Executive Summary
01 Executive Summary — Acts (English → Mandarin)
Curriculum: Acts 1–28 | Core passage: Acts 2:1–41 (Pentecost) | Destination: Mandarin Chinese (Simplified), CUV 神版 register
Why it matters
Acts is the narrative hinge between the Gospels and the epistles, and it stages — in dramatized, story form rather than didactic argument — nearly every doctrine that the destination culture’s dominant religious substrate (Chinese folk religion, Buddhism, Daoism, Confucianism) offers a superficially similar but theologically incompatible alternative to. Where Romans states doctrine, Acts narrates it: a spirit fills people (Pentecost), a sorcerer tries to buy spiritual power (Simon Magus), a crowd deifies human agents of a miracle (Lystra, Malta), and a movement is condemned to a name — “the Way” — that collides head-on with Daoist vocabulary. Getting these translation decisions right is not a stylistic nicety; it determines whether Mandarin readers encounter the text’s actual claims or unconsciously reassimilate them into mediumship, karma-merit, or divination frameworks already present in their cultural formation.
Key findings
- 101 enforced glossary terms are now recorded in
assets/translation_memory.json: 40 baseline Romans terms reused exactly (God, Jesus, Lord, Holy Spirit, Grace, Righteousness, Justification, Salvation, Sanctification, Resurrection, and 30 others), plus 61 new terms Acts introduces across its full 28 chapters. - 19 Critical-risk and 30 High-risk terms (49 of 101 total, ~49%) require mandatory human theologian review on every occurrence — a higher proportion than the Romans baseline, driven by Acts’ concentration of narrative scenes (Pentecost, Simon Magus, Stephen’s vision, Paul’s conversion, Lystra, Jerusalem Council, Philippian jailer, Areopagus, Malta) that each stage a doctrine at its most concrete and most collision-prone.
- 19 doctrines are tracked in
assets/doctrine_risk_registry.json: 9 Critical, 8 High, 2 Medium, 0 Low — 17 of 19 doctrines (89%) require theologian review; the remaining 2 (Great Commission Fulfilled; Prayer and the Holy Spirit’s Guidance) require native speaker review. No doctrine in this curriculum is automated-review-only. - The single highest-recurring collision risk is personal/relational divine categories being absorbed into impersonal or trance-based Chinese religious categories — the same underlying pattern the Romans baseline already documented for 天/天意/天命, now recurring across “filled with the Holy Spirit” (vs. mediumistic possession), “the Way” (vs. Daoist 道), providence language (vs. 天意/命运/缘分), and casting lots (vs. temple fortune-stick divination, 求签).
Risks
- 被圣灵充满 (filled with the Holy Spirit) and 这道 (the Way) are ranked the two highest-severity ambiguities in the entire curriculum (see
06_linguistic_gap_analysis.md§5): both sit one character-choice away from folk-religious spirit-possession and Daoist metaphysics, respectively, and both recur repeatedly (Pentecost narrative and Gentile Pentecost at Acts 10; five occurrences of “the Way”). - 邪术 vs. 神迹奇事/神的大能 (condemned sorcery vs. God’s authenticating power): Chinese folk religion’s accepted category of ritual-practitioner power (法术) does not automatically register to readers as morally condemned, risking a neutral or even admiring reading of Simon Magus, Elymas, and the Ephesian magicians.
- 凡物公用 (held all things in common): uniquely for this curriculum, a biblical phrase collides with heavily loaded 20th-century Chinese political-economic vocabulary (collectivization), a risk with no parallel in the Romans baseline and no parallel in most other destination languages.
- 许愿 (vow) and 抽签 (casting lots): both reuse existing Chinese religious-practice vocabulary (temple vow-bargaining; fortune-stick divination) for biblical acts that must be taught as categorically different, requiring mandatory clarifying notes rather than relying on the term alone.
- Justification apart from the Law (Acts 13, 15) and the Resurrection/Ascension cluster (Acts 1–2, 17, 23) show the widest cross-tradition doctrinal divergence surveyed (
04_comparative_theology.md), since nearly every non-Christian framework available to Mandarin readers (Confucian virtue-cultivation, Buddhist karma, folk merit-accounting, Daoist immortal-ascension) retains exactly the kind of earned-merit or cyclical-rebirth structure Acts repeatedly denies.
Opportunities
- Genuine, carefully-bounded bridge points exist and should be used pedagogically without claiming equivalence: Confucian loyalty-unto-death (忠臣死节) as a bridge for Persecution and Bold Witness; historical Buddhist missionary expansion into China as a bridge for the Great Commission’s cross-cultural transmission pattern.
- Acts’ own narrative structure does much of the doctrinal-distinguishing work already (e.g., the apostles explicitly refuse worship at Lystra and Paul does the same at Malta; Peter explicitly equates lying to the Spirit with lying to God) — Phase 2 translation and teaching notes need only preserve these corrective moves with full force rather than invent new argumentation.
- A single, well-enforced glossary (this Phase 1 output set) converts what would otherwise be 61 independent, error-prone judgment calls per translator into a fixed, auditable enforcement database, consistent with and extending the proven Romans baseline methodology.
Recommended actions
- Load
assets/translation_memory.jsonandassets/doctrine_risk_registry.json(Acts) alongside the baseline Romans equivalents before any Phase 2 segment translation begins; no exceptions. - Route every segment touching one of the 19 Critical-risk or 30 High-risk terms to mandatory human theologian review per the escalation rules in
analysis/12_ai_translation_requirements.md; do not allow automated-only approval for any of these terms regardless of surrounding context. - Prioritize theologian review capacity for Acts chapters 2, 3, 5, 7, 8, 9, 10, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 19, and 28 — the highest Critical/High-risk-density chapters — ahead of predominantly narrative-historical chapters (18, 21, 25, 27) in Phase 2 scheduling.
- Treat the 这道/道 fencing and the 被圣灵充满/spirit-possession fencing as a linked reviewer-training pair, since both concern the same underlying personal-vs-impersonal collision pattern already established in the Romans baseline.
- Carry forward all 40 inherited baseline term entries without modification; any future baseline update to a shared term (e.g. 义, 圣灵, 恩典) must propagate automatically to this Acts package rather than being re-litigated here.