk. |
| অফবা (good deed) | Adequate | Low risk. |
| মথৌ তাদনা পীবা তেংবাং (grace, reused) | Governs the whole doctrine but is not restated in 1:14 itself | Ensure the curriculum’s teaching notes draw the explicit line from Romans’ грace-vs-bhakti fencing to Philemon 1:14’s voluntary/compulsion contrast, since this is the letter’s practical, relational application of the same grace logic. |
Doctrine-level gap: Manipuri’s available vocabulary for “freely chosen goodness” (নিজমখাদগী) sits directly adjacent to vocabulary for devoted religious service; without the mandatory pairing with its compulsion-contrast, this doctrine is the most likely in the letter to drift toward a bhakti-service reading by simple omission of the negative pole in a given segment.
Section 2: Missing Vocabulary vs. Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods
2.1 Genuinely Missing Vocabulary (no attested Manipuri term; compound/paraphrase engineered)
These concepts have no existing word in Manipuri religious or general vocabulary and required newly constructed descriptive compounds in the glossary. They are missing-concept gaps, not collision risks:
| Concept | Manipuri compound | Why missing |
|---|---|---|
| Legal charge-to-account / imputation (ἐλλογάω) | ঐগী ঋণ ওইনা ইকপা | No forensic-ledger register exists in Manipuri theological vocabulary outside the baseline’s own imputed_righteousness compound; this is its second required instance. |
| Boldness/standing to command, deliberately not exercised (παρρησία) | হায়নবগী মথৌ চাউবা | No single word names “a right held but voluntarily set aside”; Manipuri authority vocabulary names either possession or exercise of authority, not its deliberate non-use. |
| Interpersonal, love-generated (non-soteriological) obedience (ὑπακοή, 1:21) | ইনবা | Manipuri obedience vocabulary defaults either to hierarchical duty-compliance or, in the baseline, to soteriological obedience of faith; a third, love-generated relational-appeal category had to be carved out. |
| Transformed-status-without-erased-history (δοῦλος → ἀδελφός in one person) | No single compound; requires narrative/teaching apparatus across দাস → ইচিল-ইনাউ | This is a theological event, not a lexical item, and cannot be solved by vocabulary alone — flagged for curriculum-writer attention, not just glossary attention. |
| Spiritual fatherhood distinct from legal adoption (τέκνον/ἐγέννησα) | মচা / পোকহনবা | Meitei kinship categories run through birth lineage; a non-legal, non-birth “begetting” metaphor for conversion had no ready native equivalent. |
2.2 Crowded Semantic Neighborhoods Requiring Fencing
These are words that do exist natively, in strong, currently practiced use, and therefore risk importing unwanted meaning by default rather than by translator error. Each requires an explicit “fencing” teaching note distinguishing the biblical sense from the live cultural sense, at every occurrence in the core passage unless otherwise noted:
| Term | Native occupant of the semantic space | Fencing requirement |
|---|---|---|
| দাস (slave) | Vaishnava dasya-bhava devotional self-designation; common name-suffix “Das” | Must be taught as real chattel bondage, never devotional honor — the single highest-priority fencing item in this curriculum. |
| নুংশিবা / নুংশিরাবা (love / beloved) | Prema-bhakti, Krishna-Radha romantic-devotional love (Ras Lila) | Must be taught as covenantal, self-giving, action-expressed love, never romantic-devotional longing. |
| ইচিল-ইনাউ (brother) | Yumnak (clan) lineage kinship with real inheritance obligations | Must be taught as a genuinely extended, non-metaphorical kinship claim — not softened to “close friend,” and not left unexplained as though it were an ordinary courtesy title. |
| হরাওবা (joy) | Root of “Lai Haraoba,” the major Umang Lai festival name (maibi trance-dance “rejoicing of the gods”) | Must be taught as joy in gospel-fruit and love-in-action (1:7), not festival merrymaking or ritual ecstasy. No cleaner native alternative exists; retain per baseline’s parallel treatment of ইনগবা (peace). |
| থাওয়াই (bare, human-spirit sense in 1:25 only) | General spirit/soul category; in Sanamahi belief also names ancestral spirits and Umang Lai nature-deities | This is the one legitimate exception to the baseline’s forbidden-bare-থাওয়াই rule. Must be flagged for translator training so the exception is understood as narrow (Philemon’s own human spirit) and not treated as license to drop অসেংবা elsewhere. |
| থবক তৌবা (minister/serve) vs. forbidden সেবা | Vaishnava ritual devotional service building bhakti standing | Reuse baseline’s existing forbidden-substitution rule; no new native word is at risk here, only the temptation to reach for সেবা as a “more natural”-sounding alternative. |
| হায়নবগী মথৌ চাউবা (boldness to command) | Adjacent to, but must not be confused with, শক্তি (forbidden — maibi trance/oracular power) | Confirm no drift toward শক্তি-adjacent vocabulary in Phase 2 back-translation checks. |
Summary observation: every one of Philemon’s highest-risk terms belongs to the crowded category, not the missing category. Unlike some Romans doctrines (e.g. justification, imputed righteousness) where the difficulty was building a compound from nothing, Philemon’s difficulty is almost entirely that strong, ready-to-hand native words already carry meaning in one of the two live traditions, and the correct choice is nearly always to retain the native word while fencing it explicitly, not to invent an artificial substitute.
Section 3: Transliteration vs. Paraphrase Decisions
| Term | Decision | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| δοῦλος (slave) → দাস | Retain native word (no transliteration, no paraphrase) | Transliterating a Greek loanword here would sound foreign and evasive; a paraphrase (“bound-labor person”) would blur the letter’s own direct social-status vocabulary. The correct strategy is retention-plus-fencing, not avoidance. |
| δέσμιος (prisoner) → বন্দী | Retain native word | Ordinary, unambiguous Manipuri word for captive; no transliteration needed, and no viable paraphrase improves on it. |
| ἐλλογάω (charge to account) → ঐগী ঋণ ওইনা ইকপা | Paraphrase/compound | No single native or transliterable term exists; a descriptive legal-ledger compound is the only option, mirroring the baseline’s own strategy for imputed_righteousness. |
| ἀγάπη (love) → নুংশিবা | Retain native word (not transliteration) | A transliterated “agape” would be unintelligible to the target reading level (Class 8-10) and would forfeit the term’s relational warmth entirely; retention with fencing is preferred over both transliteration and an artificial neologism. |
| παρρησία (boldness to command) → হায়নবগী মথৌ চাউবা | Paraphrase/compound | No single native word captures “a right held but not exercised”; transliteration would be meaningless to readers with no Greek rhetorical-tradition background. |
| Ὀνήσιμος (Onesimus) → অনীষিমস | Transliterate (proper name) | Standard proper-name handling per baseline convention; the meaning (“useful”) is carried instead through translator footnotes at 1:11 and 1:20, not through an invented Manipuri name-pun. |
| Φιλήμων, Ἀπφία, Ἄρχιππος, Παῦλος, Τιμόθεος, and the four closing-greeting names (Mark, Aristarchus, Demas, Luke, Epaphras) | Transliterate | All proper names follow the baseline’s established transliteration convention; none carry doctrinal content requiring paraphrase. Confirm each against a current printed Manipuri Bible edition before finalizing, per the baseline’s own verification standard. |
| Ἀββά-style intimacy terms | N/A in Philemon (no occurrence) | Noted for completeness; the baseline’s আব্বা transliteration precedent does not apply here since Philemon contains no Abba-type Aramaic retention. |
| χαρίζομαι (grant as a favor) → তেংবাং মপুনা পীগনি | Paraphrase, no attempt at pun-reproduction | Transliterating or forcing an artificial Manipuri wordplay on χάρις/χαρίζομαι would produce an unnatural, opaque phrase; the grace-echo is preserved instead in translator commentary, not in the running text. |
| ἄχρηστος/εὔχρηστος, ὀνίνημι (Onesimus name-puns) → অকানবা/কানবা, কানবা ফংবা | Paraphrase, footnote-dependent | Same principle as above: preserve meaning plainly, carry the wordplay’s literary significance through footnotes rather than through forced Manipuri punning. |
| πνεῦμα (human spirit, 1:25) → থাওয়াই (bare) | Retain bare native word, by exception | This is the one context where the baseline’s “never bare থাওয়াই” rule is correctly suspended; transliteration is unnecessary and would be wrong here since this is an ordinary native concept (the human spirit), not a doctrinally sensitive one requiring disambiguation from a competing tradition’s usage. |
General principle for this letter: Philemon’s vocabulary decisions skew strongly toward retention of ordinary Manipuri words with mandatory fencing notes, rather than toward transliteration (reserved for proper names only) or invented neologisms (used only where no compound is avoidable, as with ellogaō). This is the opposite emphasis from, e.g., Romans’ Critical-tier Christological vocabulary, where transliteration-adjacent or newly built compounds (ক্রিস্তো, মীওইগী মহৈ লৌবা) were preferred specifically to avoid crowded native alternatives (অবতার). Philemon’s social/relational vocabulary has no such transliteration escape route — natural Manipuri kinship, love, and status words must be used, and fenced, because the entire doctrinal force of the letter depends on ordinary relational language being stretched to a radical new claim.
Section 4: Ranked List of Highest-Risk Ambiguities
Ranked by combined severity (doctrinal centrality × collision strength × likelihood of default mistranslation), anchored to the core passage (1:8-21):
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δοῦλος → দাস (1:16). The single highest risk in the curriculum. A live, prestigious, currently practiced devotional self-designation (dasya-bhava) sits directly on top of the literal social-status word the letter needs. Default rendering risks either (a) readers hearing a devotional compliment where the text intends real bondage, or (b) the reconciliation’s cost being minimized. Mandatory theologian review, every occurrence, with fencing note.
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ἀγάπη → নুংশিবা, especially in tension with δοῦλος/ἀδελφός (1:9, 1:16). The word carrying the letter’s entire ethical argument is the same word carrying Manipuri Vaishnavism’s central devotional-romantic vocabulary (prema-bhakti, Ras Lila). Because ἀγάπη and δοῦλος interact directly in 1:16 (“no longer as a slave… but… a beloved brother”), a fencing failure on either term compounds the risk on the other.
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ἑκούσιον / ἀνάγκη pairing (1:14). This is the doctrine-defining contrast for Grace-Motivated Obedience. High risk not because either term individually is obscure, but because Phase 2 segment-by-segment processing could translate the two poles in different segments and lose the required paired contrast, silently softening the letter’s central ethical demand into either compelled duty or devotional merit-service.
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ἀδελφός → ইচিল-ইনাউ, singular vocative address to Philemon himself (1:20) as distinct from the corporate “brother” sense elsewhere. Meitei kinship vocabulary’s concrete clan/inheritance associations make this a doctrinally loaded choice, not a polite formula; unconfirmed naturalness for direct singular address raises risk of an unintentionally formal or unintentionally over-familiar register.
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ἐλλογάω → ঐগী ঋণ ওইনা ইকপা (1:18), and its required cross-reference to imputed_righteousness. High doctrinal weight (this is substitutionary logic enacted between two people) combined with a provisional, unconfirmed compound and a real risk that Phase 2 processing treats it as a merely financial idiom if the cross-reference note is dropped.
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δέσμιος (Paul, বন্দী) vs. δοῦλος (Onesimus, দাস) — the letter’s own intentional near-rhyme (1:1, 1:9, 1:16). Paul deliberately plays his chosen bondage against Onesimus’s legal bondage; if translators over-correct by making the two words too similar (to preserve the wordplay) or too different (to avoid confusion), either error damages the letter’s rhetorical structure. Requires explicit translator guidance, not just glossary entries.
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ὑπακοή, interpersonal (1:21) vs. the baseline’s ὑπακοή soteriological (obedience of faith). Same root word, adjacent but non-identical senses, now doubled by this letter’s introduction of a third adjacent concept (compelled duty) and a fourth adjacent risk (bhakti-style সেবা). Four-way disambiguation required in a single short verse.
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παρρησία (1:8), the boldness Paul explicitly does NOT use. Risk is inverted from most terms on this list: the danger is not a collision with a competing tradition’s vocabulary but a simple loss of the passage’s logic — if the compound reads as “Paul lacks authority” rather than “Paul sets authority aside,” the entire rhetorical strategy of the appeal collapses.
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χαρίζομαι (1:22) echo of χάρις. Lower doctrinal stakes than items 1-8, but flagged because the baseline’s own Critical-tier grace fencing (against bhakti-responsive কৃপা) should ideally extend its shadow to this quieter recurrence; risk is that translators treat 1:22 as merely “he hopes to be released” without the grace-echo being noted anywhere for teaching purposes.
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χαρά → হরাওবা (1:7). Lowest-ranked item on this list but retained because হরাওবা’s direct etymological tie to Lai Haraoba (Umang Lai festival) makes it the most “unavoidable” crowded word in the letter — there is no alternative native word for joy, so the fencing note here is purely explanatory rather than a translation-choice problem, but omitting it risks a default festival-merrymaking association at the first emotionally warm moment in the letter.
This analysis extends, and does not contradict, the Romans baseline Language Package or the Philemon-specific 08_core_glossary.md and assets/bible_term_registry.json already produced. All risk tiers and specific renderings cited here match those documents exactly; no new renderings are introduced in this file. Phase 2 processing must load this document alongside the Step 12 AI translation requirements before segment translation begins.